Demon Slayer************

The writing is very good, similar to the official novel of "Kataba no Butterfly". "Demon Slayer" is told from the perspective of Shinobu, which fits the character creation and plot of the original work very well. This book also makes up for the regret of the original novel's sacrifice of Shinobu and the lack of further development of the relationship between Ginin (in the end, I hope that Shinobu can take revenge, be the capricious and cute self of the past, and live a good life as an ordinary girl)

Self-criticism The main problem is that it is too lengthy, the rhetoric is too gorgeous, and there are too many descriptions of the environment, demeanor, psychology, actions, and language. As a result, it looks like there are many words on the surface, but in fact there is very little real content. The early narration was too purposeless, with no main emotions expressed, and the expression of the two sisters' feelings was too vague. As a result, most of the special chapters were used later to fill in the gaps, making the plot feel somewhat fragmented. There was a slight problem with the setting. It was obvious that the setting of Demon Slayer was not familiar with during the initial creation, which led to the scene being messed up. Finally, the update is too slow, and it even stopped updating for almost a month. It was only when school started that I remembered to update. Who are you writing to read?

This article takes Butterfly Ninja as the main perspective, and on the basis of fitting the main line of the original work, depicts her growth trajectory, with delicate emotions, which perfectly fits the setting and character characteristics of the original work. In the normal advancement of the plot, I add my own ideas to fill in the gaps in the interaction between the Butterfly sisters and the emotional line of Yoshinori. (Makes up for my regret) In this work, the young Shinobu is lively and spirited, with a hint of irritability in his true nature, strong and independent; after her sister passed away, she chose to put on a mask, inherit her sister's gentleness, inherit her sister's wishes, become gentle, and hide her serious self-destructive tendencies under the mask. When getting along with Giyu, Giyu-san's "candid" words gradually cracked the mask. I hope Giyuu can help Shinobu take off the mask, so that he can not only live the way his sister expected, but also find his true self. The author's writing style is delicate, smooth and coherent, the psychological description is concrete and vivid, the characters are full and three-dimensional, not OOC, the only shortcoming is that the update is not very diligent hahahaha. I look forward to more exciting performances from the author in the future. Finally, I wish the author good health, a happy life, a calm mind in his creative work, and no excessive pressure. I hope the author can always gain happiness and a sense of accomplishment from his creation. I give it 100 points out of 10.

The characters are not OOC at all, and they become more and more beautiful later on. The plot is highly consistent with the original work. Even if there are changes, they are very reasonable changes based on the original work. In many places, the behavior of Giyuu and Xiaonin in the original work is explained from the perspective of the CP of Ginin, such as the meeting between Zhu and Xiao. All in all, it is very well written and very close to the original work. I can already tell that the ending is he, and it is very reasonable. In addition to the delicate and unobtrusive emotional lines of Ginin, there are also the family lines of the three Hu Die sisters, the friendship lines of Hashirama, and the love lines of Immortal Flowers, all of which are very, very beautiful. The daily life of the Tanjiro trio and Shinobu in the Butterfly House is also well written! I feel that this fanfic is one of the best among righteous ninjas. It's especially suitable for me who both recommends young ninjas but also dislikes righteous ninjas🥰I couldn't help reading it in one sitting even during finals week. It's really great!

Although the author has criticized himself and pointed out the previous shortcomings, it does not hinder the excellence of the real Ginin fanfiction. The emotions are delicate, and the emotional line between Giyuu and Xiaonin is very reasonable. It is also a top-notch excellent work of Ginin fanfiction. I look forward to the author's next Ginin fanfiction. Congratulations on the completion! Tell me what you think! I think this is one of the must-read novels for ginin chefs. Although the author did not put a lot of sugar in this novel, I think it is quite beneficial. I think what makes people linger over the relationship between Giyuu and Shinobu is the ignorant love between two idiots in love who clearly have a crush on each other but don't know it. They care about each other unconsciously, protect each other unconsciously, and observe each other's emotions unconsciously. The way Giyuu and Shinobu get along is also interesting! In the Taisho period, the emphasis was on the distinction between men and women, but there seemed to be no such shackles between Giyu and Shinobu. Whether it was the Ansai waist drum in the anime and manga (especially the two eagles! They just looked at Giyu and ninja in the tree, which can be understood as the two eagles have long been accustomed to the way they get along with each other) or in the Suizhu Gaiden, Giyuu sat in front of the door and waited for Shinobu to change clothes. This behavior made people feel ambiguous, but the two actually felt that there was no problem. So I think that the love between Giyu and Shinobu is not the aboveboard love between snake lovers, but the unconscious favoritism between two idiots in love. This is what makes this pair so interesting (personal opinion). This book written by the author is completely in line with the way I think the two of them get along. Although there is little sugar, it is just right! I highly recommend watching Yin Nin Kitchen!

Big cheers for the author! ! ! I just love reading articles like yours. This kind of detailed description is really to my liking. I added my own ideas without changing the plot direction of the original work. The main characters in the book are well described, the characters are full-bodied, and the writing is not broken. This is really refreshing to watch.

I think this book is a very distinctive ginin novel, and it has been partially adapted on the basis of great respect for the original work. When I read it, I felt like I was reading Kataha no Choi (the official novel). It felt very detailed and very close to the original work. The article really describes the blackening process of the butterfly ninja (feeding the ghost with his body) in great detail. Although it is sad, it is very real, so I am very grateful to the teacher for giving the little bitter melon a good ending. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Very good, it fits the original work, the combat power and characters are good, it would be better if Butterfly Ten was not included

The emotional development of Shinobu and Giyuu in this book really fits my idea. The two are unaware of each other's feelings, but from going on missions together to daily communication, they deeply show their status in each other's hearts.

A very good novel, one of the best among Tomato's righteous ninja fanfics

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Well, in terms of plot, I can only give it 3 points personally. It overlaps a lot with the plot of the original work. Compared to this second creation, which I want to watch, it should be more novel. But the reason why I gave it 4 points is that I think the fish here are a little more lively and the characters are more fleshed out than in the original work.

The writing is very good, the characters are appropriate, and the inner plot of the characters is also in line with the characters. It is a very beautiful article.

It's very good-looking, and the characters are very relevant.

The descriptions are very delicate, the battles are very touching, and the emotional lines between Giyuu and Shinobu are very good [sending my heart]

Like! ! Come on, author! ! [Love][love]

Well done, love it. It also successfully made up for my regrets

The plot is well written, the writing is delicate, and the heroic character is not broken. Good luck, author.

The proficiency of the writing is very deep, and some plots interspersed in it are similar to the original work. The characters are not obtrusive and are quite interesting. I hope the author will pay attention to rest and write the character's story with true understanding! Really great

Very nice! ! The young couple will always be happy

Really, this fan work is really good, each character is described in detail, and it fits my vision of Butterfly and Yong. It's worth reading! ! !

It's beautiful. The inner emotional changes are described very delicately. It's one of the few masterpieces. Like [Adore][Adore]

It does not deviate from the original work, but adds many story details of Butterfly Ninja. The characters are not OOC either. After listening to half of it, I felt that Yuyu didn't appear in many scenes, but the interactions between children were very interesting. Will listen.

Very nice... The following are the comments from September 14th and October 3rd

It was good-looking, but it ended so quickly. Should the author consider writing another book? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

It's so good to watch. I love this kind of original plot with a bit of sourness [Adoration]

The recommendation index is at full level. From the perspective of Hu Dieren, a rare pure if line leader, Yi Ren will definitely be on the list. The author's writing power has become more and more profound, and the second and third books also unfolded as a series. (Blessed are those who follow the author's boss)

Most of the plot is only supported by the main storyline. Although the writing is okay, it would be better if there were more encounters or other plots written by the author himself that do not affect the plot.

Very good-looking. Very good-looking. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

The writing is delicate and really beautiful.