[Master] [Multiple heroines] [No system]
Ling Yuehan was originally the Xuan Yue Immortal who had been cultivating for thousands of years. When he was helping his disciple Mo Chen heal his wounds, his spirit body accidentally lost control.
The Immortal Lord actually had a relationship with his disciple in the chaotic consciousness.
The cold and arrogant woman was furious after waking up and wanted to destroy Mo Chen's cultivation.
But she unexpectedly discovered that her Taiyin origin was flowing in Mo Chen's body. If she killed him, her cultivation would also collapse. He was forced to keep Mo Chen under his nose.
Until that day, the saint from the demon world broke into the fairy world and stretched out her hand to Mo Chen: "Come with me to see the real world."
Ling Yuehan calmly lowered his eyes and slowly took a step in the ice-filled sky.
"Who dares to touch my things?"
Reader comments
The plot is good, the battle scenes and environment descriptions are very vivid, but the emotional change between the male and female protagonists is a bit abrupt, and the pace is a bit fast, especially the relationship between the male protagonist and the master, the change in the first few chapters is a bit too abrupt, and looks a bit strange, but everything else is pretty good, come on author! [Blowing kiss][like]
It's okay. The author begs me not to have knives. The process can be a little more dangerous. I hope the ending must be good. I'm too old to see knives.
It took me a long time to read it, but I couldn't understand it at first, and there were a lot of pitfalls. Maybe because unlike most of the novels we read, everything was not explained right away at the beginning, and you need to slowly understand it later. But after reading it all, I found that the writing is quite reasonable, but if you don't have the patience to just read the front, you will feel very frustrated. The main character can't be beaten by anyone, and the master is written like an enemy and a yandere, and then he is looking for On the way to the Gate of Chaos, I felt it was not fun because I had no strength (except when I was with other heroines, it was still good to watch), but it got better after about 100 chapters, and I could basically understand it, and the master also turned around and started to look good. Many people just watched it for a while, maybe they didn't watch much at all, and they couldn't watch it if they didn't find it exciting right away. You need to be patient to read it all. In fact, the writing is very good, so cheers for the author.
Raise it first. [Smile]
Five-star encouragement [like]
Not bad, worth recommending
The emotional transition between the male protagonist and his master is too fast, right?
The plot is good, the battle scenes and environment descriptions are very vivid, but the emotional change between the male and female protagonists is a bit abrupt, and the pace is a bit fast, especially the relationship between the male protagonist and the master, the change in the first few chapters is a bit too abrupt, and looks a bit strange, but everything else is pretty good, come on author! [Blowing kiss][like]
It's okay. The author begs me not to have knives. The process can be a little more dangerous. I hope the ending must be good. I'm too old to see knives. It took me a long time to read it, but I couldn't understand it at first, and there were a lot of pitfalls. Maybe because unlike most of the novels we read, everything was not explained right away at the beginning, and you need to slowly understand it later. But after reading it all, I found that the writing is quite reasonable, but if you don't have the patience to just read the front, you will feel very frustrated. The main character can't be beaten by anyone, and the master is written like an enemy and a yandere, and then he is looking for On the way to the Gate of Chaos, I felt it was not fun because I had no strength (except when I was with other heroines, it was still good to watch), but it got better after about 100 chapters, and I could basically understand it, and the master also turned around and started to look good. Many people just watched it for a while, maybe they didn't watch much at all, and they couldn't watch it if they didn't find it exciting right away. You need to be patient to read it all. In fact, the writing is very good, so cheers for the author.
Raise it first. [Smile] Five-star encouragement [like]
Not bad, worth recommending
The emotional transition between the male protagonist and his master is too fast, right?