Transformation************

It's actually God who made the seedlings and watered them [laughing evilly] [like] The book is very nice. The Fu Hua in this book has a sense of immortality quite well. It has a sense of being otherworldly. But the protagonist gives me a feeling of being burned out, because I feel that after the main plot, Fu Hua, the Book of Cang Xuan, Xiao Shi, and the protagonist group have become a lot more cheerful, which is a little different from the book. The protagonist's state is like Fu Hua relying on his strong will to control the people around him. Everyone is dying, and he is about to leave, but Xiaoshi hopes that Fu Hua can live well, so he uses his power to dilute Fu Hua's memory, and allows him to live and then die himself. The result is the state in the book (maybe too serious, but I think it is about the same)

Changes to a hundred, the writing is excellent, and there is almost no description of women's clothing, women's bodies and female degeneration. Because the heroine possesses all of Fu Hua's memories, there is no such thing as female corruption. The second female lead is a yandere, and she is also great for being able to get Fu Hua, who is afraid of trouble. The emotional pull is in place, the emotional line is silky and sweet, and the writing is very touching, especially the part where Fu Hua counterattacks, tsk tsk tsk, I loved it. This writing is worth collecting, come on!

Madhu, please come quickly! ! ! ! ! The old antique is about to be stolen! ! ! !

If you really want to be with the Immortal, then you must introduce the setting of the fantasy system. Otherwise, due to the lifespan issue, the Immortal's first line of psychological defense will not be passed. After all, Chongchong was already a Herrscher at that time [eating melon]

It's really good. As long as you can get through some of the wordings like energy saving, you may look normal, but I don't know why. I just seem to have a sense of substitution like Oreki. I feel that it doesn't apply to Hua, but this word also counts to Hua. It's very applicable, but I don't know why. The author writes very well, keep up the good work

Yes, originally I was thinking of the super contrasting combination of Fu Hua and Yandere, but I didn't expect that Lao Guqiu suddenly realized what he meant.

It's really good. There is another thing I want to say. If Fu Hua had no strength, he would have been firmly controlled by the yandere. As expected, what a yandere fears most is that the person he is yandere is stronger than himself. [Laughing][laughing] Looking at the extra, is it true that Fu Hua traveled through time? So it's completely OOC. Not only can passers-by see through the details, but my personality is completely different. If I were a time traveler and had a little bit of Fu Hua's personality, then I could still be seen as Fu Hua in a parallel world.

I feel like the background of the character should be explained at once, otherwise it would be a bit difficult to comment on the sudden appearance of a person who has a yandere mentality towards you for no reason. But then again, except for this small problem, the writing is still very good⊙▽⊙

It's okay, only three is a bit too few now.

Chao Ji looks good, it's Fu Gong, we are saved, there are details but not many, but there is enough room for imagination. If there are too many details, Shen He will have to use his strength. There are too many foreshadowings in the back. I haven't finished reading yet.

Five stars! Must be five stars! [Laugh][laugh][laugh] Karin thinks your book is very good, keep up the good work^ω^

It's good-looking, with smooth turns. The description of the heroine's psychological growth is very delicate. The rhythm is moderate. There is no piling up of gorgeous rhetoric for the sake of gorgeousness. It is a simple and peaceful writing style.

@Author[Thinking]Although... But... Lifespan theory

Very nice! The writing is also very good.

"Energy Saving" NangNangNangNang

Very good, I like this kind of life (daily life)

I knew the author was fast, but I didn't expect it to be so fast.

For Fu Hua's sake, I'd better give him five stars.

Finally I found a masterpiece!

The writing is good, and the rhythm of the plot is very comfortable to watch. Except for the fact that the author said that the writing is not long, which makes people feel uncomfortable.

The content is good, but it doesn't feel like Fu Hua

Will the author bring in some tidbits?

The author continues to write and keep talking! !

How did you make me a sick girl?

Watch it, love it, come more

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

It's okay, you can eat it👌

No? How did you end it!

OK? But I've tasted this so many times that I no longer have any feeling for it.

Very nice, life is peaceful but warm