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The author has created a magical world of Harry Potter where Wren really exists. They are flesh and blood and full of emotions. I couldn't help crying for their joys and sorrows, and worried about their fate. Each character is very three-dimensional, vivid and full of personality. Their growth and struggles made me empathize with them. I believe that if there really is Wren in the original Harry Potter books, then the storyline will definitely develop as written, which makes me see another possibility, another ending that is different from the victory of death and defeat. It feels like it not only writes the fate of the characters, but also the depth of human nature. To be able to write such a story is not only talent, but also the crystallization of love and sincerity. In short, it is so beautiful [Adoration]

It's great. The three little ones in it are finally not annoying anymore. They listen to people's advice, have high execution ability, and have brains. Although the main heroine follows the three little ones, the storyline is not boring and is very comfortable. God knows how annoying I was tormented by the three little ones in other books. It's just that now the heroine feels that she already likes Sijiao, so how can she have an emotional scene with him?

It's good to watch. It's not as gripping as the plot of the original novel. The four little ones are very warm and cute. The eldest brother is so good at writing. The relationship between the teacher and the heroine is also very interesting. Ron and Hermione don't have so many twists and turns. I want to ask, will Harry and Ginny still be together? ? No one has received the box lunch for Volume 6 so far. Big thumbs up! ! ! It's so beautiful. Why doesn't the foreign persimmon give traffic? I severely condemn it. Please give me more updates I highly recommend it. It ranks among the top five hp stories by Yang Persimmon. The protagonist is not brainless. The real Gryffindor girl is written with the mentality of a child. There is no OOC in Sri Lanka (I think so). The whole staff is very considerate and very comfortable to read. Just one sentence. Please update! !

Super pretty [blowing kiss] There's an age difference between my two favorites, Si Jiaowen [shy]

This great book should be read by more people! So pretty! Highly recommended! But when I found this book, there was indeed no rating. It must be because it is a new book and not many people read it. I only watched the ending, and I liked the feeling of reading it in one go. The writing is really good, especially the author's analysis of Rui En's feelings. I feel that that chapter is very good, and the feelings are dealt with very reasonably and logically. It is a rare and good book. Endless aftertaste. I may review it after two or three brushes. First like this! Highly recommended!

The writing is very good, very real, and the author's writing style is great. It is the least OOC image of Snape among the HP fanfics I have read. I hope Wren and Snape can live happily in another parallel universe.

The heroine in this book is quite normal. She doesn't like the heroines in other books. She likes blind spots from the beginning. The emotional line is very delicate and not as abrupt as others. Moreover, the three hours in it are not as annoying as in other books. At least she can understand human speech. Although Snape is This decision carries more burdens. The heroine in this book is quite normal. She is not like the heroines in other books. She likes blind spots from the beginning. The emotional line is very delicate and not as abrupt as others. Moreover, the three hours in it are not as annoying as in other books. At least she can understand human speech.

As a huge HP fan, Snape has always been the character I find most difficult to get along with. He fascinates me and pains me. So I started writing about Wren - a bold, lively, and even a little "unprecedented" Gryffindor girl. To be honest, I struggled for a long time before writing the article. Snape is too complex, and it would be too easy to overturn such a character when it comes to writing it well. But I hope to see someone crash into his cold cellar and tell him in the most direct way: You are worthy of being liked and worthy of being loved. After I actually started writing, I felt that the writing became smoother and smoother, the pages became longer and longer, and the plot became more and more complex. Not everyone can accept this setting, but what I want to say is - In the eyes of a thousand readers, there are a thousand Hamlets. Everyone has their own understanding of Snape and the ending they want to see. I chose to write the version in my heart: a Severus Snape who was still gloomy, still awkward, and still covered in scars, but who was finally willing to be loved and dared to love. Fan creation is an adventure about "possibility". Plant your own imagination in the cracks of the original work, and no matter what kind of flowers bloom, they all deserve to be respected. This story is my first fanfic, and it can be regarded as a love letter to Snape! I hope that everyone who reads it can also feel the courage of "knowing that you can't do something but doing it". Maybe no one will see it, but it still has a beginning and an end.

I feel like the best hp fan 🍅 There is no inexplicable hatred of the lion house, and there is no reason to fall in love with the snake house. Everything feels natural and should happen Goldfinger is not too strong, nor is it particularly sadistic. The lunch boxes are all kicked away, and the relationship between the heroine and Cedric adds a bit of character to her. She is not just a character in the novel, but a person who may live in a parallel world. As a book fan who likes ss but doesn't dislike or even love Lion Academy, the details of this fanfic really respect the original work and there is no academic discrimination. I love it!

It's a very good book, why don't many people read it? The female protagonist is a native, although her life experience is not good, she is heading towards the bright future. That's pretty much it in the introduction. The plot is compact and the relationship comes naturally. The identities of the male and female protagonists add a lot of ups and downs to them, and there are also very sweet moments together!

The heroine is like a living person. She is not a formulaic person. She falls in love with the professor out of nowhere. How can she not long for the light when she comes from darkness? Just like Snape once longed for Lily. Like it very much. Come and see all the good-looking things

Why do you still have feelings for Cedric when you already have a crush on Sri Lanka?

This Harry Tongwen can be said to be one of the higher quality ones I have seen on Tomato in the past six months. I rarely shed tears just because of a character in the first few chapters (maybe my tear level is a little low). How many people can't let go of Snape? Maybe having a home in a parallel time and space and no longer being alone would be a good ending.

I like the character of the heroine. I think she is a smart and cute girl. The various complaints and venomous tongues are also written so well that I secretly copied them. Hehe

It's the first time I've seen the Iron Triangle turn into a square and I can't help but copy the original text. The protagonist also has his own [love] in his own life. Ling, Bowtruckle is so cute! ! ! ˗ˋˏᰔᩚˎˊ˗

By the way, how many chapters are there with Cedric?

I watched the beginning and thought it was very interesting. I will review it after watching it. Stay up late to catch up! This HP fanfic has so much stamina, who knows! I was just taking a casual look, but ended up diving into this pit. Let's talk about the heroine's setting first, it's so touching! The descendant of a traitorous Death Eater, he is a true Gryffindor, with a really brave and lively character. Especially when her first reaction after discovering that she fell in love with Snape was to escape, it was so true! Who doesn't panic when faced with this kind of forbidden love? And then there's our Professor Snape! It really hurts my heart to the core. He was still the poisonous, mean potion master with billowing black robes, but in front of Wren, his "no", "get out", and "imprisonment" all turned into awkward love words! The author is so good at writing about the kind of forbearing affection, such as giving an Arctic fox brooch, improving the elixir of good fortune, changing the patron saint from a doe to an Arctic fox... Every detail is like a knife, slowly piercing my heart. At the end of the battle, when he cried and hugged Wren in front of everyone, I burst into tears! This Sri Lankan man who has lived in the shadows all his life can finally embrace his love in the sunshine! And Dumbledore is not a kind old grandfather here. He has his calculations and ruthlessness, but I think it is more consistent with the original work. After all, he is the White Devil. And Cedric's extra story, in a world without Wren, he was the first warrior to die [crying][crying][crying][crying] This book can also be considered a group portrait. Hermione's intelligence, Harry's growth and burden, Ron's sincerity, and even Malfoy's struggle in the cracks are all written out, and everyone has contributed their own highlight moments. There is also Pickett, who is simply a witness to the love between Sri Lanka and the heroine [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Anyway, it's very pretty

I've already used it three times. It's really beautiful.

It's great to watch. It's very beautiful. The heroine doesn't steal the show or forcefully add to the scene. She doesn't fall in love with her for no reason. It's very beautiful. I highly recommend it.

The writing is very good, and it reads smoothly. There is no deliberately crafted wording or sentences. The story is very real and the plot does not deviate much from the main line. It would be nice if the love line progresses more slowly.

It's very interesting. The stories inside have changed.

It's an interesting development direction. I like having a vivid heroine instead of just a cure!