The Fool Doesn't Even Know He's the King of All Women

Well written! The beginning was a bit sadistic. He was abused by the original owner's parents for three years and was ostracized by the villagers. Even if he found the heroine, he would still be suspected by the heroine. Because she was kind to the heroine, the heroine took the protagonist to escape from marriage. After being brought to the sect, the heroine didn't do much and she didn't see him for five years while recovering from her injuries. There is no one to protect him, but the protagonist is a bit soft in character, so he has been excluded a lot in the past five years. Until Chen Juan suddenly discovered the cuteness of the protagonist (it felt like the system knew the plot and wanted to conquer the "original heroine" Lin Wan), it felt a bit sudden, and then the style of painting suddenly changed! Why do you suddenly feel like a queen? , Chen Juan began to pamper her, the elders also recognized her efforts, Xiao Cui liked her even more, and the sect's new genius also liked to tease her. It felt like the protagonist suddenly became the group's favorite, but these are still well connected in a traceable way, so the author's writing is very good! Even if the heroine is not yet enlightened and still pretends to be aloof, I feel anxious for her. Sometimes I think the protagonist should just settle down with Chen Juan, but Xiao Cui can do it too! The heroine agreed to find the protagonist in a few days, but it turned out that it lasted five years (from the protagonist's perspective).

I have to ask, is this pure love label not added by the author? Because not only is there no love, it is not pure either. There are currently 44 chapters. To be honest, there are not many normal people here. There was nothing wrong with what Su He did. Except for her and Xiao Cui, no one else said yes. And this is a two-female story with a confirmed heroine, right? Should I have read that correctly? If you want to say that you are not sure about the heroine and that you are a stock-buying type, then the writing is actually quite good. But, oh, but, do you know that the heroine Su He has an affair with other people, even people who have hurt him? Of course, the protagonist may not think so, but unfortunately, the reader is not the protagonist. After all, what is the main plot of this book? Strategy? I didn't see it. The system suddenly disappeared and the heroine was offline for five years. What is this going to do? Am I reading some nonsensical and everyday article? The plot is confusing. I wonder what the so-called "Shura field" caused by ambiguity is for, and whether there is an emotional basis between the protagonist and the heroine. Of course, it may be my problem. Although in my opinion this ambiguous plot can't promote anything, the author may have his reasons for writing it this way. The above is my opinion on a novel with a clear heroine. It is for reference only and does not represent the final quality of the work. The above content is by no means a negative review, just some questions I have.

A very good-looking work with a little heart-throb (). After the protagonist leaves the village, he realizes that there are many good people outside [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's a classic at first glance, much better than many formulaic Tomato novels. The character descriptions are okay, the plot develops smoothly, and the heroine is constantly growing and changing. I think the pace is relatively slow. I have said it in a few years (you can use this to dig some holes). There are more daily routines. I hope the author can have more climaxes and try to improve the world view, such as the origin and the son of destiny mentioned in the system. Since entering the sect system is not there, the trust value and points will be of great use in the future. If there are a few more story lines and then connected, I think there will be more interesting things. Finally, I wish the author will continue to work hard and update every day [Thoughts]

The book is very interesting, but it doesn't quite match the introduction. Su He felt it was awkward and suggested that it should be strengthened this season. Xiao Linzi is a bit miserable, I hope it will be better in the follow-up, it makes people feel sad to see it. 🥺 Also, the author should work hard and update🤓👍

Can the author write more emotional lines for the two heroines? I can understand that the other characters like the heroine, but can they not have too much physical contact, just kissing, and there is a bullying character who can be easily exonerated. I can't accept it. I believe there are many readers who think the same way. Just look at the comment area to know if this character can be downplayed. I have followed the latest chapter and I still like this book. Changing the bad things will also be the motivation for us readers to continue reading.

Although I have only read the first few chapters, I really want to comment. The author's writing style is really solid. I am also a tear incontinent person and I can easily empathize. I really cried several times when I read the first few chapters😭. I feel so sorry for the heroine. The author's psychological descriptions and behavioral descriptions are really real and well-written. It is worth reading.

Every foreshadowing of the author is handled very well, with details, and the characters are full. From the beginning to the two stages before and after cultivating immortality, he clearly told me two truths. One stage will have its own people, and each stage will have its own companions. When we have to go to the next stage, something will always disappear and new things will appear. Tao 2: I saw your struggle, borrowing strength, and self-reliance, the beginning of your prosperity, and the end of your hasty ending. It is precisely that all achievements are missing, and imperfection is more profound and unforgettable than perfection.

It was well written from beginning to end, but the ending was really sloppy, but the author also wrote the reason in the end and I can understand it! If you feel serious about it, you can write another five chapters, no problem! The author should not care about how many bad reviews there are. There will always be stupid people who come forward to stir up trouble. Many, many people will still like your work!

The faith during military training is so beautiful, the loneliness described is very detailed and real, and the protagonist is also very cute. This is the best book I have ever read. I hope I can torture Senior Sister Su more often. The only drawback is that it is too short and updates are too slow [I almost cried]