Greece: From the Start, I Became the God of Canyons and Rivers

It looks good, but I feel that the author is maximalist and pursues the gorgeousness of language.

The wordy things you mentioned earlier have been removed and rearranged. They shouldn't make you look tired [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The protagonist should have the power of a hidden god: hidden in tens of thousands of words without being discovered

I watched half of it before, and then continued to watch it after I stocked up a lot. I haven't finished it yet, so I'll tell you my general feelings: ① The pace of this article is relatively slow in the early stage (middle and early stages). The author writes every step in detail, including how the protagonist obtains this godhead. Every event in the Greek world (causes, results, and fighting processes) is written in more detail. Those who are good readers may like it more, but if you are used to reading fast-paced articles (like me), you may not be able to stand it. But overall, there are no big flaws, and the characters are well portrayed. ② So far, I have seen the part where Cronus becomes the new God King. How should I put it? The overall character of the protagonist has a somewhat bland feel, especially when I saw the part where he did not decide to fight for the godhood. But as the article said, his strength is already very strong, and there is no need to do such thankless things. ③Actually speaking, it is the protagonist. The author writes more comprehensively and does not focus all perspectives on the protagonist. Sometimes the protagonist does not appear for several chapters. However, generally speaking, it is centered on the protagonist and writes the story of him acquiring the godhead and traveling around the world. ④I personally like the Gaia written by the author. He is very kind and loves his children. It fits his character as the mother of the earth. As a child of Gaia, the protagonist respects him very much. ⑤(How did I list so many items? They are all basically the same, right?) The style of this article is relatively warm (?) The writing style is more gorgeous (?) (Forgive my vocabulary (☍⁰)) The author's update time pattern The above are my feelings based on what I have seen so far. If you don't like it, please don't comment. Thank you. દ ᵕ̈ ૩

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It looks good, but I don't know if there is no heroine. I hope there is no heroine [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

A little less girlish, too sensual is not good at all

The author's writing is very good 😘 and I like the author's writing style very much, but it may seem a little green when he first wrote it (Also: There are so many metaphors. The paragraph I counted the most has seven metaphors. I don't mean to belittle the author, I just want to reduce the length of the metaphors a little. After all, the number of words is really high. It's just a personal suggestion. I don't force the author to change ૮₍ ˶•‸•˶₎ა)

As the author, I have an idea to create monsters or elves or other things from Western fantasy novels. Just goblins, mermaids, orcs and the like.

Very nice (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Super like 💕💕💕👍👍👍👍👍