I, the First Emperor, Scan the Health Code at the Market

It's hard to read. If your writing style is neither ancient nor ancient, you can either write in pure ancient Chinese and let capable people read it, or you can write in pure vernacular and tell the story clearly. What are you writing here? Even if you can't understand it, it still feels very disconnected. The story has no smooth flow. The story in the previous chapter leads to the next plot, and the next chapter suddenly comes, which is confusing and confusing. No matter how the story is, please write it completely, smoothly and clearly, so that readers can feel less pressure to read.

Better looking than expected. Holy shit, you didn't leave in the end? All right. I can only accept it. Maybe even going back would be a lot of hard work. Anyway, we would soon be in the happy Han Dynasty. Letting our ancestors stay in the modern age and enjoy their happiness can be regarded as a happy death... After all, little Kalami like us always want to be emperors. Maybe the real emperor doesn't care at all... I always feel a little tired of comparing ancient times with modern times. It feels like a child writing an essay in sections when he was a child. One paragraph is one paragraph, and the context has no connection. This method is quite unique for writing books, but if it is rare, it means that it is not good and no one will read it, and the later stage is not as good as the early stage. He has been giving various life insights to the First Emperor. The realization made me tired. I am a person who is several decades old, and I am gaining insights every day, but I still have the same insights... Even if I don't have anything new to write, it doesn't matter...