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It's amazing. I found such a perfect article on Tomato. Author, I don't know if you still remember me. When we were children, we went to the temple to steal tributes. Uncle jc came to arrest us. Then we dressed up as gods. In the end, only I was captured because you are the real god.

It's really beautiful. And we can see that the first word of each chapter can be connected, which is really interesting. The structure is also very complete, and this book is very, very nice to read. Five-star praise is given with both hands

"Closed" "Closed" "Closed" Two chapters closed A symbol of strength! [Laughing evilly] Moreover, the author is quite considerate, knowing that the front part is quite depressing, and the acrostic sentence can prevent you from getting too involved.

Very pretty! It completely meets the requirements of those who like to see yandere but don't like to be too aggressive! Still pure love! Still double clean! (Although I don't care about this, I know someone does, so I'll say it)! This is my first time giving a rating on Tomato! When I saw the author saying that someone came to give a low score without reading the book carefully, I immediately rushed over to give a grade! Very qualified and excellent author! It is a very beautiful and perfect novel! I will always support the author who can update eight times a day! ! ! (The review will let the novels and authors I love to read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

The writing is very good but I always feel that there are too many embellishments [Chigua] But this is the type of writing the author writes [Chigua] However, the review is still too authoritative [Smile] The author updates very quickly [Chigua]

The writing is really great! ! ! I've read a lot of yandere lilies, but this is the only one written from a first-person perspective! The sense of immersion is very strong, and occasionally my heart will tremble with the fear of "me", which is very powerful! Highly recommended!

It's really amazing, my mind is almost filled with the word "little bird"⊙ω⊙. Regarding the characterization, it is as if the author has personally experienced it, and there are basically no flaws. That kind of inner resonance connects this book with my soul, and it can really tug at the heartstrings. I hope this book can really enter the hearts of readers and bring them a short and beautiful emotional journey. I highly recommend this book! No doubt about it!

After entering Lily District, I once dreamed of such a peach blossom garden: four distinct seasons, each with its own beauty, colorful clouds like segments, light blue sky, and picturesque mountains and rivers. In the idle past, outside of time, there is no need to be burdened by the mundane world, and they are not contaminated by filth. Under the light of the ideal country, the two girls cuddle up with each other, confiding those wild fantasies to each other, embracing, growing, but never changing their hearts, eternal purity. Traveling together outside Taoyuan is just to see the many things outlined in the books. After savoring the beauty, we feel nostalgic for the old forest like a bird in a tether. We return home to relive the beautiful past of countless days and nights in the past. It is repetitive, but peaceful and leisurely, and we don't know the lack of it. Their love is not an instant passion, but an eternal companionship. The wind and frost will not leave a single trace on their faces, just like the starlight in the universe. Forgive me that my pen is exhausted and my vocabulary is lacking, so I am unable to describe that beautiful corner of the peach garden. But thank you to the author for recreating that scene for me in the middle and later stages of the current novel. I never thought I would see this type of novel again in Tomato. The combination of Qingyue's possessive yet extreme tenderness and Yunxi's pure and well-behaved one is so cute. Seeing them reminds me of them. Finally, thank you to the author!

Ahhhh, it's really beautiful. The first-person perspective is really detailed and very immersive. It's slow-paced but very interesting. It's also very well written. It made my body warm when I saw it. You are also very kind and hard-working. I really like this book. Come on! ! ! Be sure not to interrupt updates and unfinished work! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

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It's great. I read about 20 chapters. My sister is in a high position, but everyone in the outside world probably knows that she lacks love, and she really wants to love and be loved. I happened to buy Xiaoniao at an auction, but I didn't know Xiaoniao, so I just raised her as a normal girl. When I was about to send Xiaoniao to school the next day, I noticed something strange. I watched Xiaoniao when Xiaoniao was in school. The instruction manual directly changes the bird's rules, so that the bird can relax in her arms, and let the bird accept her rules little by little. With a toughness and tenderness, she is learning how to love someone, and she is also changing the bird little by little to make her fall in love with herself (you can understand this as a sister or a little bird) The bad ending really hurts

The character design of Xiaoniao is really very clear. Although the overall world view is a little morbid, the concept and the deep meaning behind it are really clear. After reading the author's good intentions, Shenhe really felt nostalgic.

It's nice to read. It's nice to read. What you wrote is so good. [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [ Eat melon] [ Eat melon] [ Eat melon] [ Eat melon] [ Eat melon] [ Eat melon] [ Eat melon]

Okay, don't miss it if you like yandere, don't miss it if you like yandere cultivation, in short..., Don't miss it, one chapter of this book has won more than 50 "canopies", which is enough to prove your strength, please read and cherish [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration][Sneaky smile]

Very well written! The writing is very delicate, the psychology of the characters is well written, the characters are outstanding, the descriptions are very detailed, and you can feel the emotional pull between the two protagonists. It really crystallizes that sentence: "The one who is loved will grow flesh and blood like crazy." Yue loves Xiaoniao, so she won't force Xiaoniao. She loves the little bird in her own way, understands the little bird's feelings, gives her the right to freedom, lets her gradually accept the world, makes her feel loved, and lets her gradually grow. Yue will not instill wrong ideas in Xiaoniao because she doesn't know anything. Instead, she will continue to teach her the right things, such as time, the sea, and the world. This is a very delicate love, a very sincere love. The author's writing is really touching, and the relationship between the two is not unnatural. Yue understands Xiaoniao's fear of strange things, but she gives her the courage to face her fear. Yue cherishes Xiaoniao very much, and you can feel it from every line of text. There is no sense of superiority or inferiority in the relationship between the two, and there is no sense of status difference. They are equal. Yue has always said so and done so. The psychological description also allows readers to better understand the world in Xiaoniao's eyes, understand her fear, and her love. Although Yue cannot see Xiaoniao's heart, she has always been patient. Although she will be angry because of Xiaoniao's wrong thoughts, this is also proof of love. It hurts because of love. To be honest, I came here because of Sese at first. As I read it, I found that the book was not what I imagined, but I didn't quit and continued reading. Because of the delicate writing style, because of the careful love, and because of the sincerity of the two people. It's great to feel the moon gradually guiding the bird, bringing her into the larger world, and guiding lovers! ! ! You can feel what the author wants to write about. The people in it are also round characters, brought to life by the author, as if they are not fictional, but really exist in a world we don't know. They really come alive in the author's writing! It's really pure love that's so high! ! ! Fine chaff! ! !

It's really beautiful! At present! The character of the little bird changes from fear and fear to attachment and closeness. The description is very delicate and natural! Little by little transition, great author! Some of the actions of my sister and Xiaoniao are super cute to me! My heart feels soft when I see it ~ Hehe The little bird is so cute! So cute! Ahhhhhh! So good! So soft! Want rua! I really look forward to the little bird being slowly raised by my sister! The author is also a super interesting soul! Can't help but make people smile~ Oops! Anyway, I'm very happy watching it so far ~ Hehe, I'm looking forward to the plot in the future! Come on! Big! After watching it, I suddenly thought of a series: Kannazuki no Miko. This just occurred to me suddenly! One person carries the long night alone, carries the memories of the two of them in the previous life, and waits lonely and long... For the next reincarnation. Expressing heavy grief emotionally gives me a similar feeling...

This is the book that I have been following for the longest time except for Lao Cheng and Lao Tao. Regardless of the rating, I personally recommend it. Big support for the author [like]

The descriptions of the two heroines are extremely delicate and vivid, and the author's literary talent is really good. The descriptions of various environments, psychology, expressions, and the creation of heaven and earth are really the finishing touch, and the readers feel as if they are actually there. Although this book is a bit unpopular, the author please work hard to create it. The aroma of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley!

There is no yandere feeling at all. I only see my sister's love for the bird. This love is not morbid. The first-person description is very immersive, and you can see the bird growing step by step. At present, it seems that Pure Sugar No Knife really wants to know what the full version looks like.

The author's writing style is super good. I have never seen an author who writes better than him on Tomato. The characters are very delicate and the subject matter is novel. Such a good author will like every comment. It's a pity that the popularity is not high. I highly recommend this book [shy][shy][shy]

It's nice to watch, super nice to watch. I feel that the description is really good. It's quite helpful for my composition. [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool]

I hold a banner for the author! What looks yandere actually contains pure love. The psychology and movements are very delicate, fine and extraordinary.

The characters are well described and the plot is just right. However, the wording in the article is too gorgeous, and there are too many rhetorics in many places. In Han Yu's words, "the words are obscene and sad, and the ambition is relaxed." Therefore, when reading, it is like watching an extremely long parallel prose. I hope the author can make some improvements in this aspect. But overall, this book is also a rare masterpiece in Tomato. The author keeps up the good work [Like]

The writing is very good, very detailed, and the characters are very three-dimensional. And, this is the only novel that I look forward to from the first word of every chapter! ! ! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The beginning of the whole article is extremely beautiful, almost completely in control, similar to the mysterious sister, and the fragile and timid but not stupid protagonist. Their relationship is dominated by the sister, but the little bird's heart perfectly fills the gap. An extremely beautiful gesture is shown to us. For me, the beauty is beyond words.

Hahahahaha, it looks so good! The author puts together the first word of each chapter Very able to show his resentment towards Shen He

It is a very good book, but one thing is that there are too many psychological descriptions of the protagonist. Overall, I feel that about 20% of a chapter is a metaphor for the psychological description of the protagonist. I personally feel tired when listening to the book. In itself, it is a very good book and I highly recommend it.

The author's writing is very good, but when I read Chapter 105, I understood what kind of story the author was writing. Here's my personal understanding: I think the author wrote a story about a yandere trying to save his lover. At that time, I felt that the entire novel had been sublimated and turned into a literary work. The two heroines were well portrayed, and the details, micro-expressions and inner activities in various conversations were written in great detail (for me, too detailed and too deliberate portrayal of the characters would make me lose the main plot). This is the expression of the author's good writing style. This book is about the yandere heroine who redeems herself and falls into darkness and is lectured by the heroine. It is narrated from the first and third person perspectives of two people, allowing people with a strong sense of substitution to experience the feeling of being redeemed step by step. (Personal opinion: Although I haven't read the subsequent chapters but I already know the ending of the story, so I won't continue reading. The known ending is boring, the unknown ending is interesting) I don't know what happened in the subsequent chapters, and I won't continue reading, but in my heart it is still an excellent book. @Skeletonbro

A very nice novel, a rare spiritual food. The author is great. The plot is full marks. The author's writing style is also great. I love it so much [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

The author writes this kind of article with mature writing style, which is a masterpiece [laughing] [admiration] Very good, basically absorbing the advantages of the previous books Cool! This is throwing tiles! [Adoration] I haven't seen such good writing in a long time [Like]