[Invincible writing, no system, cool writing]
She said that she only had the avenue in her heart.
But I am the Tao.
She said that I had become an obstacle on her path to immortality.
But the path to immortality she longed for was within easy reach, but she pushed it away with her own hands.
She said... She regretted it.
But, it's too late.
When you begged me, I begged you. Now I am the Tao, who are you?
…
The Taoist couple regretted their marriage and the sect expelled me, treating me like dust on the immortal road?
As everyone knows, I am the Supreme Taoist Lord of nine reincarnations!
When the Heavenly Prodigy's fiancée stood high above her and said that we were parted from each other, Ji Wu Jiu transformed into a spirit with a single thought and cultivated to reach the sky with a snap of his fingers!
When everyone in the Luoyun Sect was ridiculing him, laughing at his damaged foundation and cut off his path, the divine elixir he refined at random actually caused a spiritual pet to soar to the ground, surpassing the genius in cultivation!
The whole sect was shocked! It's too late to regret!
When they knelt down and begged because they regretted missing out on the only chance to reach heaven, Ji Wujiu had already walked away without saying a word.
When the whole world trembled because of him, when everyone looked up to him as if they were looking up to heaven, she finally understood...
Reader comments
Known as the useless immortal and the dumb deity
(Wudi Wenzhen does not need to deliberately sacrifice the lives of supporting characters to fill the plot gaps.), Here are the comments on chapters 134 and 135:
From beginning to end, it is a malicious and artificially aggrieved PUA. What is the most ironic thing about writing this way? The protagonist will definitely arrive in the end. After the villain has killed enough, the supporting character has died enough, and the protagonist has suffered enough, the protagonist suddenly arrives, kills the villain in one blow, and the whole audience is shocked. Then the protagonist hugs a supporting character who has just died and screams to the sky.
When the reader looks at this picture, there is only one question in his mind: What did you do earlier?
You either don't let these people die, or you make their deaths worthwhile, such as the protagonist being late because he was entangled by a stronger person, or deliberately trapping him because of the villain's machinations. But what about here? The protagonist is not trapped, entangled, or hindered by anything. He is deliberately delayed by the author. So the deaths of all the supporting characters became proof of one thing: proving that the author can make the protagonist late without any reason.
This kind of arrival on time is more heart-wrenching than never arriving. It tells the reader: these supporting characters could not have died as long as the protagonist arrived three minutes earlier. This three-minute gap is purely because the author wants you to feel frustrated for a while longer. Q
Don't look at the ratings. This is a good book, very well written (many people gave it low ratings probably because of the previous plot), especially the characters in the book, who are full of flesh and blood. When writing about characters, the author never needs to elaborate directly to build up the characters. A look in the eyes, a forbearing word, and a subconscious choice in times of crisis can hide the character's half-life past and inner obsessions. Those who laugh hide their pain, those who are gentle and kind have pride, and those who are silent have sincerity. There is no perfect person with a template, and there is no cannon fodder with facial makeup. Everyone's choices are derived from their own experiences. Joy and regret, perseverance and compromise are intertwined. There are weaknesses, courage, and inhumane thoughts. The three-dimensional appearance is like a real mortal floating on the road to immortality.
All fate in the world is never the unilateral protection of the strong, but the fetters of mutual support and mutual fulfillment. The protagonist and the people around him go through disasters together, resolve their knots together, have disputes and estrangements, and also redeem each other. There are no deliberately sensational scenes, but a deep and long-lasting friendship is accumulated in the trivial interactions. It is said that it is difficult to go far alone, and it is a worldly philosophy that only when you are together can you find warmth.
We always think that Tao is power and immortality, but this book reveals another truth: true practice is also about cultivating the fate between people. The grand world view and the ups and downs of the spiritual plot are certainly brilliant, but the most touching thing is this group of flesh-and-blood fellow travelers. The author's portraits are delicate and profound, and the text is gentle and thick, breaking away from the common problem of fantasy writing that emphasizes combat power but neglects human feelings.
I hope more people will understand the sentient beings in the book and understand that on the road to immortality, all kinds of avenues start from a meeting around them. It's worth reading again and again, and stay tuned for subsequent updates! Q
Fuck, it's so good, the writing is good and the plot is not bad. I have read the suspense fantasy urban online game Tomb Raider, and many, many novels, basically all kinds of genres, except for female videos, history, martial arts, and military. This book is indeed a good one. The important thing is that the characters in it are vivid and three-dimensional. It is not like a running novel, which is easy to forget after reading it. The only slight flaw is Shuangyue. The description feels too deliberate. But it's better than many books. Has the author already written several books?
I would rather I had not read it and waited until a year or two later to encounter this book. Otherwise, it would be so uncomfortable to follow up.
Reminder message
The author stops writing, as if a handsome man has stopped fighting; the readers are raising their heads, as if they are waiting for orders. Gaiwen is like a war, and serialization is like attacking a city. If you stop for one day, the barriers will be weakened, and if you stop for three days, the morale of the army will be scattered.
In the past, Sun Tzu said: "The soldiers heard of clumsy speed, but did not see the long time of cleverness." This chapter is left unresolved, the foreshadowing is hidden but not revealed, like encircling but not attacking, encamping but not advancing, it is not the work of a wise man. Readers are like soldiers, chasing updates like coins, looking forward to updated orders day and night, as if waiting for the strike of thunder.
Moreover, "Soldiers are more valuable to win, not more expensive to last." Wealth is more valuable to continue, but not more valuable to stagnate. I hope the author writes like a sword, and the sequel is like breaking the formation, quickly resolving the suspense, so as to comfort the readers. Otherwise, it would be like using a blunt weapon to frustrate the sharp, and it would be a waste of sharpness.
Good book, good writing style, unlike other invincible books
The logic is very clear, the writing is not bad, and the pace of the story is okay, but the update is slow. The author's mind is not on this book [face covering], but it is actually quite good. The author does not need to be too eager for quick success. I believe if you continue to write, this will be an excellent invincible article [laughing]
It is worthy of a high score. The writing style in Shuangwen has surpassed too many nonsensical fantasy works. It has a broad vision and clear logic. Especially in the discussion of Tao, this article is sublimated. Nowadays, the 7.4 Points are no longer worthy of the author's writing style. Please update quickly, quickly and frequently. Looking forward to (*^o^*)
Listen to 45, a good novel, very good. Hope it doesn't end badly
It's okay, but there have been too many supporting characters written about recently. When the supporting characters appear, they are pretending to be inferior, especially the one who entered the field through painting, and the inferior character is higher than that of the protagonist. I thought I was here to see the main character being invincible, but it turned out that others were just pretending [laughing and crying]
Well, the characters are vividly drawn and have their own characteristics.
Okay, okay, the writing is good and the logic is clear. It's one of the best invincible articles I've read.
It's well written and worth reading. You can see the author's skills.
It's a good read. I hope the author can persevere. I finally found a book that's to my liking. I like the author's description of the group portraits.
A masterpiece, a very good invincible article, but it's a pity that there are only a few of them. The author should write faster.
It's worth watching, but it's too little, not enough.
Hello, author, is there a female protagonist? If so, will it be multiple heroines or single heroine?
Come on author, it looks pretty good so far
I just like to read this kind of invincible novel without system or time travel. Of course, it should be updated faster.
It's pretty cool, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist, more than one, or just one. I'll give it five stars first and then look at it later [I learned it]
It's a very classic routine, and it's good to watch when you're bored.
It's so well written, don't let it suck. Come on.
The nanny is very good-looking, the pig's trotters are very soft-tempered, and the disciples who sit down have no awe and are very impressive. The enemy knows that you can kill immortals, but I am not afraid of you. This is very good [smile]
Super good invincible article, clear logic, good writing style, no harem, but the update speed is too slow, please work hard, author
The writing is very good, but the update is too slow. I hope it won't be unfinished and it should have a beginning and an end. The character of the protagonist is really good. He has the feeling of an outsider. It makes me feel a bit like the Bodhi Patriarch. He is strategizing with every move and every move. It's great. Come on.
I feel like I was too anxious to write it. If I had to break it down, it would probably be around 10,000 pages.
I watched a few of them and found them to be pretty good. It's the type I like to watch. I've given you a good review in advance, and I hope it doesn't get ruined.
It's a very interesting novel, but it's a pity that it's so little written and it needs some time to grow.
I beg you, please update it quickly.
Quite right, I am interested in this kind of writing style and thinking
Good books are the ones that make me laugh out loud when reading
If you like it, just watch it. If you don't like it, leave and change to something else. So far, it's okay.
Known as the useless immortal and the dumb deity
(Wudi Wenzhen does not need to deliberately sacrifice the lives of supporting characters to fill the plot gaps.), Here are the comments on chapters 134 and 135: From beginning to end, it is a malicious and artificially aggrieved PUA. What is the most ironic thing about writing this way? The protagonist will definitely arrive in the end. After the villain has killed enough, the supporting character has died enough, and the protagonist has suffered enough, the protagonist suddenly arrives, kills the villain in one blow, and the whole audience is shocked. Then the protagonist hugs a supporting character who has just died and screams to the sky. When the reader looks at this picture, there is only one question in his mind: What did you do earlier? You either don't let these people die, or you make their deaths worthwhile, such as the protagonist being late because he was entangled by a stronger person, or deliberately trapping him because of the villain's machinations. But what about here? The protagonist is not trapped, entangled, or hindered by anything. He is deliberately delayed by the author. So the deaths of all the supporting characters became proof of one thing: proving that the author can make the protagonist late without any reason. This kind of arrival on time is more heart-wrenching than never arriving. It tells the reader: these supporting characters could not have died as long as the protagonist arrived three minutes earlier. This three-minute gap is purely because the author wants you to feel frustrated for a while longer. Q Don't look at the ratings. This is a good book, very well written (many people gave it low ratings probably because of the previous plot), especially the characters in the book, who are full of flesh and blood. When writing about characters, the author never needs to elaborate directly to build up the characters. A look in the eyes, a forbearing word, and a subconscious choice in times of crisis can hide the character's half-life past and inner obsessions. Those who laugh hide their pain, those who are gentle and kind have pride, and those who are silent have sincerity. There is no perfect person with a template, and there is no cannon fodder with facial makeup. Everyone's choices are derived from their own experiences. Joy and regret, perseverance and compromise are intertwined. There are weaknesses, courage, and inhumane thoughts. The three-dimensional appearance is like a real mortal floating on the road to immortality. All fate in the world is never the unilateral protection of the strong, but the fetters of mutual support and mutual fulfillment. The protagonist and the people around him go through disasters together, resolve their knots together, have disputes and estrangements, and also redeem each other. There are no deliberately sensational scenes, but a deep and long-lasting friendship is accumulated in the trivial interactions. It is said that it is difficult to go far alone, and it is a worldly philosophy that only when you are together can you find warmth. We always think that Tao is power and immortality, but this book reveals another truth: true practice is also about cultivating the fate between people. The grand world view and the ups and downs of the spiritual plot are certainly brilliant, but the most touching thing is this group of flesh-and-blood fellow travelers. The author's portraits are delicate and profound, and the text is gentle and thick, breaking away from the common problem of fantasy writing that emphasizes combat power but neglects human feelings. I hope more people will understand the sentient beings in the book and understand that on the road to immortality, all kinds of avenues start from a meeting around them. It's worth reading again and again, and stay tuned for subsequent updates! Q
Fuck, it's so good, the writing is good and the plot is not bad. I have read the suspense fantasy urban online game Tomb Raider, and many, many novels, basically all kinds of genres, except for female videos, history, martial arts, and military. This book is indeed a good one. The important thing is that the characters in it are vivid and three-dimensional. It is not like a running novel, which is easy to forget after reading it. The only slight flaw is Shuangyue. The description feels too deliberate. But it's better than many books. Has the author already written several books? I would rather I had not read it and waited until a year or two later to encounter this book. Otherwise, it would be so uncomfortable to follow up.
Reminder message The author stops writing, as if a handsome man has stopped fighting; the readers are raising their heads, as if they are waiting for orders. Gaiwen is like a war, and serialization is like attacking a city. If you stop for one day, the barriers will be weakened, and if you stop for three days, the morale of the army will be scattered. In the past, Sun Tzu said: "The soldiers heard of clumsy speed, but did not see the long time of cleverness." This chapter is left unresolved, the foreshadowing is hidden but not revealed, like encircling but not attacking, encamping but not advancing, it is not the work of a wise man. Readers are like soldiers, chasing updates like coins, looking forward to updated orders day and night, as if waiting for the strike of thunder. Moreover, "Soldiers are more valuable to win, not more expensive to last." Wealth is more valuable to continue, but not more valuable to stagnate. I hope the author writes like a sword, and the sequel is like breaking the formation, quickly resolving the suspense, so as to comfort the readers. Otherwise, it would be like using a blunt weapon to frustrate the sharp, and it would be a waste of sharpness.
Good book, good writing style, unlike other invincible books
The logic is very clear, the writing is not bad, and the pace of the story is okay, but the update is slow. The author's mind is not on this book [face covering], but it is actually quite good. The author does not need to be too eager for quick success. I believe if you continue to write, this will be an excellent invincible article [laughing]
It is worthy of a high score. The writing style in Shuangwen has surpassed too many nonsensical fantasy works. It has a broad vision and clear logic. Especially in the discussion of Tao, this article is sublimated. Nowadays, the 7.4 Points are no longer worthy of the author's writing style. Please update quickly, quickly and frequently. Looking forward to (*^o^*)
Listen to 45, a good novel, very good. Hope it doesn't end badly
It's okay, but there have been too many supporting characters written about recently. When the supporting characters appear, they are pretending to be inferior, especially the one who entered the field through painting, and the inferior character is higher than that of the protagonist. I thought I was here to see the main character being invincible, but it turned out that others were just pretending [laughing and crying]
Well, the characters are vividly drawn and have their own characteristics.
Okay, okay, the writing is good and the logic is clear. It's one of the best invincible articles I've read.
It's well written and worth reading. You can see the author's skills.
It's a good read. I hope the author can persevere. I finally found a book that's to my liking. I like the author's description of the group portraits.
A masterpiece, a very good invincible article, but it's a pity that there are only a few of them. The author should write faster.
It's worth watching, but it's too little, not enough.
Hello, author, is there a female protagonist? If so, will it be multiple heroines or single heroine?
Come on author, it looks pretty good so far
I just like to read this kind of invincible novel without system or time travel. Of course, it should be updated faster.
It's pretty cool, but I don't know if there is a female protagonist, more than one, or just one. I'll give it five stars first and then look at it later [I learned it]
It's a very classic routine, and it's good to watch when you're bored.
It's so well written, don't let it suck. Come on.
The nanny is very good-looking, the pig's trotters are very soft-tempered, and the disciples who sit down have no awe and are very impressive. The enemy knows that you can kill immortals, but I am not afraid of you. This is very good [smile]
Super good invincible article, clear logic, good writing style, no harem, but the update speed is too slow, please work hard, author The writing is very good, but the update is too slow. I hope it won't be unfinished and it should have a beginning and an end. The character of the protagonist is really good. He has the feeling of an outsider. It makes me feel a bit like the Bodhi Patriarch. He is strategizing with every move and every move. It's great. Come on.
I feel like I was too anxious to write it. If I had to break it down, it would probably be around 10,000 pages.
I watched a few of them and found them to be pretty good. It's the type I like to watch. I've given you a good review in advance, and I hope it doesn't get ruined.
It's a very interesting novel, but it's a pity that it's so little written and it needs some time to grow.
I beg you, please update it quickly.
Quite right, I am interested in this kind of writing style and thinking
Good books are the ones that make me laugh out loud when reading
If you like it, just watch it. If you don't like it, leave and change to something else. So far, it's okay.