Nirvana************

The main plot is plot, and the emotional line is less in the early stage and more in the later stage. The description of the emotional line in the early stage is a little jerky, but it is better in the later stage. Moreover, the emotional line is not a vigorous or flowing love, but more like a gentle and silent sense of protection and companionship. The names of the spells don't need to be described in a very advanced way. It's not that they don't sound good, but they may seem a bit complicated and jerky in the plot. The writing style is more mature in the later stages. The plot of fighting and killing feels messy in some places but I can't say where it is. The above is my personal opinion and is for reference only.

It's beautiful [like], the author's writing style is so good🥹 It's not a cookie-cutter fairy tale, the story is very novel and interesting, and the characters are well depicted. Why did I see it just after I wrote it? I have to wait for the completion [crying]. Good luck to the author. You must persevere.

He walks with her on her journey. They stood side by side in the solitary smoke of the desert, watching the sunset over the long river melt into gold.

Good reviews. It's very beautiful. I was attracted by the name. At first I thought it was an old routine, but the plot is exactly the same as the title. It's a different master-disciple story. Can the author reveal a little bit about the plot? I really love Mo Linyuan's preference for the heroine's baby, I want to love it~

The author's writing is so good. At first I thought it was just like those cookie-cutter texts, but the more I read this book, the more I liked it. The characters have distinct personalities. It's so beautiful! [Adoration][Adoration]

Very nice. This is the first time I've seen this kind of thing.

Very nice, the author is really good at writing

The writing style is very good, the emotions are not greasy, and it is short and concise. It is a rare fairy tale that I have seen recently.

It's been a long time since I read a book with an interesting plot. It's very niceOo(•́₋₍•̀ )

A lightning protection, the villain has the same name as the male protagonist of the second game, with the same pronunciation and the same word. Say goodbye to this

What's really interesting is the plot and emotions. It progresses too fast and I don't understand it a bit. It would be better if it was more detailed.

Is the author studying literature? The writing style has a strong literary flavor 😂

The ending was pretty good, but a little too rushed.