Traveling Across Uchiha, My Brother Died in My Arms

The protagonist has been trained by Ben for several years, and he has the Eternal Eye, but in the end he couldn't defeat Tobirama, and his brother's death was really in vain.

The current look and feel is good, mainly because there are more private settings, but if the author can handle these private settings properly, then I think this book can actually surpass most of Naruto fan books. I hope the author will continue to maintain it.

This book will definitely become a sacred book for eunuchs.

I still hope that there will be a female protagonist, and that the female protagonist can be placed in the last extra chapter [Eating Melon]

I think it's okay, but there are some caveats. Tobirama is terrifyingly strong. If he were really that strong, he wouldn't die from a golden horn. There is also the cooperation between Black Zetsu and Ishiki. The protagonist can only seal Kaguya again, but Ishiki wants to kill Kaguya.

Dear author, can you do some emotional lines? [Crying][crying][crying] It looks good, but should the author change the title of the book? Many people read this book because of the words in the title "I will bear my brother after his brother dies." They think that the protagonist will become invincible once his brother dies. However, the content is to gradually stack buffs for the protagonist. In the early stage, Tobirama was strengthened in order to oppress the protagonist. So many people said you, I really can't stand their critical comments. The above is just my personal understanding The writing is clear and refreshing, the self-introduction of the characters is very unique, and it is very novel for the first time. Please practice more, come on, I am optimistic about you, the author.

Did you raise Tobirama's combat power too high?

It's really, really great. The content is very novel and the author is very rigorous. There are no outstanding points so far. If there are more words, it might become a good book. I won't lose money if I invest in it~~~

This novel is still pretty awesome.

Very good, very beautiful

The moustache is not dark yet

A rare good book

Come on, come on, come on

Good, good, good, good

Not bad, come on, author

It's great to see the power of the brain

It's pretty good, come on

It would be nice to have more details

Although I haven't watched Naruto, the plot is quite interesting.

Very nice looking and no clutter

It's really good to watch. I recommend you to read it. The protagonist's emotions are described very delicately. But my favorite is the cute Kyuubi [laughing][laughing]

Really, I saw a lot. This one is really worth a look.

Very good, not too perverted and not trashy