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I gave it a five-star review [laughs]. The writing is really good, the characters are very delicate, and the author is also very active. Important things to say three times: highly recommended! Highly recommended! ! Highly recommended! ! ! Correction of the only shortcoming: It's really not good enough [crying] (I feel like I'm falling in love with this book [Send Heart])

It makes up for the regret that the original work didn't have much of the daily life of the predators on campus. The addition of the male protagonist is not out of the ordinary, and the three predators all have dark hair, so adding a light-haired one among them is a genius idea. It's very comfortable to watch four people making trouble every day [Like]

Very very beautiful! Dynamic Gryffindor! How could the teacher come up with such a fun prank idea? He is a completely charming predator who steals everyone's attention! Thank you teacher for your creation!

I discovered a treasure novel. Although this book has very few words, it can already be seen that this book is very well written. The atmosphere among the predators can feel very warm. When watching it, I feel like I am immersed in the teacher's words. I hope the teacher can do more. [Blowing kiss]

Teacher, I will always follow you! Greatly infected, very youthful. These are the predators, the original work is too. . Seeing my body warm, I give you five stars! The author must persevere [crying] [crying]

It is simply full of the breath of life, the youthful vitality of teenagers. It makes people feel soft when watching it. The author also writes it very well. The friendship of the four people is as eternal and bright as the four stars connected in the sky. I look forward to their next journey, the great freedom adventure of the predators.

It expresses the most passionate youthful feeling of a teenager in a big way. It is very warm and has a special youthful atmosphere. It makes people's mouth curl up. It feels like a hot-blooded youth drama. It is very, very good to watch. I recommend [Eating Melon] [Send Heart] [Laughing]

It's so beautiful. I hope the author can update 1,000,0000000000000000000000000 pictures a day [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Read [OK], good opinion [send heart][send heart][send heart], I really like the four predators, teacher, please keep updating [blowing kiss]! Don't be too tired, but don't be too rested either [laughs]

After reading Chapter 30, my God, this is so hilarious. I was blown away by the book. If the original book was about Hermione and Two Useless Men, this book is about Lupine and Three Crazy Huskies. . . But there is one thing to say, and it is very well written. I have read a hundred chapters, and it feels like three huskies have been playing like crazy for a hundred chapters. And then the Huskies just found out that Lupine was a werewolf. The pace is just too slow. At this pace, it would take at least two to three hundred chapters to write about the Predator mastering the Animagus. It would take at least five, six, seven or eight hundred chapters to write about Harry's birth. The protagonist group should be able to defeat Voldemort before Harry is born, right? But now it's 100 chapters, and there's still no main plot. Tomato HP fics that are good to watch and can be read through are basically completed with around 200 chapters. This book. . . It shouldn't be a mess, right? Don't. Give the protagonist some strength. It's almost done after two years of playing. Let's quickly discover and destroy the Horcruxes. Or is becoming an Animagus the climax and end of the book? No, hmmm it's not impossible. Anyway, don't mess up!

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it's really beautiful. [Sending my heart to you]. It's high-spirited and unique to young people. People who read it feel warm in their hearts [learned]. It's rare to see such a life-like article. Sure enough, friendship is the best [laughing]

Crazy Amway! After watching it, I felt the body was warm. I ate it hard as the group portrait of friendly teenagers was so hot-blooded. Very good pro-generational raider! I'm rolling on the floor and begging the author to write more (my wife is good at writing, so I'll give you the pen) The author himself is also very cute! She responded to all the comments I posted, so touching [love][love][love]

It's full of youth, and I feel like my body is warm after watching it. But after more than 70 chapters, I am still in the first grade. Is the progress a little slow? I really want to watch the plot of the senior grade. I think it will be super exciting [Sending Hearts]

Very well written, full of youthful flavor I'm just asking, does the story end in the parent generation or the child era, but it doesn't matter, it's really well written. Quick rush, super good-looking, the first time I see this type, the author writes very vividly

It's super good-looking and worth investing in. Each of the predators is a super good baby. This book has a warm and lively feeling. I was in a very good mood the whole day after reading it. The author is also a super good baby. Come on and update! Your most loyal readers [Sending Hearts]

It's so beautiful, but why are there so few people? No more talking, I'm going to promote this book.

It's very beautiful. Thank you for your hard work, teacher. I must continue to make more videos. [Adoration][Admiration][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Very beautiful! The atmosphere of Gryffindor is written very well [I almost cried] The foursome are so energetic, this Gryffindor is so cool

It's a very good book. It's cute. You can see that the books written by Maomao are becoming more and more popular. This pig girl is the protagonist. The protagonist is very cute, but it is a bit unfriendly to Snape fans because their positions are completely opposite. There is no point. And I like to eat CP. You can take some sweets by yourself, but there are still very few ambiguous lines. At present, the heroine seems to be very cute. OK, that's it. It's the first time I write such a long comment [laugh][laugh][laugh]

My only favorite novel about parents, I am forever moved by the friendship between teenagers, which is much better than those about falling in love. Long live friendship! !

Really good-looking, youthful and energetic

I really like this book

I can't stand it [crying] [crying] [crying] Such a lively predator, such a good work, I only discovered it now [crying] [crying]

It's really nice. The details of their relationship are written. It makes people feel soft when they see each other.

It's beautiful. Love to read more! ! ! ! ! !

Great, they are four living people. My body feels warm when they look at it. How could four people have such an idea? [Laughs]

Very beautiful, with a youthful atmosphere!

No, it's really warm and everyone is doing well. Also, is the boss ready to kick you?

It's so fragrant, I've never seen such predatory rice. I like the setting without Peter, and I feel like this is the life the three of them should really live at Hogwarts. All the details perfectly show the closeness between the brothers. You guys are really soft. . . Therefore I declare this to be the most predatory book of Tomato, completely unable to resist the charm of predators. [Laugh][laugh][laugh] Come on, this author loves interaction! ⊙▽⊙ It's not a loss to be included in the book

The description is very warm and the picture is very strong, and the heart of the viewer will feel warm [love]