Can the Dawn of Ellie's Secret Dream of Ompharos?

Good looking good looking Personally speaking, I don't think Xiaobai has OOC. I feel that the author has written it very well. The interaction between Xiaobai and the train crew is very cute. I feel so soft after watching it. In my opinion, the iron tomb written in big letters by the author is a cute one (?) Anyway, I think it is very cute, and it does not make people hate it like some articles. The bickering between Tie Tomb and Huan Long is also very funny. I really like Tie Tomb in this article. Then, the author, you write very well. I hope you will update more, but you should also take care of yourself and pay attention to your health! Finally, I want to say one more thing: Xiaobai Xiaobai, we like you

It's just a personal review, not objective ↓ (Die Jia, I have never played Bengtie. If you think what I say is not to your liking, you can just think I'm farting. The following are all based on my own comparison of this book and my own ideas. First of all, the quality: it is relatively outstanding among the fans. There are not too many pitfalls for Xiaobai, some of them are quite superficial, but it can still support the reading of Ompharos (definitely) * Content: I can vaguely feel what the author wanted to express but didn't express it very well. I can only say that come on, author, learn more and read more╭(ᵔ_>ᵔ)╮ Bai E's mental journey is a bit poorly depicted, and his growth cannot be clearly felt, but there is not much going on for this point, so it can be slightly ignored\( ͯω ͯ)/ The author himself also said that the pace is fast, which is true. At this stage, novices don't know much, so they do less. At most, they interact with some characters. These are daily main lines, and there is almost no difference from watching the plot again (I compared it with the fans I have read) ( '▿ ' ) If you want to impress people, you need to arrange some highlights, such as crises that are not in the original plot, come because of Xiaobai, and can be solved by very few people. Add a sense of urgency, add some growth, and arrange highlights. Of course, this is just a theory. The details depend on the author. I'm just talking on paper, and I know the difficulty well |•'-'•)و✧ Also, I really like this book, as you can see from the short essay and the five stars. I'm not here to criticize (′へ`, ) * Kua Kua: It is mainly written about Xiaobai, so Xiaobai's scenes are full and the daily life is very warm. If you want to watch the sunny Samoyed with your eyes closed, it will definitely make people's eyes brighter. It is much better than raising salmon (pointing at the salmon). The plot can also be seen with care. I respect every cook who generates electricity for love. I will watch this book until the end, hoping for a happy ending (◍ ´꒳` ◍) Writing short compositions is really a waste of my brain...˃ ˄ ˂̥̥ This is my way of expressing my love for books.

I think the author's writing is really good, especially the four articles "If Kephal never forgets". After reading this once, I will read it again almost every day. The meeting of this golden descendant is really good (although it is only temporary), and the author is also good at raising Bai E (at least better than mhy). The Iron Curtain appearing in the plot also adds interest to the plot. The overall feeling is relatively relaxed and pleasant (after reading it, I forgot that it seemed to be a national sports article). I am particularly looking forward to the plot from Baie to Ompharos. I think this is a work worth watching.

Samoyed Xiaobai please form a lifelong unknown guest with the little raccoon Qiongbao [almost crying] I will do anything

After thinking about it for a while, I decided to talk about my feelings after watching it so far. Iron Tomb's presence is too high. He obviously has memory, while Bai'e is in a state of amnesia. This leads to the fact that the problems that Bai'e can face originally need to be solved by Iron Tomb. Bai'e's own ability needs Iron Tomb to release it. Personally, I can't accept this [face covering]

This is the most satisfying fanfic I have read so far. Except for the lack of updates, I am very satisfied with the rhythm of the plot and the description of the characters is not bad. It is a very good fanfic. The author needs to work hard.

The tempo is quite fast, but at the moment it seems that he is just a Bai E who can transform into God's E and beat Iron Tomb with his elbow, but he has no memory of reincarnation.

It's good to watch, and it's about the only noob that Tomato chases (I've basically read all the books about noob that Tomato mentions), but it's similar to the problems mentioned in the long review, and the highlight of the climax/the mood of the article is not connected, it feels a bit wasted >_<

I feel like Iron Tomb is going to look like Xiao Shi (?), Author, come on! Scored! Let's get more people to raise the score ()

It's a great book. It's super good-looking and the plot is very smooth. The only bad thing is - can the teacher read more? I really like it(//∇//)

Give yourself a score (👍

A very heartwarming Xingtie second creation. As a national athlete from another world (with very little barrage content), Urban Bai came to the Black Tower Space Station and spent the pioneering journey of the space station, Yaliluo, and Luofu Immortal Boat with the Pioneers and other train members.

It's very interesting. The detailed description of emotions makes me cry [I almost cried]. Although the full text is relatively short, it is very consistent with the character and exciting. It is also very warm and gets along well with everyone on the train. The extra chapters are even better. The expression of emotions is very good.

It's a bit frustrating, but it fits Bai E's current situation.

Super pretty! ! ! I like! ! ! Give it five stars! ! ! Please accept it! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]! ! !

It's good-looking, Xiaobai is good, Train Set is good, and the author is good

Very good novice, very good trio, very good train crew Come on, teacher. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Xiaobai, hehe, my Xiaobai, he is so cute No, my girlish heart has been hit (*/∇＼*)

The teacher's writing is really good, but it's not enough to read👀. The teacher must write it to the finale: 3

The author writes very well

Noob! My novice! [Cry]

Dear author, come on, come on, come on! If you stop updating, I will die. [Cry]

Teacher, please be nice to the savior

It's super rare that there is no character in Honkai Impact [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Hug the author big [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Ahhhh, it looks so good! ! ! Teacher, you must update vigorously.

This is really a different romantic story

It looks good, please come on author [laughs]

The plot is not procrastinating. The only shortcoming is that there are few updates. The author should update more, preferably two updates a day. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Nice looking, looking forward to the next post.

Very beautiful (don't know what to say)