The Qi Refiner of the Warring States Period Lived for Two Thousand Years

Evaluation after reading forty chapters Top grade grain and grass This is a potential new book that is close to a small masterpiece [Sending Hearts]. The author has written the cliché settings of Qi Practitioners and the Age of Ending Law very well. Although there are not many documents that can be verified on the history of the Warring States Period, it can still be seen that the author has carefully researched the data and made his own adaptation. He has cleverly reduced the number of supporting characters who directly portray the appearance and used more things to bring out the characters. This is actually what fictional historical web novels should do. After all, there are many characters. In fact, we have a basic concept of color. As for the shortcomings, I can personally feel that the efficacy of a pill is a bit weak for a low-demon world. However, many plots are closely related to the pills, and there are some small logical bugs in the writing. The pace of the plot is fast and slow. The author has a slight sense of superiority for future generations to see the ancients. The overall impression is still very good. Keep up the good work and update [Sending Hearts] Personal subjective rating: more than half three stars [making faces] Follow the entry-level bookworm Smoked Fish to take you to read online articles [Blow a kiss]

It's really a rare high-level start. This book is beyond the scope. Come on, the author.

This book is considered to be a mid-to-high-end article in my several-year writing career. It has a unique style and unique insights, and the plot design is closely integrated with history. At the same time, there is no lack of reasonable secondary creation. In the end, I just hope that the author will continue to update it. I know that good writing naturally needs polishing, and I just hope that the author will stick to it [laughs]

This book is different from ordinary fairy tales. It is a combination of history and fairy tales. The subject matter is very novel and the author's writing is good. It is currently being serialized and I have just tied it. Those who like historical themes can also come in and take a look. It is really well written! 5 Star recommendation!

It's a very good book. I hope I can continue to write it well. If you like "Poor Ghost...", You can read it. It really writes about the ruthlessness of rolling history. The laws of nature are consistent. They will not survive for Yao or perish for Jie.

It's very comfortable to watch, not toxic at all, just too little [almost crying] I pressed the author against the wall, pulled off my tie, tucked the hair on the side of the author's face behind his ears, lifted the author's chin, slowly came closer, and said to the author in a magnetic and charming voice, "Can I ask for an update? [Licking screen]

Generally speaking, there are no bad points. The protagonist may have some contradictions, but so far it is a good work. At least it is better than other so-called 9-point reviews on Tomato. As for the problem of the heroine that many people talk about, I think it doesn't matter whether there is a heroine or not. When will having a heroine become a deductible item for a book?

It's good-looking, it's really good-looking. As a time-travel immortal novel, a man takes history and does not change history at will. Many people say this is poisonous. In fact, it is not the case. How can the long history be changed by the power of one person? So what if it changes? History will always repair itself, and changing history is a big cause and effect, so just be a bystander and participate occasionally.

I saw this post again after seeing the comments and replies. How to say it? In terms of writing style, I think it should be considered a top-notch Tomato book, and it is one of the few books that I have read every day. To be honest, this book should have ended at the time when the heroine died. Until then, this book has at least a 9.3 To 9.4 Rating in my mind. Unfortunately, the author's concept has always been too narrow. In the end, I suspect that it was forced to read because of the pace. Earlier, I saw that the protagonist changed a lot of small trends when he had certain abilities. For example, I wrote Jing Ke to fake his death and retire. At that time, I thought that the protagonist would change small trends when his abilities were small, and change the general trend when his abilities were great. However, the author did not do this. He seemed to be a firm believer in maintaining the historical current, or he would not write the changed history at all. I retreated when I saw Zhuge Liang retreating in seclusion after his death. I can accept that you used one retreat to avoid changing the general trend of national peril, but you can't do this every time in the future, right? I don't know if it's due to the pacing, but the protagonist kills very hard from behind, but in the end it treats the symptoms rather than the root cause. This is essentially a fundamental conflict between the author's writing ideas and the readers' ideas. Regarding the shaping of the protagonist, until now I vaguely remember when he first became the last sacrificial wine to stand up for the people of Qi. At that time, the protagonist had just entered the immortal world and did not have much means at all, but he dared to speak for the people in front of the army. This was a successful creation. So when I wrote about the Three Kingdoms, this issue became increasingly clear. When a foreign tribe attacks, do you save it or not? When the Qing army invaded the Central Plains, didn't you save them? When the barbarians invaded in the Yuan Dynasty, didn't you save them? When the Japanese invaded, didn't you save them? Your protagonist, the being who was praised as the Taoist ancestor, and the image he originally established should have collapsed. You saved it, and the author doesn't know how to write it. So the sooner we get to the Three Kingdoms chapter, the better. Some people in the comments said that the protagonist is the second Yi Xiaochuan, but I don't think that is accurate. As far as this book is concerned, the protagonist has not become like that, or the author is the one whose thinking is biased towards Yi Xiaochuan. It is a good thing that he did not continue to write such a contradictory book, otherwise the 8.7 Points will not be guaranteed. All in all, the quality of this book is still excellent.

I personally think this is a relatively well-written novel. Although the protagonist is a person who has traveled through history, he did not rely on his immortality and ability to change the larger history. Instead, as a witness and bystander of history, he did not change the larger fate of others for his own selfish desires. Instead, he did his best when various characters died. Fulfilling what the deceased wanted to witness, or the last wish, is also an attractive feature of each character. Each character does not blame others for not being able to live forever. Each character also has its own charm. Anyway, it is a better novel for me. I hope the author can continue to work hard to maintain (ง•̀_•́)ง Come on

I saw the latest chapter (Chapter 122) currently updated at 21:11 on September 14th. I still feel that this book is okay. The protagonist is not invincible and immortal at the beginning. Although I know that the protagonist will continue to live forever, the description of the state of mind of immortality and the description of what happened in the middle of this book are still quite good. Yes, and then there are themes in history. The general trend of history has not changed, but the endings of some characters have been changed. It is quite good, and it gives me a good feeling. And although the protagonist is cultivating immortality, he is not like the fantasy kind of immortality, which is invincible as soon as you start cultivating in the world. The protagonist also slowly accumulates and becomes stronger.

So far, they are quite good, and the writing is very tasteful, but don't fall into the cycle of self-impression. Most authors of this type of articles have a common problem. Writing becomes the emotion that serves themselves, regardless of the readers' perceptions.

The author writes very well. He writes about the immortal cultivators in my heart from ancient times to the present, and also writes about the thoughts in my mind about traveling to ancient times. The book circle is full of time-travelers who competed with princes, generals, or kings as soon as they arrived in ancient times. There are also other immortal cultivators, but in history, they either licked the Emperor of Qin or other famous historical monarchs. The common people of the world or the hegemons of the dynasty act as if history would not be possible without them. They all regard themselves as the protagonists of historical development, and they are indispensable. However, the author of this book is very objective, rational, and has his own ideas. It is good that we are destined to witness the long history.

Recommended by old bookworms. It's not suitable for those who like cool writing. The pace is quite slow, but the logic is very good. I personally think it is of high quality. I just don't know how long it can be. For those who want to read books, forget it. It's easy to read. Finally, I have a good book called "Bie Huo Huo". The book shortage is hard to cure.

Very nice. The training system is innovative, and there is a fairy-like flavor between the lines. The protagonist is not invincible in the world, but he is unique in his own way and his skills are high enough. I originally thought that in the end I would tell the First Emperor that he failed to pass the test of the gods and would never live forever, but the result was that "Zheng'er, don't make trouble", emm, it's a bit too clever, but it's acceptable.

So far, the protagonist is in a complicated situation, sticking to his heart, going with the flow, and seeking immortality. The story is not complicated. The author's writing is very good and it is very comfortable to read [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Now reading, the author's writing style is sophisticated, the framework is clear, and the plot is smoothly connected. [Learned] It is suspected that a great god opens a trumpet. The writing is excellent in this genre and on this platform! It's a pity that the author suffered from inflammation and stopped reading after the operation. It has been more than a month and he is probably going to the uterus!

If nothing unexpected happens, the later part is not as good as the previous one. It is difficult to describe the majesty of history in just a few words. It would be great if Fu Bao could be divided into two books when he left. The protagonist in the front is Liu Chuan, and the protagonist in the back is Taoist Master Lingbao. If Fu Bao and others can meet again in reincarnation, please give it a kick [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Among the many novels written by Tomato, I finally have one that I can read.

The content is very novel and the writing is very good. Just a little bit. Dear author, you mentioned that the main character's junior sister is a female protagonist. I wonder if the interaction between the protagonist and the junior sister in the subsequent development can be more about family and friendship rather than love. I think the protagonist's character is too bland and not suitable for a vigorous love like in other romance novels. I think they are now respectful to each other, and the development of unsatisfied love on top of friendship is very good. Can you please not write their love like in other love novels? Please [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

The so-called longevity essays are just written by many people from their own perspective. Nothing has been shaped, and they are empty and tasteless. History books are not written by you. I feel that this book is well written because it avoids the problems I mentioned above. It is insightful, detailed, and emotional. After all, Liu Chuan failed to fulfill his promise to Zheng Fubao and others [crying][crying][crying]

Hello, author, I am the Douyin blogger Xiarenfan. After reading your novel, I think the title is very suitable. I want to buy the copyright to use it as a continuation of a new work. The name of the new work is "Preface to Immortality". The copyright fee is negotiable, and if appropriate, the work can be launched early next year.

Generally speaking, it's more than food and less than fairy grass. But for readers who pay more attention to history and cultivation, it may be a bit uncomfortable to read. Another issue is the writing style. This is a bit difficult to tell the truth. Haha, it is neither modern nor ancient. The author also prefers to use some poems. When stacked, there is an inexplicable flavor. This is also the tragedy of Tomato and other authors. I've read Chapter 156 so far, but I feel like the author doesn't have an outline? Or is it that the outline only covers the first few dozen chapters? The latter part was mostly written based on a momentary feeling, and the gap with the previous part is a bit too big. As a result, I now feel that the author is trying his best to push the plot forward and finish the new book quickly. As a result, small flaws have never been resolved, and the climax has never been enjoyable, like Zhuge Liang and Fu Jian.

The book is very good, I read it in one sitting. If the author has no ideas, he can learn from the book "Two Thousand Years of a Poor Man", which provides the same immortality, but without the cultivation of immortality. Think about Emperors Qin and Han, Emperors of Tang and Song, the Three Kingdoms, and the Ming Dynasty. I don't know how enjoyable it is to write all of these. Remember to hit Li Bai and Du Fu, look at the talented Shangguan Wan'er, and look at Zhang Jiao's Fu Shui. This kind of subject is really interesting.

Well written. That feeling of being far away from reality. Interfere without interfering. The core is to stay in the 21st century. This book can still maintain the standard. There are many paid platforms that are willing to pay

A very good novel, worth recommending He practiced immortality, but after fighting, he transformed into two meters tall. What the hell?

It's a very good book. It's comfortable to read. It's a rare masterpiece from Tomato. I hope it can maintain its standard. Witnesses of the long history have to experience the death of their loved ones. I hope that Fu Bao's knife can be thought of more.

The world setting is novel and interesting, the story rhythm is tight, the author's writing is sophisticated, and the characters are vivid and interesting. The novel vividly portrays the spirit of the scholars at the end of the Warring States Period. They were brave and heroic, kept their promises and righteousness, and sacrificed their lives for righteousness. It was very exciting!

It's really frustrating that such a beautiful book only has a score of just over eight points. This book is not inferior to the famous work of a great master, or even better! Some masters just happened to plant the first flower in the barbaric era of online novels. Although the flower may not have enough fragrance, it is still the first flower after all! And this book is about seeking immortality in the Dharma-ending era, which is similar to the Jedi Heavenly Power. It is more difficult than in the barbaric era! Encourage! I hope the author maintains his standards!

Not bad, not bad, it has that taste, it feels a bit like watching the poor man who lived for five thousand years before [laughs][laughs][laughs]