[Master and disciple] [Multiple heroines] [No System]
Ling Yuehan was once the Venerable Immortal of the Profound Moon, who had cultivated in seclusion for ten thousand years. While helping her disciple Mo Chen recover from his injuries, her spiritual body unexpectedly lost control.
In the midst of her chaotic consciousness, the Venerable Immortal ended up sleeping with her disciple.
When the aloof and proud Ling Yuehan awoke, she flew into a rage and wanted to cripple Mo Chen's cultivation.
But she unexpectedly discovered that her Lunar Origin was circulating within Mo Chen's body. If she killed him, her own cultivation would collapse as well, leaving her no choice but to keep him close.
Until one day, the Saintess of the Demon Realm broke into the Immortal Realm and reached out to Mo Chen. “Come with me, and see the true world.”
Ling Yuehan lowered her eyes calmly and slowly took a step forward amid a sky full of ice shards.
“Who dares lay a finger on what's mine?”
The plot is good, the battle scenes and environment descriptions are very vivid, but the emotional change between the male and female protagonists is a bit abrupt, and the pace is a bit fast, especially the relationship between the male protagonist and the master, the change in the first few chapters is a bit too abrupt, and looks a bit strange, but everything else is pretty good, come on author! 😘👍
It's okay. The author begs me not to have knives. The process can be a little more dangerous. I hope the ending must be good. I'm too old to see knives. It took me a long time to read it, but I couldn't understand it at first, and there were a lot of pitfalls. Maybe because unlike most of the novels we read, everything was not explained right away at the beginning, and you need to slowly understand it later. But after reading it all, I found that the writing is quite reasonable, but if you don't have the patience to just read the front, you will feel very frustrated. The main character can't be beaten by anyone, and the master is written like an enemy and a yandere, and then he is looking for On the way to the Gate of Chaos, I felt it was not fun because I had no strength (except when I was with other heroines, it was still good to watch), but it got better after about 100 chapters, and I could basically understand it, and the master also turned around and started to look good. Many people just watched it for a while, maybe they didn't watch much at all, and they couldn't watch it if they didn't find it exciting right away. You need to be patient to read it all. In fact, the writing is very good, so cheers for the author.
Not bad, worth recommending
The emotional transition between the male protagonist and his master is too fast, right?
Raise it first. 🙂 Five stars for encouragement👍