Note: You can read this with your brain switched on. The protagonist keeps his aura of superiority throughout.
This is my debut work, so it has quite a few flaws, but it has its strong points too. The part I’m most satisfied with is the beastfolk world.
[Original myriad-worlds setting + near-invincible protagonist + fast-paced]
The first Six Domains world is where the protagonist begins building up his strength. It’s the weakest part, so you can skim it.
After that, Yu Jian creates a tiny world to sort through what he has gained.
Then come the True Dream World, the Abyssal World, a return to the True Dream World, the Monster Beast World, the Vast Realm, another journey through the Six Domains, the Sacred Heaven World, the Yishen World...
In the Six Domains world, he is a good-hearted man who gives out opportunities to help others, all to obtain information about the laws.
In the True Dream World, he enjoys a stretch of leisurely, peaceful days.
In the Abyssal World, he’s a sly schemer out to steal demon cores.
Returning to the True Dream World, he helps the world resist a dual invasion by monster beasts and the abyss.
The Monster Beast World...
The author feels that what you are writing is not a novel, but an outline 🤦
When the protagonist comes out of the world, he is in the Tianyan stage. Why is it that he is in the Taoist stage after that?
Small food and grass, set the party Great start, but a bit shabby at the end
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Although I didn't watch or listen carefully, I would look up occasionally. It can be seen that the level is not low, but it didn't keep me engaged, so I gave it four stars.
Very nice. Love to watch. Very nice. Love to watch.
OK, OK, OK