Quick Transmigration: The Scumbag Husband’s Makeover, and Sweet Kisses for His Wife

I saved a lot of time to write the novel. When I was writing it, I was always afraid that it would be a mess. I thought about the plot during the day and lay in bed at night thinking about what the characters should say. But looking back, I found that it was quite awkward in many places - the content was not satisfactory, and some dialogues seemed to be forced onto the characters, not so natural. The details definitely can't stand up to careful digging, and the meaning is quite lacking. There must be many undiscovered flaws. If you see something wrong, even if it is a sentence or a word that feels awkward, feel free to point it out. It will be changed gradually, thank you! [Working on draft]

The summary always feels like a conspiracy theory, which makes it uncomfortable to read. It would be okay if there is a matching conspiracy theory plot. The key is that without a corresponding plot, the protagonist just talks about conspiracy theories. He is suspicious of this and that, which is very annoying to watch.

I don't know what I saw. Is the protagonist really a fast traveler? If you say he is a novice, I would rather believe it.

It's not good to watch. The inner world of the first world is rich enough, but the writing is ordinary. It has to be made like a suspense detective. In the end, it doesn't look like anything, and I have no desire to read anymore🤦

The two main characters are very sweet, I love watching them