[Full text completed] [Harry Potter fan] [Deha] [Group portrait]
This article is also called "After Kissing the Dark Mark of the Enemy"
[Preface: This is a story about "pollution"]
Harry Potter kisses Draco Malfoy's Dark Mark.
This is not love, it is a declaration of shared guilt by the desperate.
When the Savior's lips were stained with the Death Eater's mark, something was changed forever.
After the Ministry of Magic denied the truth about Voldemort's return, and in the shadow of Hogwarts becoming a prison, two teenagers who were supposed to kill each other began a survival alliance based on absolute interests and twisted understanding.
And the war has just torn off the mask of hypocrisy.
Reader comments
This book is really beautiful. The author's writing is very good and very sad. God knows what I was crying about. I cried almost all the time, one tissue after another. In this book, I saw a group of brave Slytherins: Xiao Long, Xiao Duo, Pansy, Blaise, Narcissa, Severus...
I am very moved by the feelings of the Black family...
Death Eaters don't have patron saints because they don't know love.
Bella has no patronus, she only believes in the Dark Lord, but she loves Narcissa.
Bella was loyal, and she still did not betray the Dark Lord, but her love for Narcissa made her offend again and again, so much so that she disobeyed the Dark Lord.
The Black family is always pure!
The later story was particularly beautiful, and I just laughed when I saw the ending. But it would be better without Voldemort
This is really a very, very high-quality DeHaven article. Why aren't you popular, author? ?
Maybe there is a reason why the traffic data is bad? All in all, I would like to say that this fanfic is really well written, so good! It deserves more people to read it.
The overall short length just satisfies my heart as a person who doesn't like to read long articles, but the plot development and the rhythm of the article do not make it too impatient or unclear, and the writing style is very smooth and comfortable to read.
For a fan work that has plot development that needs to be understood and is not long, smooth and comfortable writing and writing style are very important, and I think the author has achieved it.
Also, I personally don't really like reading fanfics that focus on the plot of the original novel, because they often use rebirth as the subject matter. This kind of development from a God's perspective is often boring and has low readability, and can easily accelerate the collapse of the characters. Therefore, I prefer post-war novels because the characters and story backgrounds are more realistic. However, without a God's perspective, this book not only writes a plot that meets the expectations of the public readers, but also shows the three-dimensionality and brilliance of each character. It is really very good at writing.
I think this fanfic will become popular one day.
It's very good to read. The writing style of the new author is very good. I highly recommend it and the image creation is very good. Slytherin is for his family, his parents and himself, Gryffindor is for the world and his friends
Very beautiful! ! It is a breath of fresh air among Tomato HP fans. The writing style is very good. I have rejected many of Deha's writing styles. From the time Harry kissed Draco's Dark Mark, their fates became entangled. The subsequent plot development was also smooth, the emotional line was not blunt, and the character's personality was relatively close to the original work. It was this arch-rival literature. (The confrontation path is great, I love to watch each other.) This is fan fiction. It is not the kind of HP leather cover. It follows the original plot line but has its own ideas. It also makes up for a lot of regrets and eases the relationship between Slytherin and Gryffindor. Most people survived the war, and Harry and Draco also found happiness. This is the meaning of fan fiction. Although I really feel sorry for Dumbledore, I can only say that he chose the ending for himself [crying] Although there is a small bug in the Elder Wand, it doesn't have much impact overall. This episode is also so sweet, it makes me feel at ease😌 I like to watch this kind of sweet post-war couple's daily life. Everyone is living happily and looking forward to tomorrow.
Good-looking, very good-looking. The pace of the first few chapters is a bit fast, but the subsequent plot development is just right, with ups and downs, attractive enough, and very interesting to watch (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. The character's personality is also very three-dimensional, the writing is delicate, and it's very enjoyable to read a series of them [Blow a kiss] (I read it until midnight and didn't want to stop, hahaha [Sending my heart])
The author's writing is excellent, and the family, friendship, and love between the characters are very touching. The core of the story is a warm mutual redemption and mutual growth. Whether it is Harry, Draco, or other characters (no spoilers here), their journey has not been easy. Harry is really the well-deserved savior of the wizarding world, brave, sincere, and kind... He strives to let everyone stand in the light. I kept crying while watching it.
This book is simply a miracle. This is the first time I have read Harry Potter fanfics. From the beginning to the process of resistance, the fanfics I have read so far have made me very happy. I feel that I can do two sets of test papers. The foreshadowing is good, the writing is good, the plot development is also very good, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. Personally, I feel that it is not OOC at all. In a word, the teacher is a god!
It's beautiful, I recommend everyone to watch it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
I have read Chapter 27 so far, the quality is guaranteed
The chapters are short, but the content is compact, the logic is clear, and the emotions are delicate. It also makes up for a lot of my regrets, and the author's writing style is also good. In short, it is worth watching [Blow Kiss]
It's beautiful, super beautiful. I cried for half an hour during the 32 chapters. The plot is great, and the author's writing style is also great. He wrote the group portrait vividly. Can you all go and show me a look?
I haven't finished it yet, but it's a really good book that I couldn't put down. I like [send heart] [send heart] very much
This book is actually quite nice. Wow, looking at the ending, I really have the feeling that love can really break everything. It's a very happy ending. Such a happy ending is worthy of their difficult process. Again, if you give 99, you must be happy. Okay, but why are there so few people? ! ! ! ! Such little popularity is not worthy of such a magical author! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Come, come, come! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Look, look, it's good to read this book୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨
It's really well written... It's okay if I shed a few tears... As long as everyone is happy...
I just realized that I don't have any book reviews. Come on, teacher 😋. In short, it's very beautiful and delicious.
It's good to read. I read another book by the author before, and then I found another one after reading it. It turned out to be the same one. The writing is very good, and the author's other book is also very good.
It's very beautiful, but it's just a bit edgy and sheds a few tears. It's not worth mentioning.
It's so sweet and sharp, I'm already laughing and crying at the same time [laughs]
I cried when I saw it, it was so sour and astringent. It's really beautiful! ! !
This book is pretty good, despite the few chapters. In fact, each chapter has 4,500+ words. This is also the problem. It's a bit tiring to read. But overall it's still great and worth reading.
It doesn't matter if there are too many words, yes
Very nice! ! ! It was a little rough in the middle, but the ending was very satisfying! Very sweet
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The group portrait is really beautiful! ! ! ! !
The emotions are described very delicately, I highly recommend it.
✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎
Nice! ! ! So pretty! I came here really late but I highly recommend it.
It's super beautiful, the author's writing is very good
This book is really beautiful. The author's writing is very good and very sad. God knows what I was crying about. I cried almost all the time, one tissue after another. In this book, I saw a group of brave Slytherins: Xiao Long, Xiao Duo, Pansy, Blaise, Narcissa, Severus... I am very moved by the feelings of the Black family... Death Eaters don't have patron saints because they don't know love. Bella has no patronus, she only believes in the Dark Lord, but she loves Narcissa. Bella was loyal, and she still did not betray the Dark Lord, but her love for Narcissa made her offend again and again, so much so that she disobeyed the Dark Lord. The Black family is always pure! The later story was particularly beautiful, and I just laughed when I saw the ending. But it would be better without Voldemort This is really a very, very high-quality DeHaven article. Why aren't you popular, author? ?
Maybe there is a reason why the traffic data is bad? All in all, I would like to say that this fanfic is really well written, so good! It deserves more people to read it. The overall short length just satisfies my heart as a person who doesn't like to read long articles, but the plot development and the rhythm of the article do not make it too impatient or unclear, and the writing style is very smooth and comfortable to read. For a fan work that has plot development that needs to be understood and is not long, smooth and comfortable writing and writing style are very important, and I think the author has achieved it. Also, I personally don't really like reading fanfics that focus on the plot of the original novel, because they often use rebirth as the subject matter. This kind of development from a God's perspective is often boring and has low readability, and can easily accelerate the collapse of the characters. Therefore, I prefer post-war novels because the characters and story backgrounds are more realistic. However, without a God's perspective, this book not only writes a plot that meets the expectations of the public readers, but also shows the three-dimensionality and brilliance of each character. It is really very good at writing. I think this fanfic will become popular one day.
It's very good to read. The writing style of the new author is very good. I highly recommend it and the image creation is very good. Slytherin is for his family, his parents and himself, Gryffindor is for the world and his friends
Very beautiful! ! It is a breath of fresh air among Tomato HP fans. The writing style is very good. I have rejected many of Deha's writing styles. From the time Harry kissed Draco's Dark Mark, their fates became entangled. The subsequent plot development was also smooth, the emotional line was not blunt, and the character's personality was relatively close to the original work. It was this arch-rival literature. (The confrontation path is great, I love to watch each other.) This is fan fiction. It is not the kind of HP leather cover. It follows the original plot line but has its own ideas. It also makes up for a lot of regrets and eases the relationship between Slytherin and Gryffindor. Most people survived the war, and Harry and Draco also found happiness. This is the meaning of fan fiction. Although I really feel sorry for Dumbledore, I can only say that he chose the ending for himself [crying] Although there is a small bug in the Elder Wand, it doesn't have much impact overall. This episode is also so sweet, it makes me feel at ease😌 I like to watch this kind of sweet post-war couple's daily life. Everyone is living happily and looking forward to tomorrow.
Good-looking, very good-looking. The pace of the first few chapters is a bit fast, but the subsequent plot development is just right, with ups and downs, attractive enough, and very interesting to watch (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. The character's personality is also very three-dimensional, the writing is delicate, and it's very enjoyable to read a series of them [Blow a kiss] (I read it until midnight and didn't want to stop, hahaha [Sending my heart])
The author's writing is excellent, and the family, friendship, and love between the characters are very touching. The core of the story is a warm mutual redemption and mutual growth. Whether it is Harry, Draco, or other characters (no spoilers here), their journey has not been easy. Harry is really the well-deserved savior of the wizarding world, brave, sincere, and kind... He strives to let everyone stand in the light. I kept crying while watching it.
This book is simply a miracle. This is the first time I have read Harry Potter fanfics. From the beginning to the process of resistance, the fanfics I have read so far have made me very happy. I feel that I can do two sets of test papers. The foreshadowing is good, the writing is good, the plot development is also very good, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. Personally, I feel that it is not OOC at all. In a word, the teacher is a god!
It's beautiful, I recommend everyone to watch it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
I have read Chapter 27 so far, the quality is guaranteed
The chapters are short, but the content is compact, the logic is clear, and the emotions are delicate. It also makes up for a lot of my regrets, and the author's writing style is also good. In short, it is worth watching [Blow Kiss]
It's beautiful, super beautiful. I cried for half an hour during the 32 chapters. The plot is great, and the author's writing style is also great. He wrote the group portrait vividly. Can you all go and show me a look?
I haven't finished it yet, but it's a really good book that I couldn't put down. I like [send heart] [send heart] very much
This book is actually quite nice. Wow, looking at the ending, I really have the feeling that love can really break everything. It's a very happy ending. Such a happy ending is worthy of their difficult process. Again, if you give 99, you must be happy. Okay, but why are there so few people? ! ! ! ! Such little popularity is not worthy of such a magical author! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Come, come, come! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Look, look, it's good to read this book୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨
It's really well written... It's okay if I shed a few tears... As long as everyone is happy...
I just realized that I don't have any book reviews. Come on, teacher 😋. In short, it's very beautiful and delicious.
It's good to read. I read another book by the author before, and then I found another one after reading it. It turned out to be the same one. The writing is very good, and the author's other book is also very good.
It's very beautiful, but it's just a bit edgy and sheds a few tears. It's not worth mentioning.
It's so sweet and sharp, I'm already laughing and crying at the same time [laughs]
I cried when I saw it, it was so sour and astringent. It's really beautiful! ! !
This book is pretty good, despite the few chapters. In fact, each chapter has 4,500+ words. This is also the problem. It's a bit tiring to read. But overall it's still great and worth reading. It doesn't matter if there are too many words, yes
Very nice! ! ! It was a little rough in the middle, but the ending was very satisfying! Very sweet
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
The group portrait is really beautiful! ! ! ! !
The emotions are described very delicately, I highly recommend it. ✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎
Nice! ! ! So pretty! I came here really late but I highly recommend it.
It's super beautiful, the author's writing is very good