On Our Wedding Night, Master Wept and Knelt Down, Begging Me to Come Back.

I have read more than 118 chapters, which is also the latest chapter. To make an objective evaluation, the first 30 chapters are indeed a mess. After all, the author is also a newbie. Later, he also started to write well by hand. The male protagonist will not say that he still has some feelings for the master and the others, but there should be more later. Chasing the husband, because it has been cleared up, and you can see that the author's characterization is getting better and better. It would be good if the front part could be properly revised. I think the score of this book should be around 8 points, mainly because many people just read the front part and say the score is very low.

After looking at it, I personally feel that there are still some small flaws in the rebirth setting at the beginning. Because the protagonist does not have any physique or magic weapon that can help him to be reborn, and the time of his rebirth is before the master and senior sister have a change of heart. His change is too sudden. Has he ever considered whether his previous life was a deliberately arranged dream? Did this dream deliberately lead him to create a gap between his senior sister and his master, so that others could take advantage of it? Another point is that after all, the turning point in the dream appears on the junior brother, so the protagonist should secretly observe what is wrong with this junior brother. The protagonist is in pain there. It hurts so much that I feel a little emotional. After all, if there is nothing wrong with the junior brother, then it must be the problem of Master and Senior Sister. But if Master and Senior Sister are to be accepted later, it must be the problem of the junior brother... The plot progresses relatively quickly, and the fact that there is no cuckold plot is worthy of praise. The author keeps up the good work.

The introduction attracts you, and the content is pretty good. However, if the main plot is the master and the arch-enemy, I don't know what the purpose of inserting a season is, and it doesn't seem to have any special role in promoting the plot. In short, I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot

The plot is okay, the characters are delicate, and the author's writing skills have improved significantly. It feels like he didn't write it by one person. It's slightly toxic in the early stage, but the Shura field in the harem is very enjoyable in the later stage. If you can't stand it, you can start watching after the male protagonist leaves the sect.

I just need to torture the male protagonist a little bit in the early stage. I want to see the master turn into a yandere and chase his husband in the later stage [laughs evilly]

Five stars straight away, I don't know why I always like to watch the crematorium type, and it's best to watch the kind that leads to a happy reunion, and in the end they are together beautifully. Maybe it has something to do with my own experience. Sometimes people really do things like ghosts that hurt the people they like and they can't take it back. After experiencing so much love, no one should be able to part with it again, right?

Except for the first few chapters, which are a bit delayed, the plot is still very good. Come on

Since the male protagonist's sword will be taken away by the master, why not use a horizontal sword or a wild goose feather sword instead, and finally defeat the master, and then [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] @ Soda-flavored Coke

After watching a little bit, I think it's okay. There's nothing fundamentally wrong with it, but it's just a bit annoying at first. The only drawback is that I didn't see the foreshadowing of Master and Senior Sister awakening their memories, and I don't know if there will be any later. The reason for the low score may be that there is not enough cleansing later on, so just keep abusing them and lower their status a little bit. I can do it later, it makes up for a lot of logical flaws and poisonous points, keep writing.

The overall feeling is okay. There are currently no poisonous spots and it can be eaten as food during the window period [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

It can be seen that the poison resistance is higher, but it is only slightly poisonous.

No wonder the male protagonist's master and sister don't let him go out alone. Ever since he escaped from the sect, he has been molested by female gangsters every day, and there have been various night attacks.

Everything that fits the yandere story

Who is his master's nemesis?

It's not easy to write, and I'm used to good reviews. The novel is very average. If you can read it, please continue.

I started reading it after chapter 30 and it feels good.

It's pretty cool, keep up the good work.

Although the writing style and concept cannot be said to be very good, it is enough to be enjoyable without having to think too hard.

This is an imperial book of wine poems [laughs][laughs]

Okay, okay, looks good

Very nice, I can recommend this book

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty

Okay, it's pretty good-looking

Don't care about others, at least I like to watch it

There is no clear description of the reasons why Master and Senior Sister's feelings for the protagonist change, such as their rebirth.

Five points is definitely less, but it's still pretty good.

I think it's fair, it's a little bit poisonous, but you can still watch it without any brains [eating melon]

It's ok, nothing major bad points

It would be better if the male protagonist's voice could be heard by his master and senior sister

Overall, it's okay. I can't say the writing is great, but it's passable.