Hostess, Don't Do Anything, I Really Don't Want to Be a Demon Cultivator

Although you can see my voice complaining here and there in more than 100 chapters, in fact, what I want to say is that this book is a well-deserved good book. Although there are not many big waves in the early stage, the daily life is dull with the leisurely fun unique to the world of immortality, occasionally mixed with some interesting things. Interactions and the like, the overall rhythm in the early stage is relatively slow, and if you read it thoroughly, you will feel more leisurely. Later, when the author writes the first wave of climax, the rhythm is a little bit unsteady, and the overall speed becomes very fast. Then there will be some unreasonable parts of the plot, and the rhythm suddenly changes, which makes me This kind of reader is more accustomed to listening to books and listens carefully to every word and sentence. It is more uncomfortable, and then they can't hold it back and start making all kinds of complaints. Of course, I think my comments may be too extreme, but I personally think it is more reasonable. But no one is perfect, so I can't put all my expectations into the author, and I can't ask the author to write something that is really as good as I imagined. But I have confidence in this book, as long as the author can control the rhythm again, and then continue to move at a slow pace with occasional short climaxes. It will definitely be a good book once the momentum stabilizes, but don't have a sudden climax, and then stretch out the long axis to climax, which will be a bit abrupt. When writing this kind of male pornographic article, try to use as little female perspective as possible, because the subject of transformation is only watched by men, although some women Students will also like this kind of thing. Most of them may be a little disgusted with female videos, especially the intrigue part. They are all cultivating immortals and engaging in intrigue. I think these are appropriate. Don't keep repeating this just because of one plot or one character. Going around in circles on individual characters, constantly engaging in overt and covert operations, some people may really like this, but most people prefer the kind of foreshadowing that is not for intrigue. For example, this system and the foreshadowing of Tiandao and Tuntian are very good, and It was the main plot that attracted me the most, but the part about the elders scheming for power was a bit off-putting, especially when a mobile phone-like thing was added. I guess the author wanted to write about online public opinion at first, but later he didn't describe it in a long way. Okay, I won't say any more nonsense. Although I seem to have said a lot, I still hope the author can read it. In short, if you decide to read the book after reading the book reviews and looking at other people's evaluations, my suggestion is that you can read it, and it is a book that is worth investing time to read. But if you can't stand this sudden lengthening and cliche climax, you can skip it a little bit.

Damn it, it's obviously very good-looking, but there are only such a few people. Come on, author, we will win.

This book is very good. The writing and plot are not bad. Why is no one reading it? [What]

It is a light-hearted article, and it can be said to be invincible. There is no bitterness, great hatred, deep hatred, which is quite enjoyable to read, and the number of plots is not uncommon. Give some support

If author Yue returns to Blue Star, she will always be a woman.

I finished reading it in half a night. The sisters are so cute. There are not many characters described, but they are all flesh and blood. Both Tuntian and Master are good teachers and friends. I hope everyone can have a happy ending [laughs] The disadvantage is that it is a bit short. Can you make the dream life come true? I really want to see the sisters get together for hundreds of years.

Don't poke your brain, just code quickly

Um, how should I put it? It feels like it's that system. Is it because the demon from outside the territory seizes the body of Heavenly Dao and absorbs the origin of Heavenly Dao, so that it prevents others from becoming immortal and ascending?

The plot is relaxed and relaxed, with both exciting conflicts and delicate daily life. The plot logic is well connected. The characters that have appeared so far are all well described. The author is working hard, come on~

This book is quite good, but not many people have read it.

Does the author want to fuse the blue star plane in a later stage? Then the spiritual energy is revived, so that we can start a second episode of the plot [laughter]

How come there are so few people reading such a beautiful novel? Come on, the author, there will definitely be improvement [crying]

It's very good, but I've seen better novels.

Nice! Come on, author!

This book is very good, but I don't know why it's not popular.