I'm Looking for a Pure Love Fairy Who Doesn't Have These Problems with Tomatoes (Preferably in the Next Year)
The old problems that have been discovered so far include: blunt description, rigid plot, poor literary style, everything is too cute, the plot is routine, old topics lack new songs, the characters are flat, old people are everywhere, the language is formulaic, tens of thousands of "one person" articles are published, the theme is vulgar, love is the only way to be true.
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The plot logic is generally not very prominent. There are a lot of typos, and some sentences are not smooth and make me feel a little uncomfortable. The protagonist's characterization is quite good. The characters are also okay and there is no clichéd plot or anything like that. I hope the author can correct the above shortcomings in the future, and after finishing writing, he can check his own text for typos. Or the sentences are not fluent and so on. I'll come back to the review after I've finished chasing it😊😊Now I'll give you a four-star encouragement [Like][Like] The author needs to work hard.
It's well written and the characters have good personalities, but Xiaoxi Pavilion must be a treasure 😘