True Lord Hui Yuan: Beginning as the Human Pet of the Female Elf

It's quite novel. It would be better if the protagonist was reincarnated into the world of immortality and what happened next. The main reason for the poison is that the protagonist is already 15 years old in the world of immortality. In the ancient setting of the world of immortality, ordinary people should start a family at the age of 15. As a result, the author wrote the protagonist as a primary school student.

I feel like the protagonist is too childish. He hasn't done anything serious after traveling for a few days. He just gets pushed around by the plot. He's not my cup of tea. He just slipped away.

In today's various nonsensical time travel systems, this book is undoubtedly a breath of fresh air, so it should not be buried in the achievements that originally belonged to it. From ancient immortality to the cyber world genre, it is very novel. In the early stage, the relationship between the protagonist and Fan Gu was used as a foreshadowing. In the branch line, he took on the mission of Mo Crow and went underground to fight black boxing and met the second female lead whose race is "Red Eyed Butterfly". The story is both stable and urgent, with many in-depth characterizations of small characters and explanations of cause and effect relationships - thus giving us an intuitive expression of "there is a cause and effect, and there will be a benefit in the end", and "there is an effect without a cause, leaving a bad fate", just like the protagonist inherits Miss Rabbit through "the cause", and tells the readers: "The tricks of capital and the unpredictable nature of human nature" The dark side of society. When I looked at Miss Rabbit, I felt pity. There are certainly many shortcomings in the book. Just like when we grow up, as long as we persist and survive the baptism of time, we believe that "gold will eventually shine."

It's not soul piercing, but a clone flow that's even more disgusting than soul piercing. The appearance of the clone and the main body are different. The main body is in the fairy world, and the clone is in another world. The clone has independent thinking and growth path. Then the main body went to another world and merged with the clone, but the appearance was still that of the clone (lol). The women who appear in the early stage all like to have avatars.

. A little bit poisonous. 😓

Come on, this is my favorite part, everyone, watch it Bai Chen'an: When I reach the level of Nascent Soul, I will incarnate in one body and one body, and I will be exposed to rain and dew!

It's very good. The plot is smooth and not outrageous. There is no one thing that comes out one after another. The background of the characters is also explained in detail and is not complicated. It takes millions of words to understand the background. The writing style is also good. It is worth reading.

Very good. The protagonist is originally a farmer from the beginning. He is definitely not adaptable to time travel rashly, so a series of reactions may seem a bit poisonous to some people. However, it is originally a refreshing article, and it is understandable to make concessions in some places.

The writing is quite good, and I know how to avoid lightning. Most of the negative comments in the comment area are because of the "doppelgänger", but the "doppelgänger" is ugly. The female protagonist likes the male protagonist for who he is, but a different approach should be able to retain more people. I hope the updates will be more stable. Sometimes one update is not enough and one star will be deducted.

The character of this protagonist is not likeable at all. This kind of funny character is not suitable for a story with a background of cultivating immortals. I suggest that the author can make the protagonist grow and change in the subsequent content.

The setting is a bit messy, especially when it comes to doppelgängers and what a person is. It's a mess. No matter how much you explain, Fanya probably still likes the personality she once had. Can you explain the difference between Bantian and Soul Transmutation? There is also a monster clan that I suddenly like later. It is Xiuxian himself who likes it. Fanya is liked by the personality of this world. The writing is really messy [facepalm]. I reluctantly accept that the male protagonist is hungry and thirsty. After all, he is only 15 years old. I felt like the plot had no ups and downs, and it was no longer interesting after the showdown with Fan Ya.

Although it doesn't fit the title, it appeals to my taste

The writing is quite good. Just like the author said, he will grow up slowly. Some of the childish things he did in the early stage are also suitable for this age group, and he will also grow up slowly later on.

Not bad, not bad. The protagonist grows up step by step. It's still a bit fun.

Nice! My favorite among the three is Fanya [Sending Hearts] The main character has my shadow😋

The protagonist is a bit over-the-top and cowardly. The setting is rather complicated and requires distinguishing the different cultivation systems of the two realms. I saw that Chapter 100 has nothing to do with any female protagonist so far.

It's okay, the protagonist's character is normal

The author must keep writing. The writing is quite good, but no one reads it.

It's really good. Come on, author, it's very beautiful [Adoration][Adoration]

The subject matter is novel, I like it very much, don't cut it in half

Well written, it's an alternative urban superpower and immortality [like]

The subject matter is good, the writing can be read, and the plot is all right The subject matter is very novel and quite good.

Innovation deserves encouragement

I'm such a big car spirit [blowing kiss]

It's okay to see the back

It's pretty good, nothing toxic.

I think it looks pretty [sending my heart]

The speed is too fast [laughs] Interesting.

Good, good, good, good, good

Yes, but the beginning is not good enough. If I change it, I should be able to retain more people.