Lin Mo (before rebirth: a laid-off/indebted social beast; after rebirth: a divine figure disguised as an "overseas family heir")
The musty smell of the rental house filled his nose with the sour smell of sweat. Lin Mo suddenly jumped up from the hard bed, like a stranded fish being thrown into the water again. The faded red sign of "Shaxian Snacks" outside the window swayed in the hot June wind, and the low-quality neon light tubes sizzled, and the halo split the narrow rental house. The bright red "June 10, 2015" on the calendar hung on the wall was like a red-hot iron, burning into his eyes.
Reader comments
It would be better to write the plot after the orphan. Really, even the closest people don't believe that you have the ability to make money, or they don't want to believe that the protagonist has the ability to make money, and they don't want to believe the protagonist's words and explanations. They are constantly at odds with the protagonist. What's the point of such a plot?
The early stage was too depressing
Rebirth has been out of control emotionally and extremely depressed.
It would be better to write the plot after the orphan. Really, even the closest people don't believe that you have the ability to make money, or they don't want to believe that the protagonist has the ability to make money, and they don't want to believe the protagonist's words and explanations. They are constantly at odds with the protagonist. What's the point of such a plot?
The early stage was too depressing
Rebirth has been out of control emotionally and extremely depressed.