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The writing is very good, and there is obviously a faint sense of happiness in daily life in the writing, but when conveyed to me, it always evokes low self-esteem and emptiness. The level of mobilizing readers' emotions is solid enough.

Someone once said that literary and artistic workers must be literate, and this is perfectly reflected in the author👍On this point alone, this work is worth full marks, there is no left-brain attack on the right-brain, it is so real The best yandere novel I have read so far. The author did not add any plot to make up for the word count, and it is also the most cultured episode [face covering]

This is a novel that does not rely on incarceration play and the threat of violence to show the core of yandere. The heroine is not a traditional crazy yandere, but integrates paranoia into every crevice of daily life. It abandons the exaggerated dramatic description of yandere. There are no knives and chains. This twisted sense of dependence exactly reflects the loss of boundaries in modern intimate relationships. It explores compromise and control in adult emotions, breaking the inherent framework of the subject matter. Although the description is still a bit abrupt and the main line is not focused, overall it is very good. No, my book is [Inquiry], help me

Five stars, give me a brief review 1: The author has specifically read related books, and is not writing based on the basic impression of yandere nowadays, nor will he just kill the male protagonist and die for his love, which is special among so many yandere novels. 2: The pace is slow, but not too slow. It is recommended for people who like to watch daily life. The male protagonist may be a bit of a straight man in the early stage, but it will be okay in the later stage. 3: The male protagonist can accept the female protagonist's behavior and show pure love. He will not run away from the female protagonist because of her abnormality, but will always accompany the female protagonist. 4: There is a reason why the heroine likes the hero, it's not love at first sight. 5: Don't know

Be creative and not follow the crowd The writing is passable Creativity online Can kill time Redundant sentence structure may affect the perception. Partly to emphasize the sense of routine, but too much will make you bored. In terms of plot, you can feel it: the author has a strong purpose for the story line, and should already have the development line of the entire story. I must remind you: Never change it randomly for a few people! Many people just make random changes that make the work look fragmented! Another small problem: the use of personal pronouns seems a little confusing, and I had to read it again and again in some places. Writing is a long-term polishing process, so I won't give random suggestions. I will continue to follow up on this comment, and I hope the author can pay attention [blowing kiss] Another follow-up review: Although straightforward analysis of the emotions of the male and female protagonists can lower the reading threshold, this book itself has its own threshold.

This is the first time I have written a review after reading it. One thing about this book is that it is in line with XP, and the author's unique description of psychology is another. Just like the article says that the male protagonist's life is more exciting than the Nook Game, after reading this book, I feel like I have experienced the real line of a Nook Game with a well-plotted plot. However, my personal level is limited, so I really have the urge to make the author's book into a complete game. 😋😋😋College students will learn something first, and we will see if they can start working within this year😋😋😋

The author of this book writes very carefully. In the process of reading later, I continue to understand the heroine, and the character of the male protagonist also plays a role in it. There is a conflict between reality and unreality. This book is a book that requires careful understanding, substituting it into reality and making assumptions, and you will find that it is an unimaginable story. The author writes well. This book review cannot express my reading experience. I only hope that the author can write more and I will support it. Please move to the text It's a miracle that the author hasn't been banned…

It's very good. The story is very real and there is no lily. The early foreshadowing and later changes are well written. It was very touching when the two people truly confided in their nearly complete selves. In the middle period, Luo Li was very humble and a little willful. I did feel a little uncomfortable at the beginning of this period, but later on, they reconciled and the relationship sublimated was great [like] [like] [like]. I think the character Luo Li is very kind and super cute. The key is to be able to make substantial changes for her lover, which is very rare among yanderes, especially when they love each other and are really trying to protect the eternal love and take care of each other's feelings. In my heart, this yandere must be T0. [Laughing][laughing][laughing] [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

If you want to write about yandere, you have to write like this. This is not to say that the stereotyped yandere does not exist in reality, and it is possible for a person to live in any shape, but only characters with arcs can have deep emotions. When the characters are three-dimensional enough, the plot flows naturally, allowing readers to bless these two people who may exist in the world from the bottom of their hearts. Please let the story continue.

It's good to read. The author is very attentive to the characters he writes. He specially studied psychology to create a heroine with a distinctive personality. It gave me a new definition of "yandere". Come on, I hope the next book will appear on my recommendation list.

Good, good, good, good, good reading. I have been following it since the last book. I hope I won't enter the dark room this time.

I have read twenty chapters and it is very suitable for my taste. The characters are very delicate and the plot is very smooth. Among the yandere novels I have read, this novel is very good. Thank you for the author.

Thank you to the author for writing such a wonderful story. This book is also quite in line with my taste. The male and female protagonists written by the author have distinct personalities (this is the first time I have seen such a female protagonist). It is not a vigorous love, but some are just close to the ordinary life. It also let me know that such a beautiful love also exists between such two people. (PS: Fortunately, I added a bookshelf when I saw this book in August, otherwise I would have missed such a beautiful book)

A score of 9 or even 10 is better. The author worked very hard and read a lot of references. This probably means that the description is more realistic. Finally, I would like to congratulate the author for completing the update. I would like to give you a five-star support! [Top post]

Emm... This book is really, really good. Although it is the first time I have seen such a life-like male and female protagonist, like a real person with desires for both sides, and I have a deeper understanding of yandere people, pure love and love, hehe😁. Looking forward to a new book. (Pray to the author) (joke)

The yandere in this book is the yandere I most want to find in Tomatoes. Different from the yandere in other novels, I also want such a yandere in reality [crying] so can the author assign one to me [sending heart]

Good-looking, conceptually good-looking. In the past, I mostly watched novel pull-off stories centered around "Sickness Named Love", but now that I think about it, the concept of "yandere" is indeed not clear, and it is far-fetched in itself. The author's book has once again improved my taste in this column, and I am looking forward to the next book (I also like the Western fantasy world view of swords and magic)

To be honest, this is the time I have really finished reading a novel, and the time between reading it and finishing it is very short. You're right, it really should be finished. I was fascinated by it before, but sometimes I skip a few pages when the main plot is finished. I don't know what to say. After all, I'm an omnivore and I'm not sensitive to plots. Unless I'm particularly toxic, it's pretty good [I learned it]

It was really comfortable to watch, and it was a work that was very in line with my taste. I think the yandere here is a yandere in the true sense of the word who is both sick and in line with the yandere. I highly recommend it to book lovers. When I saw some plots, I even suspected that the author locked Shen Ha in a small dark room, so you know what I mean [shy]

Super pretty! Not cliche, fun, sweet It's so beautiful, woo woo woo [crying] Bonus points for pure love, bonus points for yandere, bonus points for attachment, bonus points for lolita, bonus points for lust, bonus points for writing, bonus points for plot, and bonus points for sweet writing. Author, you must work harder! [Crying] I watched it for eighteen hours without realizing it [crying] (I like to read some passages over and over again)

It is a step-by-step yandere sweet novel. It does not progress as quickly as the traditional yandere novel at the beginning, but the pace is very well controlled. There is no excessive stomachache or pulling, and the misunderstandings are solved on the same day. It is very enjoyable to read. But maybe because of this, the ending is also very fast, but this is not a shortcoming. In short, it is recommended. There are all kinds of elements that you want to see, including but not limited to 0721, refreshing water, and a child's burp bag that is fighting stress again. In addition, the author's research on mental illness can be said to be very detailed. He seems to be very professional and willing to put in the effort. This is also a good comment.

The book is finished very quickly and seems a bit short. The length is very comfortable and I can read it in one sitting, which is great. But it is indeed time to end it. This is a very wise choice. The closing remarks show that the author really wants to present a good work to readers and has worked hard. Thank you for your hard work. This book is to my liking, first of all, the characters' personalities. Many of the protagonists in the current Tomato novels have very Shapey personalities that make me feel sick, or they are incapable of portraying characters. The characters in this book look very comfortable, without any poisonous points. Secondly, the plot and the development of the plot. The plot is very complete, with causes and consequences, but there are less ups and downs. I felt very comfortable watching it without the knife, but it will make the novel boring and fail to arouse the reader's interest in reading. It will also reduce the interest of the book and cannot hang the reader (other novels are pulling back and forth). Of course, the author's original intention is just to write the story, so this is good. The plot is compact and the story develops very quickly without any delay. It is very comfortable to watch, but the confirmation of the relationship is a bit too sudden. It would be nice if there could be more psychological description and demeanor description, and the ambiguity and feelings of the male and female protagonists could be slowly written out. The driving part at the end can be written in more detail. Of course, it can also be written in the extra chapter [Adoration] Thanks to the author for writing a high-quality yandere article. The yandere in this book is also my favorite. I look forward to the author's new book [Adoration] Come on, write about the big brother of the emperor's uncle. (Also, thank you to the author for sending me the loli picture, now your picture is mine)

A very nice book. I didn't like yandere very much (I thought it was too extreme) but this book made me re-examine this concept for the first time. It's nice to read and I hope the author will continue to make extra stories.

It's so good to read. Author, you must write novels for the rest of your life!

It's pretty good, a daily novel, and the heroine doesn't make people feel suffocated. I hope it will continue with more.

Among the pure love romances I have read, it may not take long for me to finish reading this book, because there is not much in the book itself, but with these words, the author actually writes about feelings very well. I like this feeling of both parties treating each other as the best being. Maybe the book itself is astringent, but there is no shortage of things that I can say that I really like the feelings. Whether it is astringent or otherwise, it is a manifestation of mutual love between the two parties.

The detailed design is true to reality, the plot is developed through diseases, and the psychological description reflects the contradiction between men and women. It is still top-notch.

Good book. At least in terms of writing, it is already very high. And quite knowledgeable. The person who best fits the image of a yandere is indeed borderline personality disorder. There's nothing hard-written or anything like that. From the beginning of school to the present, this kind of storyline can happen in reality. Not that it's a weird plot. This is the best thing I feel.

Come on, I'm writing about the big brother of the emperor's uncle [laughing evilly]. I'm going to rate it first. I'll come back to the review later when I've been reading for a long time. Update it quickly, it's not enough! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Quickly write about education and training [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Author designation has the story, the second author to focus on. I couldn't help but cry when I read the fifth to last chapter. I saw my own shadow in both the male and female protagonists. Thank you very much to the author [cry][cry][cry]