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Although both sides have not yet reached the top level of combat power, the theme of looking at the world from the perspective of small characters is really novel. There is no protagonist and no golden finger. It is a complete explanation of the two aspects of cultivation and science. After reading it, it makes people think deeply. Please continue writing according to this idea. Come on, the author [Like]

Some thoughts from an old bookworm to the author: Advantages: The story world structure is good, the first few dozen chapters develop a good world view, the story rhythm is suitable, and the combat power is well controlled. It is probably an outline. Disadvantages: The character description is slightly poor, the character's personality is not outstanding, and it is not easy to remember. The writing style is moderate and the writing style needs to be improved. Summary: You can make do with it. If the author can improve his writing skills, this book will have a chance of becoming a hit. Tomato personal rating reference (Ten Days/The God of Play, 9.9) (The Foolish Play of the Gods/The Lost City of Strange Beasts, etc. 9.8) (Zhan Shen/Tian Yuan, etc. 9.7) This book is 9.3

Very nice to look at. I hope the author will update it soon. I have a few questions. One is this civilization. What level of civilization is it? This is what kind of system this civilization is? Socialist system. Imperialist system or capitalist system? , Half-capitalist, half-socialist system, are other new systems. , Can you introduce it in detail. Basic functions of weapons and some items

The alliance has a militarist parliamentary system, uses war victory to suppress internal conflicts, and has strong scientific research capabilities. However, the basic information has been cleared up by the world of immortality cultivators. Superior troops are mass-produced and recyclable. Weapons can be upgraded quickly, weaknesses can be quickly promoted after identification, and they are extremely good at attrition warfare. The disadvantage is that it is afraid of being penetrated and decapitated, and it is easy for internal problems to occur. The current resistance in the world of immortal cultivation is the righteous monks. There are three types of sword cultivators, magic cultivators and weapon cultivators on the scene. The demon clan, demons and casual cultivators are still in the dark. The Federation has not even figured out the classification of monks yet. It can only be said that it will be blasted by the cultivating world. Advantages: Strong individual combat power, good at infiltration and beheading, has various combat methods, and is not afraid of being targeted. Disadvantages: The combat power is unstable, the training period for combatants is extremely long, and the strategic depth is only one planet. Now the world of immortal cultivation is dragged down by the mother star. If the mother star is bombed by the Federation, the Federation will face a lot of angry and all-pervasive Nascent Soul monks. In front of the demonic path, one planet after another suddenly appeared, while the righteous path behind them assassinated the management one after another. The Federation cannot defend itself at all, and collapse is only a matter of time.

For me, I have read Star Sea Journey, My Grandfather's Story, Robot WALL-E, My Robot and the End of the World, and other science fiction, as well as Dark Blood Age, The Last Man's Exploration of the Universe, Heavenly Court Lu Renjia, Heavenly Court 9 to 5, Life in the Immortal World, The Birth of Major Systems, and Cun Mang, Lu Tian Ji, and thousands of other immortal cultivation books that are not good writing. The score of this book is too low, it should be above 9.5. The description of combat power is in order, which shows that the author must be an orthodox scholar and not just boasting. It's just that he is too frustrated, the natives are too weak, and the alliance is too fearless to kill others. Let's quickly impose strong sanctions on him.

It's a really good novel. The new theme alone earns it more than 8 points. The writing style is pretty good and not too pretentious. I don't understand why the novel is only rated 6.8. Personally, I think it can be given a score between 8.8 And 9.0.

I have always wanted to make a game in which the world of cultivation and modern civilization collide. I have read more than thirty chapters of the author's book. To get a rough idea, the current definition of this book is a unilateral invasion and counterattack. The story is normal, the timeline and hot points are low, but this is different from the game, because if this setting is not fun, it will end very quickly, so the book also presents a slow-burning effect, with small fires constantly burning, and it is heart-warming. , But it won't have big ups and downs, and the setting of the Nascent Soul's combat power being able to walk in the universe mentioned in the book makes up for my description of low-end combat power. However, similarly, the description of the combat power below the Nascent Soul is too lacking, and I fell into a bottleneck in the early days. I thought that fighting is a matter of high-end combat power. This will lead to personal heroism and low-level monks will be reduced to ant data. Although it is inevitable, it will reduce the immersion in the world. Thank you

Great book! Based on my past experience, either technology crushes cultivators, or the other way around. But in this book, both sides penetrate the political game, and the psychological description of the characters is very exciting. It's great!

After reading it, the development of technological forces is a bit too abnormal, and there is no sense of crisis in fantasy. However, the struggle is well written. I like both pure science fiction and pure fantasy. However, if you compare the two sides, it is difficult for you, the author, to convince me. Five stars.

The setting is very novel, please go to the author! Support Xiuxian and fight against the Alliance! The Alliance is an invader and a colonizer!

In fact, the novel is very good, but not many people read it. It seems that the theme of technology + immortality is not popular. More people watch Western fantasy magic + science fiction. I think it may be that people who like to cultivate immortality usually don't read science fiction. They have only a little knowledge of the science fiction setting and feel that they can't understand it. They prefer to simply cultivate immortality. People who watch science fiction seldom watch Cultivation of Immortality, and they have little understanding of the setting of Cultivation of Immortality. Relatively speaking, the people who watch science fiction and Western fantasy are highly integrated. Moreover, the settings of Western Fantasy are richer and more rigorous, with high and low combat power, which facilitates battles between different civilization types. The characteristic of Xiu Xianwen is that many numbers are given out of mouth, which is very loose. Moreover, it is impossible to circumvent the setting of realm cultivation, and the scalability is too low.

It's really beautiful. I highly recommend it to people who like science fiction. The overall idea is refreshing. I suggest the author fix the bugs. Sometimes there are conflicts between the two chapters. I sincerely hope that this book can be written well [love]

Overall, the writing is very good. In fact, the most difficult thing about this kind of writing is balancing the readers' opinions. The author's label is a multi-line group portrait. How to write a war between two immortal cultivators and technology at the same level without a protagonist who can overwhelm everything? It can be said that the rating of this book was impossible to be high the moment it was released. Not long after I read it, I started to see all kinds of quarrels. I hope the author can hold on to it.

Ahem, I have an idea. Different civilizations fight against each other. Different civilizations come on and off, start and fall again, and there is no final winner. Hope - cheer - small despair, like dust. It's just that civilization is the universe, and various stories are constantly being played out.

God has figured out something. I wonder why I can't find it on the terminal. It becomes speechless and boring as you get to the end, and you can't watch the rest.

This is the real way of cultivating immortals through technology. The time travel I watched before was still not that exciting, and the combat power meter is indeed quite high. There is no sense of oppression at all in the novel Yuanying.

This novel is so exciting, with a compact plot and vivid characters, making it hard to put it down!

It's so well written and so immersive, what should I do if I'm not satisfied with it?

Please support me with 5 stars, Xiu Xian Qian Bing Technology😋😋

Damn, it's so good. This is the best article about technology and immortality I've ever read. The ones I've seen before are either stupid or wise. This novel is good

I read dozens of chapters in one go! The author writes well and I like this narrative method

The plot of this novel is ups and downs, the writing is fluent, and the characters are very full.

The story is good, with twists and turns, the writing is smooth and fascinating, and the author has a profound knowledge.

It's very good. It's delicious. It's my favorite type.

The plot of this novel develops smoothly and naturally, making it readable without any sense of contradiction.

It's really beautiful, very immersive, and the author's literary talent is really good!

This is a good-looking novel about cultivating immortals and fighting against technology.

It feels pretty good, but why did the latest chapter Xiu Xian get sent here? Where are the group of ancestors who controlled Li Ao and couldn't mention Alliance Technology? Author, everyone is here to see a group of Void God Refiners and the alliance's various dimension-level law-level causality-level weapons, crippling each other's opponents. Now that a divine court has been established, the level is probably that of Hedao or Mahayana in the world of immortality. In fact, it has set up an existence that is equivalent to the high-level combat power of the immortal world and can absolutely crush the alliance. First of all, it will be very detrimental to the alliance in terms of subsequent development of the alliance's combat power. Therefore, the follow-up description of the situation where the alliance sneaks up on the cultivators and temporarily crushes the cultivators seems to be for balance, but in fact it feels like it is written crookedly. It should be beaten hard! Everyone comes to see the battle of strong men.

It is very strong and can definitely enter the top ten, but the middle part is a bit confusing, and sometimes there is no separation in a long string.

I've read Chapter 10 and it's my cup of tea. I'll give it a good review first to increase its exposure.