Due to the laws of the God Realm, the children of second-level gods cannot survive in the God Realm. Before being sent to the lower world, they were selected by the Nine Heavens Xuannv to become the inheritors. In the Nine Treasure Glazed Sect, they met him, who also carried the inheritance of swordsmanship...
Reader comments
The author's writing style is very good, but I think the female protagonist can be made stronger. The male protagonist seems much stronger than the female protagonist. If we can make them evenly matched, I think it will look better than it is now.
It's very, very, very beautiful. I would like to give the author a small suggestion. I don't know yet about Ning Wuyou's overall image. I hope the author will pay more attention to it in future writing, and the paragraphs must be carefully divided. There are too many words, and the eyes are dazzled.
It's nice to watch, but Wuyou's portrayal is too little, and he has no ability to protect himself. But overall it's still very nice, I hope the author can take my suggestions.
Very nice and well written
Good-looking, really good-looking
Super super super pretty
Author: Could it be that the heroine is a twin martial soul? What is the reason why she awakens the powerful martial soul with the ability to protect herself in the later stage?
So far, the plot is good. As for the author, your updates are a bit slow [crying]
It's really beautiful. I hope the author will update it soon [shy]
The author's writing style is very good, but I think the female protagonist can be made stronger. The male protagonist seems much stronger than the female protagonist. If we can make them evenly matched, I think it will look better than it is now.
It's very, very, very beautiful. I would like to give the author a small suggestion. I don't know yet about Ning Wuyou's overall image. I hope the author will pay more attention to it in future writing, and the paragraphs must be carefully divided. There are too many words, and the eyes are dazzled.
It's nice to watch, but Wuyou's portrayal is too little, and he has no ability to protect himself. But overall it's still very nice, I hope the author can take my suggestions.
Very nice and well written
Good-looking, really good-looking
Super super super pretty
Author: Could it be that the heroine is a twin martial soul? What is the reason why she awakens the powerful martial soul with the ability to protect herself in the later stage?
So far, the plot is good. As for the author, your updates are a bit slow [crying]
It's really beautiful. I hope the author will update it soon [shy]