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I really like the material, but the AI ​​questions are too dense and there are too many modifiers. My head hurt when I listened to the book, and I couldn't find the key points for a long time.

I think it's pretty good. You can tell at a glance that it's a real MC. But I don't know if it's because the author is a newbie. The protagonist is too gentle. I hope he can be more ruthless in the later stage.

The writing is quite satisfactory. If you are short of books, you can check it out. As an ordinary invincible novel, there should not be many mods of this type to unlock. I found a lot of MC novels and just a few. You kid, you made him look like a cat girl, and when he came out, the whole chapter looked very strange, a little too poisonous.

It's okay. Those who say it is weakened, have you considered that this is a multi-module book. If it is so powerful at the beginning, the subsequent modules will be dispensable. If the author writes a purely original version, then I think it is indeed weakened, but this one has modules. Do you dare to say that it will not be powerful in the later stage? Finally, there is a MC article that can be read. I don't want the author to be tied up because someone said it was weakened. I will support it first.

Author, it's so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, So good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good It brings me back to the feeling of reading novels in 2019 I'm almost at the end of it now, but I've discovered something that's a bit unacceptable to me. 1. What the substitute gave him was meaningless, but gave it to a master who could completely control him? I haven't found out what he wants to do now, maybe it's just a simple word count 2. The system has its own consciousness and can do whatever the host wants. As you can see by forcing the protagonist to teleport to Gensokyo, the protagonist cannot resist at all. I hate this feeling that the protagonist has no control over his own destiny. When I saw one person's rating, I felt it was very appropriate. The protagonist was completely working. I finally found out why I felt strange. Working for the system seemed very uncomfortable. 3. The protagonist suddenly said that his divinity was almost full in the first few dozen chapters, and did not mention this issue of divinity later on. I don't know what happened, and the protagonist's personality was a little too different. The front and back were completely two people (personal opinion) 4. What does it mean to add this maid (soul?) To the protagonist's own double? A no-name stand-in?

Overall it's good. But it feels a bit AI, is it just me? It feels like there are many scenes that humans would not deliberately describe, and for example, when introducing the method of obtaining the laws of the world, it is also followed by English, and I feel that no one will go out of their way to say it.

The introduction reads Invincible Flow. But in fact the protagonist is not invincible.

I think the writing is pretty good except for World Travel. I jumped right into Demon Slayer and Zhizhi. I heard them say that the writing was frustrating and overwhelming, so I didn't read it to comment. But the writing by the author of Void is pretty good. The author might as well write more original copies [Chigua]

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Before the problem of dissolving human nature appeared, the writing was quite satisfactory. It was also good after that, and the integration of multiple elements was considered harmonious. But this is Tomato, so the quality is very good. When it comes to the content before the subsequent survival game (it seems to be the first time I continued to write), the writing style started to become a little bit It seems weak, and after the first meeting with Thunder Mosaic Wings Ball (at that time, it seemed to be the second long-term break from updating), it became even softer, but the writing itself is not bad. I can only say that it was dragged down by no one reading it, no traffic and no push. Thank you to the author (^ω^)💪🏻