Junior Brother Green Tea Is Overhauling His Acting Skills, but I Don't Like This Trick

It is a good article, the plot is compact and smooth, and the plot is very innovative. However, the description of the environment is a bit too much, especially the description of the fantasy in the chapters before the death of the master is a bit delayed. There are too many words to describe the red environment. It would be better if the author grasps the rhythm more. There is also a feeling that the expressions of the characters are a bit short of words, but overall it is still vivid. In short, it is worth reading. The last chapter is a bit rushed and the meaning is not finished. The author will polish this work and it will definitely become a classic👍

It's sweet and reassuring [sending heart] The plot is compact and not laggy at all. I feel that the plot is very good. Hao Gong is a warm and crying dog. He makes his senior brother so sweet (forgive me that I am not very good at criticizing!). I don't know how else to praise it, but it's really good, good, good, everyone comes to watch [shy]

Please have mercy on me, the audience.

The writing is so strong. . . . It's a pity that the atmosphere of two mad dogs biting each other in the early stage ended in a hurry! I actually want to read a few chapters of these two biting each other... They are so cute and good at writing... Goddess, I love you Alas, the writing style is indeed very good and the story concept is quite good. It's just this weird crazy beating of the younger generation that makes me uncomfortable. The ending is a bit deus ex machina, but it's okay... The author's grasp of yandere is quite subtle. I really want to see you write more yandere romances.

The writing is very good! Love the young couples [sending heart]

Beautiful, highly recommended

It's so beautiful. Why doesn't anyone watch it?

Like! It's so cool. This character completely beats my XP. The content is also very good.

Very well written, the characters are three-dimensional, keep up the good work [laughs]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I'm so sad. Why is it gone? I still want to read it. I've been crying. The traffic of this article is so bad. Author, I feel sorry for you. Os: The young couple is so sweet.

Like😍Does the author have a secondary CP? I think the main CP is a bit repulsive to the sub-CP when I see it all the time. I would like to ask.