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I was quite pleasantly surprised that I came across a relatively good-looking article. In fact, I feel that this culture is more suitable for the emotional line as the supplement and the career as the main focus. To be honest, this is the first time I want to have a protagonist who is uniquely beautiful as a dual male protagonist. Mainly because I felt that the system was too cool and the protagonist had a very cold personality, which made me feel like I was having a career failure. This article is still very good, but due to the author's unfamiliarity with tomatoes, which resulted in a loss of traffic, I don't know whether the author's purpose of writing this novel is for life or for hobbies. But I still hope the author sticks with it and writes it to the end, in full.

This article is very good, but I read some comments while reading it. In the Xiaobai Graduation Trial, there was so much hostility in the comment area. I don't understand it. Some people accused Gong, saying that Gong is useless and weak. I want to say that Gong and Shou are not adults yet. Ah (I remember it should be like this), Gong is already very, very powerful compared to the others. What can they do in that situation? Shou can be reborn many times, and Gong only has one life. He must let Gong go first. I am furious ꐦ≖ ≖ I hope some readers can read the article carefully before commenting, thank you [grievance]

This is a story about two male protagonists. The two male protagonists are CPs. Lin Bai is a time traveler. He was originally a medical student who traveled to this world. When he was 6 years old, he contracted a little white tiger. Then the awakened system opened his path to invincibility, as well as his good friend Long Yicheng. In the end, the two of them became CPs, Lin Bai was the one below and Long Yicheng was the one above.

The plot and writing are okay, but the sentence breaking and paragraphing need to be improved. Take a passage from the original text as an example: [How many more powerful men will there be? Will the pressure on the alien beasts be reduced as a result... Lin Bai thought indifferently: The empire is stronger, the alien beasts threaten less, and the troubles will naturally be less. For him, it just saves him some effort in cleaning up the miscellaneous fish. His journey has never been between these mundane gains and losses. Can be changed to: [How many more strong men will there be? Will the pressure on the alien beasts be reduced as a result... Lin Bai thought indifferently: The empire is stronger, the threat of alien beasts is less, and the troubles will naturally be less. For him, it just saves him some effort in cleaning up the miscellaneous fish. His journey has never been between these mundane gains and losses. (Just a suggestion, if the author is not used to it, he can follow his own habits)

Lin Bai and Long Yicheng had a good fight. It's really beautiful. Big cheers for the author. 😍😍🌹

Cococo So far, I have read Chapter 18. I feel like I can get into it. The pace is fast (●'◡'●) Every time I watch the battle, it's a bit boring because it's a long section. I don't know how to adjust it. Or is it the author's setting (=ＴェＴ=)

It's okay. Both protagonists are pretty good. I really love this system. It protects the protagonist. "Those who bully my host are unpardonable." , So handsome Tongzi [Like]🥰 It's two male protagonists, they kissed [I learned] Oh, by the way, I think there are too many exclamation marks, which still affects reading. I hope they can be changed [Note][Note]

I haven't finished watching it yet, but I've really fallen in love with it, especially when the system takes action. It's so handsome and domineering. Although it makes me embarrassed to watch it, it's really fun. Gah gah gah gah

Feel good about myself

The author's worldview is so perfect. I hope the author will continue to work hard [shy][shy][shy] Looking forward to the new book

It's not like falling in love and feeling like it's going to be devastating [face covering]

Very nice, come on

It's so cool, it makes me scream

I like the best to join forces [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [admiration] [admiration] [blowing kiss]

The world view is good, but it gets stuck in the first few chapters. All I can say is that the protagonist is a good person.

It looks good, but there are too many exclamation marks [exploration]

It's very interesting. Please keep updating the author [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Although the fighting scenes are sometimes exaggerated, the plot is very good

The writing is very beautiful, thank you very much! (It would be better if more intimate plots could be written) [Shy][Blowing Kiss][Admiration]

I really love the character of the male protagonist. Both male protagonists have their own uniqueness, and the plot is not confusing. I really love this book [full]

It's very interesting, please give it a try, author

It's pretty cool, come on!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I like the author's writing

Teacher, I love you

Give a five-star review to support the author!

The author, I would like to ask, is it tearing the void to enter a new interface? Looking forward to it

It's good, but is the atmosphere too heavy?

The most powerful system, showing its overlord spirit. I haven't finished watching it, it's too depressing sometimes

Two male protagonists, different world, upgrade