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It's really super good-looking. The writing and plot are very online. The relationships between the characters are very well portrayed. Not only does Lao Lan have an emotional line, all the characters are perfectly portrayed. There is no OOC. This is the most perfect fanfic I have ever seen (no exaggeration, it's really good-looking). It's the character of the aloof academic master, Xiao Hei and Xiao Huang are very warm, Xiao Pink is very brave, Xiao Green is also very gentle, Xiao Hong is also a really good brother, and he is also a devil (forgive me for not having the vocabulary). The writing is really super good, and those who like to fight against Laolan, Magic Red, and pink and green are in luck (especially Laolan) It's really beautiful. Apart from the fact that the publication time is not fixed, it doesn't have any shortcomings (although it's an exaggeration, but it's really true). How can I put it? This is the best fanfic I have ever read. If I hadn't been in school, I would have been addicted to it every day.

To be honest, this is the first article I have ever seen that has no OOC. The author's control of details is very good, and it is worth appreciating. The ambiguous pull in the early stage is very good, and the kiss in the middle stage is very memorable. Although I haven't read it yet, I decided to give this book a high rating. It was so good in the early stage, but how bad can it be in the later stage? I hope the author can continue to update and publish a few more different Lao Lan articles. I will follow [][]

It's super beautiful, and the author's descriptions are really good! ! ! It really vividly depicts the humor and daily life of youth campus. The feelings between Lao and Lan towards each other are really well portrayed! ! The characters of each person are very vividly drawn, and they are really beautiful. This book is very suitable for reading! The plot is well written, both sweet and funny! My corpse feels warm when I look at it (laughs)

It's so beautiful! (Treble) I felt so good watching Lao Lan's pulling feeling [Shy] I really like this book ٩(*´◒`*)۶ I hope the author doesn't stop reading it and it's really good [crying] [Sending my heart] I can't do it anymore, Lao Lan is so good💥💥Anyway, it's so delicious [shy]

Love to watch. This is God. Pure love on campus is the best.

OK. Blessed is Laurent. I'm attracted to this as a horror reader)? The plot is very good, but uh, I would like to suggest that the words used are a bit too repetitive. It would be perfect if the adjectives and the like were more vivid. But I am still very grateful to the author for letting me eat. ❤️❤️❤️

Normal Laolan campus articles will portray Xiao Hei as someone who smokes and fights. I think he is just naughty, not a bad boy, so when I started to see the cigarette, I actually wanted to give up. But then Xiao Hei made a change, which was in line with my imagination. It was obvious in the second brush. I feel that there is a difference in the characters of the two people. You can't feel it for the first time from beginning to end. This is a manifestation of their mutual help and growth. In fact, it also shows that the image created by the author Rouse is slowly carved in our hearts, leaving an impression, and moistening things silently flowing into our hearts. Rouse Feitian starts the game, and I admire this talent.

OK, this book is simply the best-looking novel by Lao Lan that I have ever read. The character traits are well presented in it. It is simply delicious, the writing is funny, and the ideas are novel. I will love this writing all my life. Oh, by the way, she has a fan group where she promotes every day (uh, no). You can enter. Anyway, Laolan is awesome and Laolan is delicious! OK, everyone in the world is obsessed with laolan

The writing is very graphic and the writing style is very good. The little CP is very sweet. Teachers should pay attention to rest but don't be idle (^ . ^)

Ahhhh it tastes so good, fine bran! Come on, young campus literature! Pink green and blue must be 99. Leopard cat, I was born. [][][][]

There is almost no plot in the plot, it is a little abstract, not OOC, not tacky, and it really makes everyone feel alive. And after reading from beginning to end, I can see that the teacher's writing is getting better and better [like] I usually play some Mhy games, so I know how fine the chaff is [laughing evilly] All in all, it's worth pursuing😋

This one is really different and better looking than other fanfics. There is no messy and disorderly plot, but there is something novel and very beautiful! ! !

All I can say is that Claes is awesome, not OOC at all, he makes everyone look very physical! Os: I finally saw an article that didn't portray Big Yellow as Dasha Fu or Xiao Hei as a male ghost. The young couple is so sweet that they fly into the sky, and the campus plot is also very vivid and coherent. I will follow it forever (I have watched it 2499 times if you have been wronged and want to do it again) Come on, author [cry] [cry]

It's rare to see such beautiful youth literature on Tomato. The author's descriptions are delicate, the writing is vivid, and the emotional transitions are natural. Blessed are those who work hard, hehehehehehehe

The writing is great and the characters are very consistent. It is very similar to the black, black and blue in my heart. Pure Love is Invincible. The writing is very touching. I really like the way they are together. The competition was particularly cool. But there is a small problem. I still like black, black and blue a little bit, just for them to watch. The later scenes feel less. . . But the later magic red is also very cool. I like it very much.

It looks good, I suggest you try the blue and pink ones (*^ω^*)

It's very interesting. Campus writing is very confusing. I really admire the author's ability to write out that kind of hazy emotion. It's very ambiguous. It's also a good treat. The characteristics of the characters are really clear. Hehehe, Lao Lan 99

Watch Lao Lanwen without any brainstorming! ! There is a knife, sugar and nutritional balance. It contains blue, pink, green and magic red. It is mainly non-role ooc. There is a peerless cookie in the front, and there is a little knife in the back. Then go to the place where the author is updating. I have never seen the thin rice bran, so I taste it like this qwq

The writing is very good! Not OOC at all! ! ! There are also many little details hidden! Teacher, I will follow you forever! Bai Yueguang level! The tug and pull between the young lovers is so exciting to watch! ! ! !

It's so beautiful, the writing is very good, I felt so moved when I wrote it [blowing kiss]

Every character created by the teacher is very three-dimensional, the interactions between the little ones are also very nice, and the characters are not much different from the official ones. In short, the teacher's writing is so perfect, I will follow the teacher for the rest of my life [blowing kiss]

The writing is so good and the food is fresh. I ate it up right away. The character settings in it are very rich, unlike some fanfics where the character settings have collapsed. It is very consistent with the original character settings.

It's beautiful👀~ Come on, author! I will always support you! !

It's really beautiful, showing two different personalities and two different likes

Campus life is very colorful and has a lot of laughs. I recommend teachers to update it more🥰🥰🥰

Oh my god, your writing style is so awesome. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahahahaha I like you [shy] Crazy Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Best Laolan🔞 Everyone applauds❤️The best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️The best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️The best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️The best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️The best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️The best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds ❤️Best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Best Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Jin Explosive Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Expressive Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Expressive Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Expressive Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Expressive Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Expressive Laolan🔞Everyone applauds❤️Expressive Laolan🔞

Really delicious! There are blue, pink, green, magic red, lost boy, and Jiang Tao. They are really good! Teacher, I want to follow you forever! Shockingly delicious.

Nice! [Lick the screen] I fell in love with the briquettes at the first sight after reading the Tomato novel [Adoration] [Love] Who is the truant expert (me) for the rest of my life [Blow kiss] [Love] I met the briquettes and enjoyed the blessing [lick the screen] [KISS] (directly, a young lady twisted her waist and was thrown into the air, and an apt kneeled in front of the briquettes fatly [blowing kiss])

It's great to see such delicious home products on Tomato. The teacher's writing style is also very good, without unnecessary nonsense. The update frequency is basically one article every 1 to 2 days (although sometimes it is updated once a week), and it is very productive every time. I will follow Teacher Qianqiu for the rest of my life! ! ! Boss, please update soon! [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] During the days when there was no food, I just brushed it over and over again (15 brushes [crying])

This book is really good to read. The writing is really good. The whole text is not procrastinating or nonsense. The number of words in each chapter is too high. There is no OOC anywhere. It completely matches their daily life in my mind. The author's writing is not only very imaginative but also rich in plot. The character setting is not OOC, and the interaction is not industrial saccharine at all. The writing is very good. With more than 500,000 words, you can't seem to be confused at all. Instead, it feels very careful. Anyone who likes CP such as Lao Lan, Pink and Green can really check it out. I really feel good about the portrayal of Xiao Hei. Everyone likes to portray him as a kid who smokes, drinks, and fights. But I think he is a good kid, just a little more cheerful and a little meaner.