The Explosive Artist Works as a Giant of Light in Xingtai

Very good, better than those nonsense, the plot is not too biased, it is good to watch, I love watching it Keep writing, strive, and write better and better. During the days of writing this Star Railway fanfic, I always felt like I was traveling among the stars with the Star Train: I needed to accurately restore the vividness of the characters, but also make the story of the symbiosis between the stars and the sky grow new; I wanted to make the golden light of the battle scenes shocking enough, but also let the warmth of daily interactions take root. When writing, I would worry about the screen, worrying that I could not express the rigor of the Yunqi Army array, fearing that I would live up to the tenderness of Tingyun's words of "Thank you for saving me", and even worry about what kind of bubbles should be in Qiong's drink. But whenever my fingers hang over the keyboard and hesitate, I always think of Qu Yuan's "The road is long and long, and I will search up and down." - Just like the star train has to travel through countless galaxies to reach its destination, the road to creation requires repeated polishing and continuous exploration. Belloberg's frost will eventually melt, Luofu's demon body will eventually be driven away by the light, and the story I write should, like this poem says, continue to move forward in "searching up and down" with love for the characters and persistence in details. After all, the train has not yet arrived at the station, so how dare you stop writing about your adventure?

Although the subject matter is common, this writing method is rare and fun! The author has a deep understanding of the characters, and so far there has been no OOC situation. I am very willing to listen to readers' "reasonable" suggestions and five-star reviews! Big cheers for the author! ! Write this story down [sending my heart]

How to say it? A little too dependent on the star, the protagonist just needs to blow him [thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking]

The writing is quite good. Compared with some nonsensical books, it is quite good.

Okay, I personally think it's very beautiful

I have an idea. What if Star gained Hikari's power? Not only does it solve the problem of subsequent forms. It has to be integrated into the Phoenix Dream. A win-win situation! The author can please reply to this comment and read it as much as possible. My thoughts are as follows: Actually, what I mean is that the protagonist no longer has to rely on Xing. After the separation, Xing can no longer use the protagonist's power. Then following the trend, Xing gained the power of Hikari. (Of course, I think it's just that I think the storyline might be a bit difficult to handle if it's really like me.) Why do I think this way? It's just that the protagonist's opportunities to participate in the war are too few. I always feel that there is an indescribable feeling, that is, there is a lack of participation, right? Anyway, the more I looked at it later, the more something was wrong. Why are you all pretending? What about the protagonist? In fact, my main reason is that there are only a few scenes where the protagonist participates in the war. I'm not sure if other readers feel the same way as I do. If not, (sorry). In fact, if it is really like what I said in the future, everyone will use their own strength. It's pretty good, isn't it? (Think how handsome the two Ultramen would be standing there! Hehe)

As far as I'm concerned, it's perfectly fine It started to flood and I couldn't get in.

A sense of AI's immediacy

I personally think it's very beautiful, cheers for the author [sending my heart]

It's well written, but I don't know why. When I listen to the book, I always feel like I'm listening to classical Chinese.

Regardless of good or bad, give me five stars first [Thinking]

There are too many brackets and the paragraph is too long, but please come on, author [Like] It's much better after the modification. Come on.

It's beautiful and I love watching it, but why should I call it Qiong? I feel so unaccustomed to it. Can't I call it Future? Meng Maomao and Mao Maotou are also OK [Chigua] [Chigua] [Please update]

Good writing style Super nice

Little Qiongji is cute, but do you want to change her name? Change it to Joan? [Laughing]

Not bad, but the update speed is too fast, and some details are not done very well, but it does not affect normal viewing.

It's interesting, it's good to be patient and watch [Adoration]

Good-looking [Admiration] Never before has such a beautiful and perfect question

Very good. I hope the author can finish it.

A sense of frustration like a memory telling a story😳

OK but no traffic. The author will take a look and see if it can lead to traffic?