I Wandered into Silent Hill and Somehow Became Kamen Rider

[Infinite-worlds setting + fast start + plot-driven + brisk pace] Wang Yan was eating hot pot and singing at home when he was suddenly pulled into an inexplicable web of cause and effect. At the same time, the True Self Soul in his hand told him this was no dream. He was about to embark on an interesting journey.

I’m new to writing, so please give me your honest feedback, pros! qaq