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I really like the material, but the AI ​​questions are too dense and there are too many modifiers. My head hurt when I listened to the book, and I couldn't find the key points for a long time.

I think it's pretty good. You can tell at a glance that it's a real MC. But I don't know if it's because the author is a newbie. The protagonist is too gentle. I hope he can be more ruthless in the later stage.

The writing is quite satisfactory. If you are short of books, you can check it out. As an ordinary invincible novel, there should not be many mods of this type to unlock. I found a lot of MC novels and just a few. You kid, you made him look like a cat girl, and when he came out, the whole chapter looked very strange, a little too poisonous.

It's okay. Those who say it is weakened, have you considered that this is a multi-module book. If it is so powerful at the beginning, the subsequent modules will be dispensable. If the author writes a purely original version, then I think it is indeed weakened, but this one has modules. Do you dare to say that it will not be powerful in the later stage? Finally, there is a MC article that can be read. I don't want the author to be tied up because someone said it was weakened. I will support it first.

Author, it's so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, So good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good It brings me back to the feeling of reading novels in 2019 I'm almost at the end of it now, but I've discovered something that's a bit unacceptable to me. 1. What the substitute gave him was meaningless, but gave it to a master who could completely control him? I haven't found out what he wants to do now, maybe it's just a simple word count 2. The system has its own consciousness and can do whatever the host wants. As you can see by forcing the protagonist to teleport to Gensokyo, the protagonist cannot resist at all. I hate this feeling that the protagonist has no control over his own destiny. When I saw one person's rating, I felt it was very appropriate. The protagonist was completely working. I finally found out why I felt strange. Working for the system seemed very uncomfortable. 3. The protagonist suddenly said that his divinity was almost full in the first few dozen chapters, and did not mention this issue of divinity later on. I don't know what happened, and the protagonist's personality was a little too different. The front and back were completely two people (personal opinion) 4. What does it mean to add this maid (soul?) To the protagonist's own double? A no-name stand-in?

Overall it's good. But it feels a bit AI, is it just me? It feels like there are many scenes that humans would not deliberately describe, and for example, when introducing the method of obtaining the laws of the world, it is also followed by English, and I feel that no one will go out of their way to say it.

The introduction reads Invincible Flow. But in fact the protagonist is not invincible.

I think the writing is pretty good except for World Travel. I jumped right into Demon Slayer and Zhizhi. I heard them say that the writing was frustrating and overwhelming, so I didn't read it to comment. But the writing by the author of Void is pretty good. The author might as well write more original copies [Chigua]

Suppression, desperate situation, breakthrough, self, proof, peak, shackles, answer, dependence, end, interpretation, calmness, adversity, self-confidence, infinity, break, dilemma, questioning, reversal, temper, limit, stagnation, illusion, result, will eventually win, calmness, break away, restriction, field, pinnacle, past, farewell, memory, shackles, broken mirror, fragmentary, inferior, gap, details, talent, breakthrough, interpretation, talent, focus, calmness, details, techniques, escape, mentality, upper limit Break, stop, suppress, break free, calm, escape, see through, reversal, what is destined, break, hope, bear, despair, question, fall, suppression, technique, desperate situation, breakthrough, self, proof, peak, shackles, answer, dependence, end, interpretation, calmness, adversity, self-confidence, infinity, break, dilemma, question, reversal, temper, limit, stop, illusion, result, final, aspiration, calmness, break away, limitation, field

Before the problem of dissolving human nature appeared, the writing was quite satisfactory. It was also good after that, and the integration of multiple elements was considered harmonious. But this is Tomato, so the quality is very good. When it comes to the content before the subsequent survival game (it seems to be the first time I continued to write), the writing style started to become a little bit It seems weak, and after the first meeting with Thunder Mosaic Wings Ball (at that time, it seemed to be the second long-term break from updating), it became even softer, but the writing itself is not bad. I can only say that it was dragged down by no one reading it, no traffic and no push. Thank you to the author (＾ω＾)💪🏻

The plot is pretty good and not too sinister (maybe). The plot is basically the same as other MC books. It's quite interesting. In MC time travel, this book can also be said to be of high quality (after all, MC time travel books have either stopped updating or been cut off halfway).

As a My World Travel book, to be honest, except for the top few books, there is no possibility of competing with them. It can also be ranked on the list, and it is still recommended. The writing is good, and the protagonist's image is relatively positive. Full marks can still be given.

The first part was okay, but in the later part I felt that the protagonist was too heavily influenced by his past life relationships, and there was no way a businessman should handle it.

The current plot is very smooth and the writing is good. It's worth watching [laughs]

Why is the score so low? To be honest, I think it's about 7.5 Overall. It looks good, but I feel that the transaction frequency is too low, and the equivalent exchange is too expensive. After all, to be honest, many things are exchanged for the world origin. You rarely use the equivalent exchange thing and it's already very stressful to have the world origin for everything. It looks really good

Yes, the protagonist can use tricks, but he is also like a nanny. Personally, I feel it is above 8 points. Of course, there are very few written about it now. I can keep reading, and I feel a little bit excited after reading it, that's all.

In order to understand this novel, I read both Tokyo Ghoul and Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba [smile]

It's good, interesting, and I personally think it's good-looking. The protagonist is a normal person, with normal outlook on life (not included in MC), and follows the trade-rescue stream. The current demon slayer and ghoul have made up for some regrets, which is good. Making imperfect stories perfect is the greatest value of time travel. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

It's rare to see a Minecraft fanfic with such a large world view and such a high level of combat power. As long as it doesn't collapse in the later stages, it can be regarded as a good masterpiece. I read 67 chapters in one go. Overall, the AI is a bit heavy. I could remove those English words that are too watery. It's a very good book. I hope the author will write better and better [Blow a kiss]

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What about custom Steve mods? Isn't it fun to use it when playing games?

It's quite good, but it's a new book and not enough to read.

The previous ones are pretty good, but there are some problems with the 40k ones at the end, but they are not bad. Most of the problems are quite normal. They are some common rumors about Warhammer in the past. The author can probably read more about a bowl of lobster soup. Warhammer Croro and others have refuted the rumors.

It's not bad. In Minecraft, this theme is pretty good. If Lao Huang doesn't update Minecraft, I can't find any meal replacements. Now I finally found one that works, but there are too few people to read it. I don't know if the author can stick to it.

The freshly released MC text is very delicious [smile][smile][smile] The content is all about the stars I like. It's so great [laughing]

Hey, this is good There is no need to suppress combat power, just let the items have their original effects. Successfully gave MC players a sense of superiority ( This is what I want to see. Jpg

Come on, big sister who loves sketching [laughs][laughs][sends my heart][sends my heart] (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡[Send heart][Send heart]

I didn't want to give a score, but I found out that the author had not given a score yet [Thoughts] I wonder why the forty-plus chapters are so engaging? It turns out there are so many words in one chapter [Thinking]

Very good, the main character's outlook is okay. There's nothing toxic about it specifically, just don't let it suck.

It's good to use the perspective of the protagonist, the emotional description is in place, the character design is maintained well, and the description of the characters in other worlds is in place. Now it depends on the daily output and quality.