An Adventure in Another World Starting from Loli Priest

It's an excellent daily Western fantasy world adventure. It may be because the author is a newbie, but some of the plots may be abrupt and have a bad look. But on the whole, there is no problem. Please continue to work hard!

The bandits really didn't hold back. Although I burned, killed and looted, I was a good person, right? I took a look at it later and found out that it had been changed, so I'll give it 5 stars.

It's a very interesting story about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. The author's writing style is also very good. Although some people thought it had some poisonous points in the early stage, I heard that the author has changed it, but I personally don't think there is anything very poisonous about it. Come on, author [please update]

Well, it's quite good. It's mainly about listening. The new author has a good imagination and good character creation. If you like the Western Fantasy style, you can read it. The author changed the article after listening to the advice. Don't be so picky in Tomato. There are some inconsistencies and repetitions in some places. I support the new author. Five-star review

The problem is not small. Some parts do not conform to the general rules of the development of things, but it is okay. In short, you can watch it without thinking. The protagonist's character is incomprehensible, which is quite strange. I don't know what the main plot is at the moment. If you just want to read a book or just want to show off, you have to think carefully. It's okay as a daily novel. The style of the book is more like the different world in Japanese comics, so some of the people in it are a little nervous. But as for the two-spined salamander, from this point of view, things are going well. All in all, it's a pretty good book.

In the early stage, the scene of drinking and kneeling on the washboard did feel a bit nonsensical, but just treat it as a joke without logic. It has obviously improved later on, and there is no such plot anymore. The subsequent plot also feels that the author is getting better and better as he writes it. There is a section in the middle where Narcissus is the protagonist and Of course, all of my clones are female. Yes, there is a Master Qian at the beginning which feels quite abrupt, but there is no such character later on. If you like this kind of theme, you can check it out. After the early stage, the rest is pretty good, and there is a lot of content. The author also listened to the advice and even gave small gifts to fans [sending hearts] [likes]

Extremely cute, I feel like the author might be cute too [full] I feel like the main character is not as cute as the author, I want to rua [smile]

A very good book. It's the first 20 pictures that I feel are so awkward when I listen to them. But since this author is a new author, the platform should be blamed. Because it is difficult to change books in Tomato. Moreover, the author interacts more and is a real person. Give some encouragement. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

This book is okay, but the content is more daily, which is normal. After all, the main character is a max-level boss. If it doesn't write about daily life, it will overwhelm the combat power or get tired of seeing alien enemies. It is relatively rare for a main author to know how to use the character's own attributes. Many authors are just pretending to be transformed, just like the one who transforms into a cat, just give me an honest meow, and the number of words in the mouth is limited. The shortcoming is that the characters are not vivid enough and three-dimensional, which is a common problem among ordinary authors. I can only say that the brain waves are right and there are no big shortcomings, so I give it full marks.

I just read a dozen chapters, and it reminded me of the book that was serialized in light novels back then, Yomi's "I was accidentally injured by the gods, I just want to be a normal person". I feel that the writing style, world view, character creation, atmosphere, etc. All imitate the style of Japan's light novels back then. Now that light novels have disappeared, this relaxed style and classic world view are rarely so original, and more are borrowed and modified. I don't know if you have seen that book friend has also read it later, and you can comment on whether the style of this book is the same.

Great writing, keep it up! ! ! Looking forward to the follow-up! I feel like the author is a girl and she has a lot of daily life, which is not to my liking~

As a benefactor, kneeling on the washboard is indeed a bit poisonous. But the author should not have too much influence. If the author is compared to a restaurant owner, then the author is making condiments when writing. Some people may question your taste, but don't change the original style just because of a few comments. This may only lose original customers.

It's simple, biased, and the writing is excellent. There are almost no descriptions of women's clothing and female bodies, and zero descriptions of female abduction. It can be said that they are the top batch of transformation stories in the Western fantasy background of Tomato. It can be understood that the protagonist leads a group of full-level female accounts and travels into the Western sword and magic world similar to the world view of the DNF game. The highlight of the multi-vest is the daily adventures of the Loli Priest, the bond with the various female supporting characters, and the highlight moments when she appears in front of others. Because she is a max-level account, the heroine's props and skills are all top-notch, including abilities. The several clones also have their own merits. Of course, my favorite is the female mecha. Who doesn't like mechas? Hey~ The writing style is perfect, the battle scenes are well described, and all kinds of details are described. The only shortcoming is that there is almost no description of the character's appearance. This is the biggest regret. Hey Loli, how can there be no food-grade jiojio description? Tsk tsk. This writing is worth collecting, and I will keep reading for more of the super long one!

Overall, the new author is pretty good. Although some of the content is a bit toxic, the author should listen to his advice and encourage newcomers [Love] If possible, I recommend that the author complete the work himself and then revise it again, changing some of the settings and content while keeping the main character unchanged. On the basis of being a true fan of the original work, the basic creation of the original work will be relatively simple. For example, the first version and the final draft of a graduation thesis may have a name [laughing] After all, this setting is still good. I see that many book friends are reading it, so you can consider it @The Crow Who Can't Borrow Wings

It's a good novel. The protagonist is truly invincible and can distinguish between laziness and business. At least for now, it's fun to read. It doesn't have any of the bad routines of "Ku Qu Wen" (PS: With so many accounts, it's not necessary to change them all to women. You can add a Big Brother account appropriately)

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It's quite good-looking, and it's easy to watch in daily life. In my personal opinion, there are too many characters and too many names, which makes it a bit difficult to remember. It can add some memory to other main characters. So far in the academy chapter, the students Bai Zhuo Gugu and Kitty Girl are good memory points, or they can emphasize the characteristics of a certain character multiple times. You can give the characters some cute nicknames and add them in front of their names to make them easier to remember. Represents personal views only.

May I ask if you are single/hundred/married?

You can have Tie Tie, but Tie Tie cannot be the main line! The protagonist comes with a bunch of max-level items, which is similar to the Bone King route. Don't read the super abstract suggestions in the comment area, they are already very abstract! What the protagonist will go through and what he will become should not be suggested by the readers [laughing and crying]

It's very good. It was a little slow in the early stage, but later on it looked okay [blowing kiss] Come on, author!

Yes, it's very interesting. As you go to the end, you can see that the author is making progress, and he actively listens to readers' suggestions. The protagonist is also very cute, and the posts are very comfortable to read. He is a rare and good author [Like][Like][Like]

Good-looking and good-looking. I just like to watch some invincible and sweet everyday things.

This book is really a masterpiece among daily novels in my mind

It's good, the characters are all active, but the plot advances too slowly, and there are too many pitfalls dug every time. There are also many benefits. The word count in the recent update is a bit short [Punch Out]. However, the score is a bit low, I think it could be higher than 8.0. The plot starts with a white-haired one...

Good looking, nothing poisonous. I hope to summon more characters from other accounts and post them myself to watch. It was okay at the beginning, but in the end the protagonist became a backdrop. It feels like the protagonist just does nothing and only mentions it occasionally. If you really can't afford it, take out some more props, pets, etc. From the "game" to install them. At least it looks more fun, and it's better than leaving one-button follow all the time and doing nothing. You can also interact more with other game accounts. There is no need to separate them all. Just one slime appears near the protagonist with dozens of them at a time.

It has a bit of a priest lady flavor, the first part is average, and the latter part is a little better (at first glance when I read the title, I really thought it was Willis, the beginning is similar, Western Fantasy, Sex Change, Light Hundred, Invincible, Online Game Travel, Forest Birth Point, Full Level Priest Lolita, Rescue Team of Twenty-something Adventurers with Missing Arms and Legs)

I think the score of this book is a bit low. It shouldn't be just this. According to my past experience, it should be able to reach a score of 8.0 Or above. The whole book does not have many outstanding points, and it has surpassed many books. It can also be seen that the writing style is gradually improving, and it can be seen that the author has carefully polished this book.

Not bad, looks good~

Overall, it can be rated as above average. It can be seen that the author listens to the advice, and the plot is becoming more and more interesting, and will not be exhausted in the later stages. But relatively speaking, because the author is a newcomer, the early stage is a bit boring. This is relatively uncomfortable, and it feels like boiling water. You can try to jump directly to the second chapter, and the viewing experience will be much better.

It's very interesting to watch, the plot is also very interesting, and the characters are well developed. It's just that sometimes the AI ​​smells a bit strong in some places. Should it be fixed? About a dozen chapters? There will be no such problem later. Like 👍🏻