Who Wants to Be a Coolie NPC?

How to say it? It can be seen that the author is very thoughtful and has a more than average imagination. The only shortcoming is that he likes to make group portraits too much. We are here to see the protagonist, not other characters (summoned characters are not included). And the author, if you are a novice, don't imitate other great masters' foreshadowing techniques. There are too many pitfalls and it's easy to get lost. I casually read the next few chapters, and I can clearly see that the author has made some progress, but he still hasn't gotten rid of the problem of group portraits. Author, from your 500,000-word manuscript, it can indeed be seen that you want to write a good story, but sometimes it is useless to work behind closed doors. You have to listen to the readers' opinions, for example, have less group portraits and more roles for the protagonists. I hope these words can bring some inspiration to the author, and I also hope that the author will not let other people's comments affect his own creation. I look forward to the day when the author finds what he is really good at. Also, don't think too much. Your brain is very, very good. Summary: This book has many poisonous points in the early stage, but the author is working hard to improve it. The word count is expected to exceed one million. I look forward to the fourth volume mentioned by the author. Come on Come on [smile]

If it were a book world that the protagonist traveled through [laughing]

My impression is very good. The only flaw is that the plot of the protagonist is not well connected with the plots of other main characters. If this is solved, it will be a proper five-star. I really like the author's funny plot.

To be honest, I felt a little bit blown away when I watched it, especially the scene with Pete, it was so CS. I'm really sorry. I originally wrote this book for behind-the-scenes purposes. I didn't expect the protagonist to be so popular. The third volume is already halfway written and I can't change it. I will write a volume specifically for the protagonist in the fourth volume [face covering]

Human nature is just the opposite, but it is not the case. I don't think so. It is expected. I would like to hear the details. It is true. It is true. It is true that soldiers are valuable and quick. The opposite is not true. It is reasonable and reasonable. It does not have to be like this. I disagree. Why do you say this? This is the fact. This is true. How to say it, think twice before acting, listen attentively, never tire of listening, hear something you have never heard before, full of interesting things, that's great, then let me ask you, let me tell you, listen to it, the secret of heaven is not revealed, how can it be so, the law of heaven is difficult to tolerate, people and gods are angry, this statement is wrong, it is a big reversal, it should be like this

The first volume is not suitable. I haven't watched Family Guy or The Cyanide Show, because I don't have any skills in the second volume. Although the author often makes the protagonist disappear for about ten chapters, One Day 5 makes up for this shortcoming. Unlike some authors who obviously release the contents of these two or three chapters at once so that no one will criticize them, but they have to only publish one chapter a day.

The writing is very good, but the main character disappears from time to time. I hope the author changes it. Feeling Disappeared 2 chapters is enough. Come on

A good book, the plot is very innovative, but I almost died, and it made me laugh inadvertently.

It's really beautiful [Blowing Kiss] Author, keep writing and don't be influenced by others, just write whatever you want [Adoration], it's really great [Blowing Kiss]

Epilepsy, all epilepsy, a little bit of epilepsy is good

The protagonist's skills are indeed very strong, but when he meets me, his sword will be the worst thing [I learned]

A good novel that I feel is better than The End of the Day

It makes me laugh so hard, please show more [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's good to watch. Although the main character disappears from time to time, it can't stop it from being good to watch.

Very good funny novel

. Last summer

It's very beautiful, why is there no rating?

I doubt the author's mental state. The writing is so good that it can make me laugh to death.

The good thing is that I follow at least three pictures every day, but I can't tell if I can finish some key models [smile]

The elements are complex, but perfect