True Lord Huiyuan: Starting as a Female Elf’s Pet

It's quite novel. It would be better if the protagonist was reincarnated into the world of immortality and what happened next. The main reason for the poison is that the protagonist is already 15 years old in the world of immortality. In the ancient setting of the world of immortality, ordinary people should start a family at the age of 15. As a result, the author wrote the protagonist as a primary school student.

It's not soul piercing, but a clone flow that's even more disgusting than soul piercing. The appearance of the clone and the main body are different. The main body is in the fairy world, and the clone is in another world. The clone has independent thinking and growth path. Then the main body went to another world and merged with the clone, but the appearance was still that of the clone (lol). The women who appear in the early stage all like to have avatars.

In today's various nonsensical time travel systems, this book is undoubtedly a breath of fresh air, so it should not be buried in the achievements that originally belonged to it. From ancient immortality to the cyber world genre, it is very novel. In the early stage, the relationship between the protagonist and Fan Gu was used as a foreshadowing. In the branch line, he took on Mo Crow's mission and went underground to fight black boxing and met a second female lead whose race is "Red Eyed Butterfly". The story is both stable and urgent, with many in-depth characterizations of small characters and explanations of cause and effect relationships - thus giving us an intuitive expression of "there is a cause and effect, and there will be a benefit in the end", and "there is an effect without a cause, leaving a bad fate", just like the protagonist inherits Miss Rabbit through "the cause", and tells the readers: "The tricks of capital and the unpredictable nature of human nature" The dark side of society. When I looked at Miss Rabbit, I felt pity. There are certainly many shortcomings in the book. Just like when we grow up, as long as we persist and survive the baptism of time, we believe that "gold will eventually shine."

I feel like the protagonist is too childish. He hasn't done anything serious after traveling for a few days. He just gets pushed around by the plot. He's not my cup of tea. He just slipped away.

. A little bit poisonous. 😓

Come on, this is my favorite part, everyone, take a look. Bai Chen'an: When I reach the level of Nascent Soul, I will incarnate in one body and one body, and I will catch the rain and dew!

Very good. The protagonist is originally a farmer from the beginning. He is definitely not adaptable to time travel rashly, so a series of reactions may seem a bit poisonous to some people. However, it is originally a refreshing article, and it is understandable to make concessions in some places.

It's very good. The plot is smooth and not outrageous. There is no one thing that comes out one after another. The background of the characters is also explained in detail and is not complicated. It takes millions of words to understand the background. The writing style is also good. It is worth reading.

The writing is quite good, and I know how to avoid lightning. Most of the negative comments in the comment area are because of the "doppelgänger", but the "doppelgänger" is ugly. The female protagonist likes the male protagonist for who he is, but a different approach should be able to retain more people. I hope the updates will be more stable. Sometimes one update is not enough and one star will be deducted.

Although it doesn't fit the title, it appeals to my taste