From Gomora Girl to Emperor of the Universe

Very nice The main plot focuses on daily life and the emperor's uncle The protagonist collects 4 monster girls at the beginning and has a distinctive personality The protagonist was weak in the early stage, and after being assassinated once, he discovered that his strength was insufficient (although he had been strengthened once), and then in Chapter 70, he obtained the Dark Armor and the power of Reblondo.

I would like to give the author a suggestion. Write more about the interaction between the protagonist and the monster girl and the daily care between the protagonist and the monster girl. The emotional scenes should also be more detailed or the protagonist's charm that attracts the monster girl. You can't just accept it casually, otherwise it will feel like a stallion. And the plot must have a definite main line. The purpose of this book is monster girls, and it must be based on monster girls. I believe everyone is reading this. Overall, I think this book is well written by the author.

The writing is okay, but it's almost meaningless without pictures. If the author can't find the illustrations for Monster Girl, I can help you find them. Whether it's the official ones or the secondary designs by other artists, as long as you give me the artist's name, I can find them.

How can I put it, everything else is pretty good, but there are two things that are weird: ① The protagonist's character is rather weird, abstract or not, serious or not, he looks like a gangster (and a more rogue type, this kind of character is definitely not welcome), and there is no There are impressive shining points unique to the protagonist (it just makes people feel that I can do it, and it is difficult to convince the crowd) ② In more than 70 chapters, things about Nanbang appear, everyone understands it. In Otwen, there is a plot about the country that has obvious bias, which makes it difficult for people to comment. The above evaluation stops at Chapter 78, and I haven't read the rest yet. I hope my evaluation will be helpful to readers, and I hope the author's works will get better and better.

It would be nice if the male protagonist was a bit more aggressive. I feel like he doesn't have any special abilities and is easy to lead.

There aren't many problems [smiles], just don't fight all the time. . . OK? I'm begging you. Has the author @ Pigeon Jun been updated?

It can only be said that it is a pity. Because of the review issues, some of the content was embarrassing. In addition, the actual part can only be said that the author was driven crazy by the review, and it no longer had the original taste. Although there were many bad points at the beginning, it was obvious that it had really grown before it was reviewed. I can only say that it was too high and was suppressed by Tomato into a low score.

It's obvious that the author really likes candied fruits (laughs)

The handle of the broken halberd is Uncle Xiaohuang You have changed, you are no longer the person I am familiar with 😫 Hey, I just can't figure it out. If you really don't have a plot to write, don't write about a nanny. It's so embarrassing 😫 Maybe I'm used to being alone 😎 (just kidding)

Don't you think about making the protagonist huge and fighting monsters together?