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It's a very rare fan who doesn't have any interesting points for me. The characters' personalities are closer to the original, especially Isana? It's better than most of the fanfics I've read, and the writing is considered to be the best among Dongfu fanfics? At least it doesn't look awkward It is not a single perspective of the protagonist, but will be supplemented by other people's perspectives, so it is very comfortable to watch and there will be no problem of not being able to understand. The character of the protagonist also pokes fun at me. Who dares not to understand the sick and weak! ! ! He's not the kind-hearted type. Everything he does has a motive. The plot is quite daily, so it's quite warm before entering the dungeon. I'm curious what will happen if Manta and Jiujing meet, and I become my stand-in's stand-in?

The writing is good, but the heroine is in a miserable state. Her good health is gone, she has the sickness debuff, she has experienced various near-death experiences, and she even died once. I was forced to fight in order to survive, and I wanted to give up the game several times, but I just endured it. So when will the main plot start? I want to see Shura Field.

It's so good... I feel like it's my favorite Dongfu fanfic I've ever read. I really like Xiaota. It's completely from Succubus. After reading it for so long, I realized that not a single comment has been posted, nor have I posted any book reviews. I express my love for a hakama and a Xiaota. Goddess, please post more. It's my spiritual food.

Like it very much. I'm more used to listening to music, and I feel that Li Ronghao's "Lovers" matches well at certain moments. Is the emotional line well written? . There may be some weird ones, or my understanding cannot keep up with the author's. The writing is quite delicate🈚️. Well, then I like you. The author likes you hmm.

Well, yes, I am very happy to see Yiwen. The most important thing is that I have been watching for a while and haven't run away yet. This is really a rare thing.

It's so good. This is the best Dong Fu Yi novel I've ever read. The protagonist has brains, looks, and skills. Dong Fu's character is not 00C. The plot is not embarrassing. It's generally delicious. The author will give it a thumbs up! 😍

Cool, cool, cool! It's so pretty, it's not enough, please give me more! Thanks! The character design of Manta is very three-dimensional and plump, I always like this! The plot is very interesting and exciting, it made me smile [smile]

It looks good, I don't want to rush for updates. But watch it till the end in one go. I really hope the author has finished this book. It will be very interesting if the author completes this story. I believe it will be a very good work. There will be no spoilers in what I say below. Probably... I still want to point it out here. The early words are even more amazing than I imagined. The writing is very good. And in the past, the author really described all the actions bit by bit through many details. Any idea and the turning point of the next story are very good foreshadowing. If there are only five stars, I can give it five stars. If there are 10 stars, I can give it 10 stars. No shortcomings were found. The plot is well connected. The characters and various details are not inconsistent with the original work. He is particularly good at portraying characters. [Like] I can't tell you which character I like the most, but I can admit that everyone is portrayed one after another, and there is basically nothing that I dislike. There is no place to skip. Each one seems to bring you a refreshing feeling. And I seem to know that the author really likes brother rice bowl [laughs] What I saw was very interesting. Fortunately, this is the author's first work. Already very powerful. Basically, many writing styles can be seen to have begun to take shape. There is no need to pursue it deliberately, the literary things are already well written. The daily life is in sharp contrast to Manta's busy work every day. In fact, when I started, I really didn't expect that the author could integrate everything into this novel so well. In fact, the people in Dongwan are not that easy to deal with. To be able to write it so well, the author must be very powerful. Come on come on!

The writing is so good. I highly recommend it. If you like Dongfu Women's Video, you must not miss this book.

Needless to say, it's good-looking, just one word good-looking. I like Tata's character. Tata is really a very good girl. The other characters are also well portrayed. There is basically no OOC. I like it very much. Don't give up (this is my wish) and update it (this is also my wish). Like like like

It's really good to read [crying], the author writes each person's strategy in detail, and the rhythm is just right, neither too fast nor too slow. I really like the heroine. I have decided that this is my favorite Dongfu novel [Adore][Adore]

I like it so much, sir... The writing style is very mature, and the characters are very relevant. The important thing is that the author has his own opinions on the characters, so the plot is not too weird. All in all, it is a very interesting fanfic ^ ^

Oh my gosh, it's so well written. I feel very comfortable reading the whole story. This is my favorite Dongwan fanfic. Boss, I'm in love with you! Please update[KISS][KISS][KISS]

Good looking but too short😭

The writing is very nice. Cheers, author(⊂((▽))⊃

It's great. I really want to see what the scene will be like when Manta meets Zoe again.

It's very interesting. When I first started reading it, when I met Hedie and Na eating cake together in the orphanage, I felt that the author portrayed the scene very carefully. When I met Coco and the others later, it was not like other books. On the contrary, this book made me feel that girls are more real. It's a really good book. I hope it will be updated one day [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] After re-reading it, I still like it very much. It was very sweet at the beach. The author is very serious about the portrayal of everyone's feelings. When I read it, I don't feel that the ooc is very good👍🏻. I am looking forward to how Mitani and the others will know Manta's "resurrection" [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

The plot is super eye-catching and the characters are not OOC. Excellent product.

Among all the Dongfu fanfics I have read, it is the best for me. Will there be more updates during the winter vacation, teacher? [Shy] Teacher, teacher, will this book be discontinued? [Crying] My favorite Dongfu fanfic, please don't discontinue it. I have been busy three times and it would be nice to update it again. I like it very much [almost crying]. I sent a small gift to urge the update. I have never read the original Dongfu work. I fell into Dongfu because of the teacher's fanfic! It's almost time to watch the second season now! After reading it, I will make up for the comics

It's really beautiful~

Excellent! Excellent! ! In such a cold environment, I can still find the best one here at Yangshizi! ! ! The following chapters of Frog Fun are updated by my wife on time at 23:00 every day, and the regularity is reassuring (๑´∀`๑)

Dongfu has very few articles. This one is of very good quality, with so many characters and storylines.

I really like it, but it's so short. Can you understand how I feel like I get stuck every time I like to read a book?

It's really pretty, no OOC

Very beautiful! Recommend

Very nice! I hope my big eyes will recover soon! It was really good to watch and I finished it in one go🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Delicious, truly delicious, and it looks so good! Totally logical, not awkward at all, and really delicious

It's very beautiful, a good book about Dongfu. The heroine is also very plump and cute. Give it five stars, not bad, not bad.

Very, very beautiful, and emotionally engaging

Will it be updated again? I'm really unwilling to not see Izzo Na [crying][crying]