[Transmigrates into a book + gender-bending transformation + two female leads + happy ending]
After an accident, Jiang Yue transmigrates into a cultivation novel she has read, becoming the villainess who once grew jealous of the heroine and joined forces with demonic cultivators.
The good news: she’s arrived when they were children, before she ever bullied the heroine.
“I’ll just shower the heroine with affection, build a relationship early, and cling to her coattails!”
The bad news: everyone around her is either reborn or a chosen one with a System.
And the heroine has gotten so strange. She’s nothing like she was in the original novel.
“What do you mean, you like me? Aren’t I the villainess?”
“Wait, let me explain! I really didn’t mean to become a demonic cultivator!”
Although you can see my voice complaining here and there in more than 100 chapters, in fact, what I want to say is that this book is a well-deserved good book. Although there are not many big waves in the early stage, the daily life is dull with the leisurely fun unique to the world of immortality, occasionally mixed with some interesting things. Interactions and the like, the overall rhythm in the early stage is relatively slow, and if you read it thoroughly, you will feel more leisurely. Later, when the author writes the first wave of climax, the rhythm is a little bit unsteady, and the overall rhythm becomes very fast. Then there will be some unreasonable parts of the plot, and the sudden change of rhythm makes me This kind of reader is more accustomed to listening to books and listens carefully to every word and sentence. It is more uncomfortable, and then he can't hold it back and starts making all kinds of complaints. Of course, I think my comments may be too extreme, but I personally think it is quite reasonable. But no one is perfect, so I can't put all my expectations into the author, and I can't ask the author to write something that is as good as I imagined. But I have confidence in this book, as long as the author can control the rhythm again, and then continue to move at a slow pace with occasional short climaxes. It will definitely be a good book once the momentum stabilizes, but don't climax suddenly, and then stretch out the long axis to climax, which will be a bit abrupt. When writing this kind of male pornographic article, try to use as little female pornographic articles as possible, because the subject of transformation is only watched by men, although some women Students will also like this kind of thing. Most of them may be a little disgusted with female videos, especially the intrigue. They are all cultivating immortals and engaging in intrigue. I think these are appropriate. Don't keep repeating this just because of one plot or one character. Going around in circles on individual characters, constantly engaging in overt and covert operations, some people may really like this, but most people prefer the kind of foreshadowing that is not for intrigue. For example, this system and the foreshadowing of Tiandao and Tuntian are very good, and It was the main plot that attracted me the most, but the part about the elders scheming for power was a little off-putting, especially when a mobile phone-like thing was added. I guess the author wanted to write about online public opinion at first, but later he didn't describe it in much detail. Okay, I won't say any more nonsense. Although I seem to have said a lot, I still hope that the author can read it. In short, if you decide to read the book after reading the book reviews and looking at other people's evaluations, my suggestion is that you can read it, and it is a book that is worth investing time to read. But if you can't stand this sudden lengthening and cliche climax, you can skip it a little bit.
Damn it, it's obviously very good-looking, but there are only such a few people. Come on, author, we will win.
If author Yue returns to Blue Star, she will always be a woman.
This book is very good. The writing and plot are not bad. Why is no one reading it? [What]
It is a light-hearted article, and it can be said to be invincible. There is no bitterness, great hatred, deep hatred, which is quite enjoyable to read, and the number of plots is not uncommon. Give some support
So pretty. It just has to be completed, author. It doesn't matter if the pace is faster. Even if the next chapter tells me that all this is a test given to them by the system, everyone who died in the end is resurrected. Master Tuntian and the two heroines return to Blue Star and live a wonderful life. Everyone makes dumplings together. I agree; I just hope that this story must have an ending✋😭✋
I finished reading it in half a night. The sisters are so cute. There are not many characters described, but they are all flesh and blood. Both Tuntian and the master are good teachers and helpful friends. I hope everyone can have a good ending😄. The shortcoming is that the length is a bit short. Can the dream life be realized? I really want to see the sisters get together for a hundred years.
The plot is relaxed and relaxed, with both exciting conflicts and delicate daily life. The plot logic is well connected. The characters that have appeared so far are all well described. The author is working hard, come on~
Um, how should I put it? It feels like it's that system. Is it because the demon from outside the territory seizes the body of Heavenly Dao and absorbs the origin of Heavenly Dao, so that it prevents others from becoming immortal and ascending?
Does the author want to fuse the blue star plane in a later stage? Then the spiritual energy is revived, so that we can start a second episode of the plot [laughter]