The Redemption of Bat and Lily

It's really beautiful! Every time I see the interaction between Ellie and the Slytherin group, I feel so soft, and the family line with Slytherin is also very natural. The character creation is very successful. Every character is really vivid₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

No, why don't you come and show me this book? The writing is very good, and I didn't feel that it deviated from the character. Everyone's behavior is for a reason, and there is nothing unreasonable. And the plot is really tempting, okay? Especially the first few chapters, I can't stop laughing and make people laugh wildly. It's also very warm in daily life, and the little flowers inside are really nice! Bet all the time and make money all the time. Every stroke of the author's words is written on my heart

Good-looking, not a sister in the traditional sense, but a half-sister. The heroine is the daughter of Sri Lanka.

❤It's really beautiful! Super fun! ❤But the last two pictures are particularly sad. If you don't like them, you don't have to watch them. I've copied some of the contents of the last picture below. All the "abnormalities" that changed the trajectory of destiny because of "Alicia" were either taken back by "accident" or covered by memory. After a brief deviation, the world line was forcibly returned to its "rightful" track. The sacrifices are still tragic and the scars still exist, but there are no longer "variables that shouldn't exist." Severus Snape was still the gloomy and lonely Potions Master, living alone in Spider-End Alley, with no light named "daughter" appearing in his life. Draco Malfoy is still the heir to the Malfoy family. He is shrewd, arrogant, and occasionally arrogant. He maintains a subtle competitive relationship with Harry Potter. There has never been a true love named "wife" in his life. Harry Potter is still the savior and Auror, and there is no half-sister in his life. Occasionally, they will feel inexplicably hollow, be stunned in front of some familiar scenes, dream of blurry green eyes, and their heart will twitch slightly when they hear a certain syllable. But they will never know why. That ray of starlight that shouldn't have lit up once burned so hotly and brightly, illuminating the lives of many people. Then it went out. It was extinguished cleanly and completely. It was as if it had never been lit. ❤It's so cruel! It made me cry. The protagonist was originally a foreign object forcibly created by Snape and Lily. After being rejected by the world, everyone forgot about her. This will be a permanent feeling in my heart! Can someone write an article about forcing he to [cry]

I'm really shocked. The author writes so well and is a junior high school student. This book is my ideal book. I like the Sri Lankan Family Chain, Harry Family Chain, Draco Love Chain, Group Portraits, Funny, I like Harry but I don't like Hermione. Ron has changed the endings of many people (Cedric, the Weasley Twins, Dumbledore, Sirius, Lupin) and strong women. I highly recommend this book, which fulfills all my fantasies about HP. In the end, Lily's entity and the battle between Snape and Potter made me feel like it was supposed to be I give you 5 stars because there are only 5. This book will be at least in the top three in terms of my HP in 2025.

Full marks! The writing is very delicate. The different Sev, Lucius, Xiao Long and Ellie are all good. Harry and Draco have also developed a good friendship. Always has a daughter to inherit. Lily did not protect Sev and left it to Ellie. Ellie's love is overflowing with words and likes to express. Sev is the kind of person who is very reserved but allows you to see it. Anyway, it is a very good writing and it is very good! ! Every morning I wake up and read five or six chapters! Very nice

Ww I have seen more than 300 chapters before! I haven't watched it for a long time and now I'm back to watch it again (I almost forgot all about the www). It's very interesting. The love line is the kind of childhood sweethearts who develop slowly, and Harry will transfer to another college! (It seems that he transferred from the third grade to Slytherin) Later, he formed a new trio with the heroine, Draco! (? Maybe a big one?) This is my first time to write a long review for a novel hhh (a lot of nonsense) Hey, I actually feel sorry for Maomao (the author). I have been chasing it for a long time, I think I started chasing it after more than 100 chapters or something, but I forgot about it because I was busy. Maomao always liked the comments, so I don't care. Anyway, now I will start to catch up! ! ! Wow, I just saw that the total viewing time has actually been 16 hours. It's been a long time.

I like it very much. I couldn't stop laughing after reading the first few chapters. The relationship between the heroine and the Sri Lankan teacher when she was a child really made me laugh to death. The daily life is very warm and funny, and the heroine's character is also very good. In this book, Harry and Draco have also become very good friends, which is very satisfying🌹🌹🌹 (I need to pay attention to the fact that the daily life between Draco and Harry is more "engrossing")

Super pretty! It's fun to watch! It's not frustrating at all. The love scene between the heroine and Snape is very well written. It's heart-warming to watch. It's also easy to interact with Xiao Long. Harry is still more suitable for the Snake House and has made good friends.

It is well written, the plot is compact, and the laughter is constant. The protagonist has the strongest brain per person. Even when people are most panicked, the heroine will use the most ingenious way to resolve fear. Especially when fighting and escaping, it fully demonstrates the heroine's rich network of connections. The rich language is used to render the tense atmosphere and the deep friendship and spirit of unity between Harry, Ellie and Draco. Love Love Love [Blow Kiss] [Blow Kiss]

The author's writing is great. It's the first HP fanfic that I keep re-reading. Especially the point about Harry being transferred to a hospital in second grade really hit me. It's a big change. Ellie's character is also well-shaped, which is my favorite type. I also like the family relationship line with Sri Lanka (I can't control my tears and often cry when I'm moved😢). The style of the feature film is humorous and a little abstract, and the small group interaction also makes my heart warm.

In some aspects, it is very OOC, but in other aspects, it is very consistent with the character of the characters in the original work, but no matter what, it looks very cool.

This is the first time I encountered this subject. The author is very creative, but there are too few. Can you please add more [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

The content in the middle of this book is slightly cruel. Licia fell into the black curtain with him to save Sirius, and was later rescued by her mother's affinity magic and Grindelwald's brooch. At that time, Snape's heart was broken. Also, when she faced the Boggart, she saw Snape lying in a pool of blood... I love reading the story between Snape and his daughter. This book is so good! !

It's really beautiful and very funny. I laugh so hard every time that I can't breathe.

This book is so good, I didn't even skip a chapter. Harry's portrayal is really good. I feel that Harry belongs in Slytherin. The interaction between Harry and the Platinum Gem (Draco) and the sixsome are simply synonymous with love and death. And Theo (Xiaoduo) is on the market all the time, but he's super nice to his friends. The most important thing is of course our evil demon Alicia. Her family relationship with Professor Snape, her love with platinum gems, the friendship of the six-person group and her relationship with other friends are all good. She helped many people, healed all misfortunes, and brought good things. Professor Snape has the continuation of Always, the care of his daughter (mostly from the "love" of the rebellious girl), our platinum gem also has someone to love, Harry is no longer alone, GGAD has also fallen in love at dusk, and everyone has a good and happy ending, which brings a perfect curtain to this book. The current extra chapter is also very good, a heartwarming and funny chapter. But there is always a feeling, an emotion that can't be let go, but this book will continue in a place we can't see. Ellie and her platinum gem will always be together, doing some very un-Malfoy activities, Xiao Duo will be with his gold galleons, and Harry and his work are inseparable. Maybe he will find him in the future. Finally, his partner (but it should be impossible, he and Xiaoduo are both single [laughs]) Professor Snape will find his own life. Just look at his daughter Ellie and mute her platinum gem [laughter] GGAD will always be together, and they will live happily forever, somewhere we can't see. Oh, by the way, there is an extra story about Be in the book. People with weak hearts should not read it, they will not be able to stand it. Finally, author, I love you! [Adoration] [Adoration] I want to call you. Although I don't have that much money, I will always read and follow your books. Can you write more HP novels? I really want to read them, preferably different types of HP (I want to read all in) (not an order, not a pointer, I love your [love] [love] [love] [love] so much)

The heroine's character is very interesting and the character design is novel, but there are some things in the book that are inconsistent with the content of the original book (perhaps due to typos in the names, for example, where Ginny should be, it is Hermione in the text), and some characters are also a bit OOC. But overall not bad.

It is seriously OOC in some aspects, but the story theme is novel and interesting, the plot is fascinating, the characters are delicately and vividly portrayed, and the writing is good. Overall, it is good to watch.

Love lines, friendship lines and emotional lines coexist, the writing is super good, and the plot is very interesting! [Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's really beautiful! It was particularly interesting when Harry and Draco exchanged blows when they were transferred to another school in their second year. The plot is very novel, I really like the character of the protagonist, and the family relationship with Snape is also very touching.

It's very interesting to watch. The heroine's character is very interesting. Draco and Harry have become good friends. Harry was transferred to the Snake Yard in his second year. Theodore, Blaise and Pansy are also very interesting.

The heroine is very interesting

Super pretty! ! ! The author must continue to update. This is the only HP that I like the most and never get tired of watching *:ஐ٩(๑´ᵕ`)۶ஐ:*

Lovely author, because of your humorous writing style, I want to give you a big five-star review.

This subject matter is super new, okay. Good looking, good looking.

Really, it writes about family, friendship, and love very well. Watch and laugh.

It's beautiful. The author's writing style is great. I like Ellie's character very much [laughs] [sending my heart]

It was only after reading it three times that I realized that I had no comments. It's really good-looking. The family relationship is so touching. The writing is very delicate. The heroine was so cute when she was a child. The daily life of Snape's father and his troublemaker daughter is so perfect. Our heroine is also smart and powerful. It's good-looking.

The theme is very new and beautiful

It's so beautiful [blowing kiss]