Bengtie: Pick up March 7Th in Advance

The author really didn't want to offend Shen He at all, he just brushed it off [laughing awkwardly], and it was really fun to watch the protagonist pretending to be cool every day, but the rest of the characters didn't have any role at all. I feel like the book has great potential [like], keep it up! The only bad thing that made me kick my legs wildly on the bed was the portrayal of Bai Heng. The character design was broken. It was more like... Writing a character like Fei Xiao? Personally, I have read several books about Bai Heng, and I should focus on her sunny, cheerful, gentle and careful character. As for the use of heroic and loud voices in the article to describe... Well, Bai Heng is indeed warm to others, but she is not careless. She still has a sense of purity and reserve belonging to a girl. It makes me really uncomfortable to see it! Of course, the author has written it very well. I am just expressing my subjective opinion. After all, there are very few books about Bai Heng, an unpopular character. I was very touched to see that the author did not forget her. Still support the author, come on! [Praise]

This is the first time a new author writes a book, so I would like to give myself a five-star rating first. I have read a lot of Star Iron fan novels, and I always feel a little regretful. I have thought about writing a book for myself, hoping that I can persevere and generate electricity for love. Readers can rest assured that this book will definitely end normally, even if no one reads it. Mainly to generate electricity for love, practice my writing, and test the speed limit of the car. I feel that it is almost done. I will be an experienced driver after the second book [laughing]

It's a nice package, but it's too big. I feel like it's not long enough to write, but it's definitely fun.

Be sure not to stop updating, I like this kind of novel, it suits my taste, and it is the first time I have seen Shuixingxiao. After all, it usually takes a while before the author starts writing new characters.

Nothing to say, it's really a cool story. The protagonist's charisma is fully developed, and having multiple female protagonists is not too boring. The protagonist's thinking is something I can't describe. You can call him a genius, but you can speak for yourself, because the plot can lead to any destiny, and mortals are also very important, as long as the protagonist Du Ge is not provoked. We are benevolent and righteous. We start with a panacea. To be honest, this directly brings trouble to the universe. On a planet with war, everyone buys a jelly bean every month, and fights cost a few lives. I really think of myself as a god, but I am indeed a god. After all, we are writing a fun novel with multiple female protagonists. , Sometimes some unnecessary little poisonous points can be avoided. There is no need to add any special plot. The most important thing is that you write the theme and plot development yourself at the beginning, and optimize some people who don't watch this type. Now that it is like this, let's take a look at what you think. Poisonous comments, some book reviews think they are poisonous, the ones that are more recognized can actually be optimized. If you have time, and the author yourself said in the comments that it is the first time that you write purely for love regardless of grades, and you have done it for love. If you want to write it to the end, then I will give you five stars. I think it is okay.

To be honest, the details are well described, the environment is also well written, the emotions are good, and overall it is very good, but if you don't like multiple girls, you don't have to join. If you like multiple girls or a harem, you can check it out. I personally recommend it. Hey, I've adopted it! Come on, author! ! ! I will always support Well, it's like a literary star descending to earth, that's the only way to describe it

The timeline is very well set. It took Topa two years to join the Stone Heart Ten and Sand Gold less than a year. This shows that Topa has already joined the company and has achieved some achievements, but it is not the same as the time between the Stone Heart Ten and Sand Gold. It is almost more than a year after joining the company, which is about the same time as the Star Dome Train met March 7.

The author is very [shy] can you please accept the aha [laughs][laughs][laughs]

There are bugs and poisonous points, but they are very small. There is a female pornographic flavor between the lines, which is quite fresh to read. The female channel is really strong. The protagonist actually plays a debate match with Swaro. The author's logic is at its climax.

How to say it? There is always a strange feeling in the Wudiliu harem, because most of the Wudiliu lack the process of love. However, I just love to watch Liu Bei [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

In my opinion, the dome is not very good. It would be nice if there were stars. But in the end, I had to build another dome. I hope the author can arrange the dome properly later. @ Throat Doesn't hurt. I hope I won't have a baby so soon. I recommend that the heroine gets pregnant again in the finale.

The writing was so to my liking, it was so much fun [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's pretty cool, the pretentious writing is passable

It's already on the recommendation list, the author will try to update it. It's best to update ten times a day [laughing]

Except for Luofu, everything else is fine.

The heroine's character is not broken, the protagonist's character is also very distinctive, and it does not go too far beyond the plot.

Even Aha is pouting (sad)

Not bad, the only pity is that I don't like multiple heroines or harems.

Just don't update constantly, the author is super active and often appears in the comment area.

Not bad, not bad, very good, but I don't want to see the shitty yellow button.

So pretty! Too hit, hiss ha~ hiss ha, suck.

The author, Lao Deng, is a tree root! Looks good, don't crash [please update]

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The food is good, the kids like it very much [eating melon]

A purely "Japanese" article, although it is difficult to express in some places, it is still quite interesting.

If you have read the other book, you must give it a try. The author is the first author to write a book. (Actually, I think this one is better [laughs][laughs])

Hey, hey, ah ha

Come on, work hard

If you are looking for excitement, watch this

Pretty good, keep it up [like]