HP: the Sick Man Becomes a Heartthrob

I have read all the contents of the first grade. The heroine is a Ravenclaw student. Hogwarts still likes the 80 Geniuses. The heroine was selectively ignored and ridiculed by many people at first because of her illness and maverick, but she didn't care because she couldn't understand () hahaha It has changed my view on Quirrell. In all the fanfics I have read so far, he is an unremarkable character. His description is just to attract Voldemort. However, this book is different. It describes Quirrell not just as a submissive person, but as a misguided genius. I also realized that he is an excellent Ravenclaw.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. Professor Quirrell's short clip made me cry. The big brush strokes make Quirrell more three-dimensional. I also saw a different Quirrell. The if line at the back also fills up the regrets [send heartfelt]

I wasn't very serious about writing books, so I didn't pay much attention to it at first, but then I found that more people were reading it, so I started to take it seriously. Yes, I am actually very holy. Every time I analyze characters, I try to make them more three-dimensional and fuller. But maybe my writing style hasn't achieved that effect yet. Anyway, the author said that it is updated frequently, so you can open it from time to time and take a look. Yun Shu is the protagonist in my novel. Maybe she started off a bit miserably, but I really don't have a fetish for sadism! Her subjective consciousness may be more about believing that the world is kind, which is related to her growth experience. I have never seen many people who are scheming with me, or people who are scheming with me, or they are doing it but I don't know. So Yun Shu is the same, not so sensitive, as if his eyes have been opened. What I want to say is that it doesn't matter whether you like her or not. She is the heroine in my novel, and I write everything. She is always positive and energetic, as strong and vital as the lush vegetation, and as firm and upward as the vines.

It was very good. To be honest, I cried when I watched the Quirrell part. I also read their comments. Quirrell is an outstanding graduate of Ravenclaw. He is a Ravenclaw. How could he not see that Yun Shu was lying to him? He never thought of involving Yun Shu in the game. If he hadn't encountered Voldemort, maybe he would have become bigger and stronger in the field he was good at. I really hated him when I read the original novel, but I have changed my mind now. Putting aside his status as a Death Eater (probably), he is really a very good teacher. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, this book really designs the characters very well.

It's very interesting. Whether it's the plot or the protagonist, the author has drawn up rich characters. The heroine is very smart and in line with the style of Ravenclaw. She does things without pretentiousness and is neat and tough. The heroine's academic achievements are also very good. The heroine's outlook on life is also very upright and she cares about the original owner. I like Yun Shu very much. The plot is compact and there are no particularly outrageous or embarrassing plots that people want to avoid. The system is also relatively humane and does not force the heroine to do outrageous things. The plot between the heroine and Professor Quirrell touched me very much, and Lockhart's behavior was not OOC and irritating at all. I also hope that the author will continue to work hard and not give up. As long as the emotional scenes with the male protagonists are not blunt and the novel is shaped according to the previous ideas, I believe that this novel will become popular (from only more than 2,000 readers to 19,000 readers now), I am also very happy for the author. I also hope that the author will get better and better and be happy every day ღ(✞╹◡╹✞)ற) This is my first time to comment on the poor expression of the writing. Please forgive me.

"I wanted to teach her more. I could have been like her." There is no need to say more about the greatness of this book [crying][crying][crying]

The characters are rich, the plot is compact, and the content is rich. The author's text not only focuses on the protagonist, but also on supporting characters like Quirrell. The last paper really directly deepens the characters of Qi and Shu. Shu is also a very charming person, the kind of good friend who is willing to make friends actively. The article also reveals Shu's ideological reform movement in the magical world later, which reflects the in-depth connotation of the entire article. But I feel like the writing is still a bit green, but overall it's pretty good. I hope the author can persevere [Like][Like][Like]

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful. Well, let me briefly explain why I continue to watch this thing? Because the character you wrote, the author, is very much like me to some extent, and very much like what I have read. The white moonlight made her look like the unattainable bright moon in the sky. Although that book is finished, I have read it almost 30 times, but you are not finished at all. I can still continue to follow it, haha, I feel like I will cry every night. The writing is also relatively good. Great, keep it up! You really look like her in this persona, but she has perfect scores in science and close to perfect scores in liberal arts. She is a genius who is more of an all-rounder than an all-rounder. But this book is different, this book has parents

The writing is really good, so good that I can't describe it in words😢The Quirrell part is really regrettable, but I know there is nothing I can do about it. The teacher's writing is really great. I really want to cry when I read it. Teacher, the overall emotion is really very delicate, and the plot is also great. I didn't feel any discomfort during the whole process. I hope the teacher will keep going like this! ! ! This article is simply a masterpiece! ! !

The only book I wrote a rating for just after I finished reading it in the first grade. As someone who (I think) has read a lot of HP fanfics, this is a very good story. I'm personally quite picky. I didn't pay much attention to the old time travel setting at first. I didn't expect it to become so addictive. I feel good about the author's description of emotions. At least it made me feel sad and sympathetic to Professor Quirrell who met his best friend but was forced by authority. The pace of the story follows the story line and the development speed is moderate. There are also some interesting daily stories about the heroine's personal development. At least it makes me, who is impatient, quite comfortable. 😋🙌 The heroine has a naughty customer service system like an eldest sister (?). She also has parents who still love her even after two lifetimes, and she is also very smart in her studies. It's refreshing [laughs] Uh-huh, in short, it's very good. I will be very sad if no one sees the excellent work👊

Shu Shu's character is very good, and the character image is relatively full (Qi Luo's part made me cry). However, sometimes he felt unhappy because Shu Shu was isolated and bullied, and felt a bit useless, but that basically disappeared in the later stages. Overall, it's pretty good ~ it would be better if the author updated it more

This book is great! The author writes superbly! I managed not to stay up late for more than half a month, but recently I was always recommended books that I found interesting, like those written by the author, and I couldn't sleep after reading them. It's always in the afternoon, and it's already past 2 a. M. After I finish chasing. I particularly like the protagonist's interactions with other people. It feels very soothing, and the author is also very rigorous in writing in some places. There are many small details, and the article feels particularly easy to make people feel immersed in it. The characters are also handled very well. When I watch it, it feels like real people are getting along with each other in front of me. Everyone has their own personal characteristics. He has his own thoughts, the letters written by readers to Wusanda, and the feelings shared are all very real. I especially like this feeling, because since I read the novel, I feel that many villains and supporting characters also have their own lives, so when they make a certain decision, it must be due to reasons that happen in life or their own personalities. But some articles fail to express this feeling, and are very... Blunt. I originally wanted to write a novel like this before. In fact, I had a rough outline, but when I was writing it, I found that I couldn't think of any interesting plot or smooth writing. In addition, I thought I was the type who found it troublesome after just writing for a while, so I gave up... The protagonist is really nice, a comforting and normal-behaving human being. Someone who can think about things from other people's perspective is simply the kind of person I really want to meet. Moreover, the introduction of many new things for the protagonist is very natural, without much sense of fragmentation. The writing is great, I really like it, I hope the author will work harder! You are the best!

This book really deserves five stars. It's simply great. It's something that stands out among so many fanfics with similar routines. It gave me a new perspective on many villains, such as Quirrell and Pansy. People have two sides. We often ignore their bright spots and only grasp their dark sides to criticize. The author really made Quirrell's image fuller. I was very moved when I read it. I had a mixed feeling. The author's writing style is obviously improving. Al may have been used in the first few chapters, but it was clearly carefully conceived in the later chapters. The heroine has been growing and progressing from being out-of-body and lively at the beginning to being wise, calm, but cute now. The plot is really good, and the emotional line is very natural. It is not said to be forced together. I kept thinking while watching it. The heroine is sapiosexual with Theo, has a long-term relationship with Harry, and is the obsession of the soul with Ced (?) There are many male guests, I won't go into them one by one here. I have read more than a hundred chapters here, and I really can't help but give a good review. The finished article looks very reassuring (ღ˘⌣˘ღ) The author has worked hard🌹

Overall, it is very comfortable. The writing is online and has a very gentle style. The plot is not too protracted or too compact. It is just that the early stage is relatively green, and the later plot has little relationship with the introduction. It is recommended that the author revise the introduction to make it more attractive and mention the highlights and highlights of the article, such as the system that Shu Hui did not drop, such as Shu Hui's identity as writer Wu San, such as Shu Hui's time travel, etc. It is best to list Shu's harem at the end so that readers can be prepared. If you don't think about it, you can also mark the harem that has appeared first and then put an ellipsis. Highlights: The emotional description is delicate, whether it is about the love line of Theodore and others, the family relationship with another Shu, or the teacher-student relationship with Quirrell, they are all beautiful. The minor characters in the original work are well portrayed, such as Quirrell, who has almost no plot in many fanfics, but here he is no longer just a tool man, but also a good Ravenclaw boy who has gone astray. Possible highlights: There are more Eastern elements, and there is a small amount of dark OOC plot in Said. Is it relatively useless in the early stage? Wait. The tradition of Hogwarts is still there, and I still love the 80 students. I feel that Shu and Luna should be able to talk to each other quite well. Make a Wish, it feels like Shu is leaning toward redemption and the protagonist? After all, being able to travel through time can change many tragedies. I hope the author can take care of most of the minor characters that no one cares about, such as Neville's family, Sif's mother, Petunia and other characters. Their lives are too miserable. Make another wish, I feel comfortable enough to put on a few more vests and write ggad fanfics. The first article is a sweet article "Midsummer" and the next article is a sad article "The Tower", revealing that the legendary duel in the wizarding world is actually a breakup of love... But I feel that I will be beaten to death (bushi) if I write it, and I will die of embarrassment if I am caught.

I feel that the heroine is very smart. If I become her friend, I think I will become smarter.

Very nice! The story is also very strong. I don't understand Deng in this article, and he seems to be more indifferent.

After reading Chapter 44, I feel that the heroine is an extremely charming person, and I will be very happy to be friends with the heroine. Is a very good book

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression pictures😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome 😘It is God and it is my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world map meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony on the 0th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist and I am so cute The tears won't stop and the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that it will flood into the Qiantang River 😈 It sounds so good 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, and I realized that God does exist. I was so good that my tears didn't stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water [Crying R]

Love to watch! It doesn't stick to the original plot, and the author describes every character, good or bad, in a very three-dimensional way, especially Quirrell. I've seen a lot of hps that incorporate oriental elements. To be honest, it's quite difficult to integrate them. It's easy to make them nondescript or embarrassing. But I think this article doesn't have this problem at all. There are many jokes in it. It's very comfortable and happy to read. I hope we can see our drag brother play more roles in the future. Hey, come on, author!

It's very interesting. The plot is smooth and not draggy. The heroine has a system, but the system is also more humane and does not force the heroine to do things. The character of the heroine is very good, she has the intelligence of a Ravenclaw, she does things neatly, and she is strong and upright. The characters in the original work are not OOC, there are some emotional scenes, but they are not ridiculous. The relationships between the characters are natural, and there is no abrupt emotional shaping [Like] [Like] The author writes the plot of first grade Quirrell in a different way. It also made me feel that Quirrell is particularly suitable for the character creation of Ravenclaw ❤️ There is no OOC, and the plot of Quirrell moved me very much [I almost cried] Fortunately, there is an if line in the back, which smoothed my inner feelings. The heroine's oriental character doesn't look like other books, which is very shocking. The exchange and integration between East and West is also natural. The author's writing is generally very good, and his writing style is also good. Looking forward to the following plot ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

I quite like an HP fanfic that matches the main plot. The plot and plot are very interesting. The main character is a Chinese high school student. I didn't know much English at the beginning, hahahaha, but I feel more immersed. The author is very good at writing. Keep up the good work.

I particularly like this book. The development of the heroine and Theodore is very natural. The content of the story is more novel and literary than what is on the market. I especially like the content of the submission. Then there is the friendship with Theodore. The Eastern academic content discussed with Professor Quirrell is very good, and the published papers are also very interesting.

Super pretty! 😭A very warm ending, the plot is logical, and the characters are believable. In short, it is very, very good! This is the first time I've left a review for a book, and it's also the first time I've read a book with more than 300 chapters. It's always been great! I didn't say that I found it boring after seeing it. And the development of the plot is also very novel. In addition, the author's writing style is also very good! 😭TOP1HP in my heart!

What should I say? The heroine has her own ideas and everyone around her loves her. It wasn't very good at first but then it got better orz (everyone go watch Notebook Soup and ☁️ get along!! This is an order!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [adoration] Such a delicious article, I eat eat eat eat eat [admiration] The author has more to say: not enough to eat, not enough to eat, not enough to eat [shy] This article is so well written [Blow a kiss] I hope it won't stop updating [Blow a kiss]

Nice! ! ! Very novel subject matter and angle, very comfortable to read [shy][shy][shy] And I also like How to Train Your Dragon very much, hehe, the fantasy linkage belongs to [shy][shy][shy]

Quirrell's story goes to Oita! ! ! This is really reasonable. It is rare to encounter people who analyze Quirrell. Overall it's pretty good. It's just that there are a lot of things about cultivation... I don't like this kind of cross-painting style stuff (I haven't written an introduction yet)

It looks good. Can I not have CP? I feel it would be very inconsistent to have CP.

It would be embarrassing if this kind of subject is not written well, but this article is very good in terms of description and character setting. It is neither Long Aotian nor bad.

This book is very beautiful. Well, I feel it is very beautiful. What can I tell you? It's just beautiful, right? Uh, I'm trying to make up the number of words. You know, if it's good, just make up the number of words.