A Text About a Pokémon That Has Been Fattened Up
It's not stupid, the plot should be as reasonable as possible, and it shouldn't be cute or cute. Real men should watch macho men like Boss Cordora and Big Steel Snake. The word count should be over a million! ! !
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The subject matter is quite good, the plot is a bit awkward but overall it is very good and fits the Pokémon world view. It's just that the details are not well described. It feels like the outline is laid out directly in some places. I suggest the author think about the emotional details and psychological description, which will be more empathetic and attractive.
I have simply read 10 chapters, and I have a good impression. The writing style and sense of immersion are very good, but the data feels a bit poor. This may cause the author's updates to be unstable. I hope the author will not stop updating [crying] Holy shit, I just discovered that I was also following the author's last book, but I forgot about the reason for the last book. This book is also very good-looking. I really like the author's writing style. I hope the author will continue writing.
I've read a few chapters briefly and I think it's okay. I can read it again later. But author, does this book have a female protagonist? If so, who is it? [Chigua]
It looks good. It's good to keep writing at this pace [laughs]
I saw the shadow of Lin Yi in him
It's really good to read. I read it as soon as I saw the author's new book. I highly recommend it.
I am back to working on screws and writing novels. [Cover face]
So far it looks pretty good
They are quite good-looking, but they don't know how to be eunuchs.
It's really nice to watch, but there are very few comments at the end.
This book is so fragrant. Although you are a little bit poisonous, it's okay.
It's pretty good, author, come on (ง•̀_•́)ง
After viewing more than a dozen pictures, there are no big problems overall. Is a good book
Not bad, very pretty