Return to My Present 2: The Love of This Life

(Subjective reminder to Ruiping) The first feeling this book gave me was a brand new world view (although the author himself said so), which is not very friendly to people like me who come here just to read the follow-up to the first part. It is equivalent to reading a new book with a preview, but it is different from what you expected. Secondly, the level of writing has dropped significantly. It may be okay at first glance, but for those who have watched the first part, they can intuitively feel that it has deteriorated. It is speculated that the author wanted to use a new writing method but failed? Considering that it may be because the author is busy in real life and does not have extra time to polish and optimize it. After all, the author also said that he is a student party, so I will not go into details here. At present, the biggest problem seems to be the narrative. It feels too stiff and middle-of-the-road. It is sometimes awkward to watch. Maybe it's because the author's writing is immature? However, it is not without its merits. The author's description of emotions is still very delicate, inheriting the advantages of the first book, using simple language to describe real emotions, without strong stimulation, but slowing down the rhythm like gentle flowing water, soothing the mood. The characters are also more three-dimensional, and every character who appears is described seriously, giving enough drama. At present, the overall feeling should be still in the early to mid-term. The audience intuitively feels that Tian An and Bei Heng are a couple, but the scenes given to friends are a bit too full. I don't mean to say bad, but in my opinion, friends do not promote the relationship between the two (maybe later). It seems a bit messy at present, and each character is written a little, resulting in the core character not being prominent enough. Everyone is an independent individual, and there is no suitable supporting role to highlight the relationship. As a result, there is not much progress at present, and the future is promising. Summary: There is a lot of room for improvement. At least in my opinion, it is enough to reach the level of the first book. I also hope that the author can make good adjustments to real life during this pause. After all, living people are still more important than novels. I also hope that this period of time can settle down and look forward to returning. Four stars to encourage you.

Sometimes I wonder if I will meet the protagonist of the first movie later.

Is this progress a bit too fast? Slow down a little, otherwise it is very likely that the chapter will be finished before 20,000 words are reached. Slow work will bring out fine work.

Ah ah ah ah author don't stop updating ah ah I've been waiting for the update

It suits my taste 🌚

Yes, it's as delicious as the above (●°u°●)

Let Tingtian An and Bei Heng get together and get married!!!