The Rumored Cool School Girl Seems a Little Different

Give yourself a good review [like] To be honest, after reading the novel I wrote, I feel that the biggest problem is the emotional foreshadowing and the inner description of the character (less in the front, more in the back). I started writing short stories. I originally planned to finish it in 100,000 words, but I didn't expect to end up writing nearly 200,000 words. Well, there is still room for improvement. I will work hard on the next one. Give me a three-star to encourage myself [laughs]

In fact, it's well written, and it's really better now that there are few books to read. Some of the previous problems are that there are too many riddles, the male protagonist is a bit too innocent, and there is not enough sweetness. It would be better to add more psychologically, but don't add too much. Emm This may be like adding salt to season the food, but there is no problem later. I read in the comment section that there might be knives, so I ran away because I couldn't stand it. I was afraid of eating too many knives some time ago, and my five-star wisdom teeth were gone. There are not many people, I don't know why One thing is that it may be a bit depressing to watch, maybe because there are too many foreshadowings or other reasons. The headaches mentioned above for the male and female protagonists have not been explained yet, but they always feel like they are overwhelming. This will cause a bit of depression and affect the viewing experience. The heroine felt irritable after her aunt entered the hospital and was drinking on the roadside. When I saw her, I thought there would be no NTR, okay? However, the hero didn't feel that the heroine's education was enough, and she was coaxed by the heroine easily. Such a dangerous issue should be explained clearly.

The author is very interesting

Just hard and sweet, the author is just hard and sweet

It's good to watch. Watch more(￣￣)

Who knows the sense of redemption that comes from suddenly eating a bite of rice among a pile of rocks?

Yes, but in the plot where the hero and heroine suddenly get a headache, there won't be a knife, right?

To be honest, it feels like the author wants to write something new, but the last explanation is a bit hard to understand for me. However, the previous content is still very good.

The author greatly hopes for a good ending, please Big cheers for the author!

It's well written and interesting, but the author is a bit short [smile]

Very good! This is a very good article. The progress bar is like flying a plane. I support you, author! Must be five stars!

It's nice to look at, but I don't want a knife [grievance]

The author can work on it a little more, there is no need to rush to finish it [Thinking]

The author writes very well, very sweet

Brilliant, a masterpiece from heaven.

The structure is very good and the description is very detailed. Although it is the author's first book, it is well written [Love]

Very good, I haven't seen an online article that touches me so much in a long time

It's well written, but why no one reads it [laughs]