In the Real World of Adventure, Support Is the Most Important Thing!

Personally, I feel that the plot is a bit cliche, and the characters are a bit too artificial (too vivid, they don't feel like real people, and a bit unreal). The writing is very good, and the details are very detailed, but only a small part is used as foreshadowing. Too many details make me feel a bit boring. At least here in Tomato, I think some details are not necessary. Although the author said that it is a slow-burning novel, it still needs some refreshing points to support me in reading it, or to write some secrets about the entire worldview early to make the audience curious to read on. The excitement in the early stage was only when the protagonist group completed the mission and was paid to buy things, but it was soon suppressed by new difficult missions. I didn't enjoy it much, and the salary had to be used to buy new equipment. I did this several times in a row, and I really felt uncomfortable. As for curiosity, I only felt a little bit when I did the mission for the first time, but I still didn't see the secrets about the world view, and I really couldn't watch it anymore. In summary, there are too few exciting points, little curiosity to support me to continue watching, and too many unnecessary details, which makes it really difficult to continue watching. It's also possible that I felt something was wrong, my will was not strong enough, and I didn't see the wonderful things. Since the author writes seriously, I also comment seriously. I give four stars because I really think the writing is very good, but... (Please refer to the above) This is also my first comment on Tomato. It is purely my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

No spoilers. . . . . With a score of about 9.1, The author's character portrayal of the protagonists and main supporting characters is still very good. There are no peeing spots, and the rhythm can be as high as 9 points. The plot is classic but breaks through the classics, giving people a feeling of "I seem to know what will happen next, but I still want to see what surprises the author can give us." The plot is cliche, but this book is a classic. This is not a ❤️pot article. I hope the author will not write it as a ❤️pot article! The battle is still very exciting. Overall, it's worth a read. It's a Michelin-level side dish. With more words, it's no problem to use it as the main course. Good luck, author! @ Salted Fish Ken who is not doing his job properly

The current early stage is pretty good, but the character descriptions are a little too delicate, and there are a little bit of poison, but not particularly big ones. It's just that not many people may read this subject, and I don't know if the author can stick to it. 25 Years 09.24 Follow-up review Alas, he has a physique that can kill monsters with a single blow. When he encountered someone asking for help at a distance of 500 meters, he was not sure what was going on and should not go because there were no thieves in his team. And who is the thief who laid the foundation for this? He lived a small life through petty theft, and even stole the protagonist's most important space bag, which contained food and alchemy teacher's inheritance badge. 500 Meters, with the physical fitness of these warriors, I would like to ask, do they need 2 minutes to run? Does it take 5 minutes to go back and forth? I say 5 minutes because this is a dungeon and the terrain is not flat. It's already slow enough, isn't it? This is a classic fake mercy plot. In order to show that the protagonist is not the Virgin and is not willing to die, but for the safety of his teammates, he does not help, so he returns to the Adventurer's Guild for help. . Under normal circumstances, the corpses of people asking for help would be completely cold. Have you ever thought about a question? The current protagonist group does not need this description, but this situation occurs simply because you need this thief to join the team and the foreshadowing is poorly written?

The author's novel reminds me of a real alternate world (Grimgar of Fantasy and Ash). It's a pity that it's delayed, author, please work hard to write a true otherworld novel that is better than Jumonji Ao [Like]

The description is detailed and the content gives people a creepy feeling of empathy. Anyway, when I saw the standard speech of the shield warrior in Dashan, I felt like I got goosebumps. I hope the author can keep writing.

Book title: "In the world of real adventure, support is the most important thing!" Author: Xianyu Ken who is not doing his job properly As a time-travel novel in a different world, among the foreign persimmons with many cool articles, the protagonist serves as an assistant without plug-ins, and the team grows up in the cruelty of the other world with a small amount of warmth. The writing of life in the other world is exquisite, and each person's personality is also very vividly depicted. In short, this is a novel that can make people cry in tears! The shortcoming is that it is not enough to watch [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

A very excellent Japanese light novel and Western fantasy work. I personally think it is much better than Japanese Western fantasy light novels. The first volume has just been completed, so this review will be based on the first volume. The plot is very well written, and every link is so smooth that you can't stop reading it. I even squatted down to read this novel and my legs became numb and I knelt on the ground... There are some places that feel a bit too coincidental, but they are all within the normal range, even much less than other books, but it is closer to reality. Reality is always full of coincidences. All in all, the plot of this book is very smooth. It does not make people feel abrupt when sudden dramas occur, but makes people feel that it should be so. There is nothing wrong with this development. The character setting is also very good. Whether it is the protagonist group or various supporting characters, it seems that they all have their own distinctive characteristics and personalities, and they will not make people feel stereotyped. Especially the protagonist group. Although the first volume has just ended because the time span is not very likely, it is only a little more than a month, so the changes and growth are not that big, but the progress of several people and the emotional changes at each point in time can be visibly felt, which I think is very vivid. As for the remaining issues such as team relationships, combat power, world view, etc., After all, the first volume has just ended and we have left the prison and gained freedom, so it is difficult to draw direct conclusions, but as of now, there are no problems, they are all very normal, reasonable and without any surprises. And reading the author's comments, I can feel that he has his own specific settings and outline of the future, so I feel quite reassured. The final summary is: this book is a rare story about ordinary people traveling through different worlds, and it is written in a smooth and reasonable way that makes it easy to read. If I had to give a more specific evaluation of this book, it would be that if this book was on a paid reading platform such as Qidian, I would be very willing to pay to subscribe + vote. It is an honor for me to see this book on Tomato.

I have been a bookworm for ten years. The pace of the whole book is very smooth so far. It is very comfortable to read on Tomato. The male protagonist has a good character and is very responsible, and the supporting characters are also well portrayed by the author. All in all, I feel very comfortable reading this book.

I searched through the entire Internet to find the latest Western fantasy novels. Those who like to read Western fantasy can use it as a fairy grass. The protagonist group travels to another world to become cannon fodder at the frontier. With the panel profession, they start as assistants and gain a foothold in the kingdom step by step. The group portraits are very detailed and have the warmth of a big family. But there are also tears and a grand and epic background. The map is large, the combat power is not broken, and it focuses on the alchemy aspect. (The only drawback is that there are too few updates and it is not enough to read, so I have no choice but to write a book review. I hope Xianyu Ken will do more for the sake of good reviews [crying]) @ Salty Fish Ken

I really like this kind of real combat adventure story that is close to the people at the bottom. It has the struggle to face life, the fear of death, and the feeling of Gremlin in gray and fantasy.

A very good Western fantasy novel. The writing style is above average, but the character portrayal is very distinctive and distinctive. It uses limited text to render the characters' images well. It is essentially a group portrait novel, and the protagonist brings together each of the main characters, and it has a bit of a dark dungeon flavor. Not bad, it has potential [Like] A good book. It is still an out-and-out good book even now. I hope it will get better and better.

I really like this kind of traditional Western fantasy novel. There is no excessive cheating. There is no cliché intrigue among the protagonists. Everyone has a unique personality charm. They will not blame each other and will shoulder their own responsibilities.

It's a pretty good novel, very much like the anime gray and fantasy Grimgar. The narrative is detailed and describes the real ancient living environment without exaggeration. This is a rare good article. It's a pity that it may not be possible to fire in tomatoes. In a world where Tomato is invincible, brainless and cool, it should only be tepid. Those who like delicate writing will leave a mark, at least I have collected it. This book definitely has a following. But fire is impossible. Not even Black Fire, there's nothing dark about this book haha. Overall it's a good book and worth reading. If you like brainless and invincible Wen, you can leave quickly. This book is suitable for those who can endure it.

It's beautiful! It's my favorite team style, and each character has a distinct personality. There are just a lot of typos, but it's not harmful. I just don't know if the protagonist's team will add new members in the future, so the author is hurrying up!!! There are fewer and fewer updates. Have you, the author, fallen? [Anger]

It's a very good book. I was a little skeptical when I saw more than 40 pictures with a score of over seven points. But after reading it, I felt that the score was still low. The protagonist group is very real, their IQ is always online, and there is no poison. I really hope that the author can update less and ensure the quality. Now it is a bit high and low. It is not about the content, but it is repeated more. Sometimes the words are contradictory.

The book is still very good, and the first choice for high-quality rations (I have a little idea about the direction of the protagonist's ability development, just for reference, let the protagonist develop in the direction of an alchemist, and at the same time develop bomb-making ability and practice throwing training skills, which can also cooperate well with the team, and the potion ability is also a guarantee of the team's strength. By the way, can the protagonist develop magical abilities? It can be healing or defensive abilities without output) It does not necessarily have to have much brute force, but it must have a certain ability to protect itself (similar to the DND bard? This is also an all-rounder in the team. Of course, the main attack is also the auxiliary ability in logistics support [eating melon]) In fact, maybe the protagonist can be like the protagonist Sheyan in Final Evolution [eating melon]. I thought that the auxiliary MT can also improve the protagonist's self-protection ability (mainly I thought of it after seeing the protagonist being injured in the mission [face covering]). Of course, it is just a suggestion.

A very nice group portrait article with various occupations. The writing style is not bad. The protagonist group is not very strong at the beginning and gradually grows. I hope the author can keep updating it. I hope the author can write three chapters a day [Blow kiss] At the end, I want to ask again, can I hope that there will be no heroine? [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

Different from the previous values ​​​​in other worlds, the overall content is very slow and relatively new, so it is very good so far. It's just that the title of the novel is a bit off-putting, I feel like the author could have come up with an exclusive IP. I hope it can continue to be updated without eunuchs [laughing][laughing][laughing] (Don't spray if you don't like it)

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful, no need to say more I finished reading the first volume in one go. From the depression in the early and middle stages to the beginning of preparing the escape plan, it was very enjoyable. Although there were some flaws in the details, it did not affect the overall smoothness at all. It was really refreshing. The breath I was holding back in the early stage until the moment when I discovered the secret room left by the previous team when they escaped, it was so satisfying. I haven't read the second volume yet. I hope it can adjust the tense pace. It's been too long and it's time to enjoy the life of a real adventurer.

The rating given by the system is too low. It's only 6.6 Points now I feel this book has a score of 9 or above on Tomato The novel is to my liking. It is not a cool novel, but a very real and cruel life of a mercenary adventurer. It has the feel of a Japanese fantasy light novel, which makes me feel like I'm reading a fantasy novel from the game Battlefield Brothers. Brutal adventurer battles and daily life, equipment maintenance, potion making, in order to survive, accumulate gold coins to upgrade equipment. The price control in the novel is reasonable for the time being. I look forward to this novel getting better and better as it gets written!

It would be terrible if we could maintain this quality and update it stably. The description is very delicate, but it is too delicate. I am afraid that one day the author will suddenly burn out [face covering]

I am writing a book review after reading three volumes. This is the first novel I have read that is similar to Gray and Fantasy, multi-person time travel + bottom-level adventure team. I like this type of novel so much. Here is my review of the first three volumes. Volume 1: Being summoned to a different world and found to be a consumable, and then successfully getting rid of the fate of becoming a consumable. The bond with companions and the help of some people is very well written. Nothing poisonous Volume 2: After the protagonist's group escaped, they helped the second wave of summoners. Because of the protagonist's help, the second wave of summoners still maintained their conscience after taking revenge. The cause and effect was very well written. Disadvantages: The second volume has nothing to do with the protagonist group. It is just a daily study to make money. The third volume: The dungeon adventure with the Rough Guy Team was also very exciting. After I met Miss Thief, many comments did not like this character very much. But to me, the writing here is very good, and the main character is handled well. After all, the profession of thief feels to me similar to that of black Americans. I can understand some minor problems, after all, the environment is there. She also regretted it later and tried her best to save two summoner teams. The protagonist accepted her without asking any questions. Disadvantages: After encountering danger in the early stage, I hired a top silver-level knight in the middle and late stages. After that, there is no danger at all when taking risks, because I know someone can take care of me. And regarding money, the protagonist can make money, but it is almost impossible to exchange for some of the materials he wants to improve the team's combat effectiveness. Most of the materials still have to be explored by himself in the ruins. Later, I plan to recruit a gold-level adventurer. I hope there won't be a big boss to lead him. If there is no danger at all, is it still an adventure? It is better to study alchemy in the alchemy room. -------------------------------------------------- Although there are some problems, I still highly recommend this novel. Let's see how the fourth volume of Insect Disaster goes. Can anyone recommend a similar novel to me? I really can't find it. Preferably one million words or more, thank you! [Cool]

Nice! The protagonist group is not the kind where one person carries five pendants. They will all grow. I haven't seen any bad points so far. The current progress allows me to read it in one go. It will be very comfortable and there will be no sense of fragmentation.

Well written. It has new ideas, starting from a small point and unfolding slowly. It does not have the impetuousness of the usual Western fantasy online novels, nor does it have the sour smell of those old and smelly socks that are often associated with Western fantasy. Very good, come on, author!

Except for the slow update, there are no disadvantages. The angle is novel, the details are meticulously drawn, and the title is novel. The writing is good, but I don't have the money to give a big reward, otherwise I'll give you a few [laughing][laughing]

A brief discussion of "Adventure World" Personal overall rating 4.5/5 (Good-looking!) (Recommended reading) (Summary of personal reading experience, don't criticize if you don't like it. The author updated it to chapter 358 when writing this review) First of all, let me say that the world can breathe for three reasons: 1. Author's thoughts The world's power system, economic system, and racial thinking have obviously been considered by the author for a long time, and you can see a bit of "false" and "historical weight" in the reading. The characterization is also quite vivid, and the plot direction is also very good. The characters' actions have intuitive drives and motivations in the context of the world. 2. The author's writing skills One of the author's strengths lies in the adjustment of the atmosphere. When watching, you can feel the tension of this plot, which shows that the author's writing skills are not low. When creating characters, we usually use side descriptions and then direct characterization to make readers intuitively feel the characters' personality characteristics. Using side details to shape a character's image allows readers to "see" a character more intuitively in the text and create a "soul", while direct characterization allows readers to have a more basic understanding of the character's image and create a "skeleton." 3. Counter-routine (may be minor, please read as appropriate) In general "The Brave and the Different World" works, the "brave" often comes to the world with powerful "plug-ins" or "inherent skills", but in this work the protagonist does not have such power. And unlike mainstream novels that focus on individual heroism, where the protagonist mostly assumes the role of "auxiliary", this novel is more of a group portrait novel that cares about teamwork. This kind of anti-routine is first of all eye-catching, and secondly, it allows readers to directly experience the process of the team becoming stronger, and it also creates a stronger sense of bonding and participation. Secondly, there are 2 shortcomings in this book. 1. First of all, although the characterization and description of this book are excellent, it makes some scenes seem a bit complicated. This is actually a trade-off. When the team portrait wants to emphasize everyone in some scenes, it will lead to such a situation. Most of the time it is appropriate, but in some cases it still seems unnecessary. 2. The anti-routine in this book can make readers shine, but at the same time, it may also bore some readers. The protagonist does not have a fighting ability that exceeds that of ordinary people, but this is what many readers want to see, and this may seriously deduct points for some readers. Secondly, the development of the book's worldview and the advancement of the large-scale plot may be a little slow in today's fast food era, which may cause readers to be impatient. To sum up, the pace of this book is smooth and the ups and downs of the plot are clear. The writing is delicate and clear, but there are some shortcomings that do not hide the flaws. Not to mention the first choice, it can also be said to be the best choice. Dear readers, this evaluation is only a personal opinion. Please consider whether to adopt it or not.

I have watched an anime before, called Gremlin of Ashes and Fantasy, and I have always regretted that the anime was no longer filmed. This novel satisfied my regret very well. It is a real different world, Goldfinger is reasonable, and it is not overwhelmingly refreshing. I hope you can finish it. Don't lose it after writing half of it. Keep writing it completely and your score will go up.

The first few chapters were a bit slow and depressing, but as the situation and world view of the protagonist group expanded a bit, it became more and more interesting to read. It has a feeling like "Grimgar of Fantasy and Ash" and a sense of reality in the world. I look forward to the follow-up.

The organization is clear, the logic is smooth, the descriptions are delicate, and there are no brainless jokes. It is a gray fantasy theme that favors group portraits. The whole book is very comfortable to read. There is basically no poison in my eyes. The only shortcoming is that there are too few more. It has great potential.

It's very real. For the first time, the protagonist may be struggling to save the day like a roadside NPC in other worlds. Leading the team from a slave-like existence to becoming free and even growing stronger, but now we have just seen the protagonist regain his freedom.