
How About Surviving on a Raft? Eat Barbecue on My Ghost Boat
还木筏求生呢?我幽灵船上吃烤肉
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It's very interesting. It's a short drama. I saw that there are pirated short dramas where the heroine is stolen and replaced by a male one. I was disgusted to death. Come and support us now. It's been a long time since I've read a book with such a non-sluggish pace and rich and interesting plot. It's a western fantasy setting, and the characters are also very interesting. The cook is the female protagonist, but it doesn't get much attention. It's a small team, with 4 women and 2 men. Other similar novels also have natural disasters as intervals, various cards compete with character relationships, and NPCs interact, but the writing is not as good as this one, and the settings are very interesting. The heroine didn't suffer at all and was very comfortable to watch.
So far, it's perfect [shy] urging more updates, but the male protagonist makes me worried [crying] I read an ancient novel before, and the female protagonist is also smart and decisive, and can handle things easily and easily. However, after the male protagonist came out, the female protagonist suddenly became sensitive and fragile, feeling that she was under great pressure and had a hard time, and then she begged for comfort in front of the male protagonist [face covering] has been psychologically shadowed, I hope the author will be more careful when writing about the male protagonist! Don't collapse the heroine's character [cry][cry] ❛˓◞˂̵✧As for the issue of the female protagonist's emotional scene, it's settled smoothly for me. It is non-toxic and can be read with confidence. If you like watching strong female characters/big female protagonists, don't worry. As of the latest chapter, the female protagonist has not had her character destroyed or been robbed of her role. The plot is still mainly about the female protagonist fighting monsters, upgrading and developing her own strength. There are few emotional descriptions. If you don't like this part, you can ignore it. It will not affect the viewing experience. It's not very, very awesome. Anyone with CP recommends giving it a try. The world view setting, the heroine's character, the rhythm of the plot and the exciting points are all well designed, and even with CP, the flaws are not concealed. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] But on the other hand, if you mainly want to watch Bao Zi fall in love, you can leave it. The male lead appears late and there are very few love scenes so far, so it may not be to your liking.
It's a very high-quality article. I read it for two days at a time. It's overall very good. I just hope that the names of the professions can be changed, such as farmer ➡️farmer, skeleton boy ➡️skeleton soldier, etc. The professions do not need to be gender-specific. I will continue to read it. It will be changed to five stars when it is finished. Please keep writing, it's very interesting. First of all, I confirm and affirm that this article is a good article. The author has explained the intention and the origin of the words below. Please don't quarrel in my comment area! It hurts to see the red dots
It's good to watch, very, very good to watch 😄 The male version of the drama is more popular than the female version, and it made me angry. Support the heroine! ! ! Ling Chu is invincibly handsome! If you like it, you can support the female version of the comic series. I don't quite understand what some people say about the male-female ratio issue. There are 4 females and 2 males in the main cast, maybe because the female protagonist prefers girls. For example, Slow Bird (male) can be included in the protagonist group (with luck). In real life, there are already more men than women, not to mention in survival games. The worse people live, the longer they live. Most girls already have many fewer advantages than boys (such as their menstrual period). The female protagonist also has lower statistics than the male protagonist at the beginning, but she has an advantage later on when she acquires fruits and skills.
It's pretty and very innovative. The heroine is definitely not a virgin, and she is considered a chaotic and lawful camp. However, the seams on her hands are a bit big, maybe because of the thick golden fingers. There is no shortage of things, and she often gives away more things during transactions.
It's nice to read, the writing is very fluent, and the author is not at the level of a foreign persimmon. The infrastructure rafting is particularly interesting, similar to the raft survival on Steam. The heroine is smart and strong, and will not be soft-hearted to those who want to kill her. The plot is also very interesting. I don't know why the rating is so low. I saw some people saying that Goldfinger is too big. I think this is a sign of the author's love for the heroine. It's very good-looking. Who the hell doesn't look at me and I'll be sad? OK?
If you care about the comparison between men and women, you can just watch the early stage, which is pretty good. The team is composed of four women and two men, but in the dungeons where the female characters play a major role, they either appear in a mess, like Huang Xiaowen, or have a relatively low presence, like Xiaofeng Zangyue on Mushroom Island, but the two male characters have a total of three home games, and the male characters are basically the core and highlight of the small dungeon. Huang Xiaowen's skills feel like they are not suitable for publicity. If she wins too much, she will inevitably meet new people and then suffer defeat; Squid Wan's ability to decipher the Elf Slate is originally a very glorious thing, because no one can decipher it, but it is written as a small breakthrough, and the ability to predict natural disasters gives high abilities but the highlights are not captured; Xiaofeng Cangyue is more logistical because of her status as an alchemist, like a resource. The source reserve library was developed in the same way, and the highlights were also low; Stupid Bear won the championship in the Fat Star Restaurant and obtained a food island, which was very high-profile; You Jiali had been paved the way before he appeared. No one on the ship cooked delicious food, and he was poisoned when he looked for a cook. After that, the two maps were mainly about food, one was short of food, and the other was a restaurant cook, which was very high-profile, and You Jiali was not just a logistician, but also served as the main attacker. There is currently no stronger female protagonist, but the length of the male protagonist has exceeded my expectations. At first, I thought it was purely a male mother from the rear, with less scenes. In order to advance the emotional line in the future, I visually predict that You Jiali will only have more highlights and length. (In the past, I saw that there were more female protagonists, and those with CP made me feel that it was actually very controversial. If the female protagonist is strong, then if the male protagonist is not strong, I will think about why the female protagonist fell in love with the male protagonist, and I feel that I should try to accept the existence of the little man; because if I want to depict the shining points of the male protagonist, the male protagonist will inevitably have more plots. This is not what I want to see. I still prefer to watch the female protagonist and the team) And this chef setting gives me the feeling of creating problems when there are no problems. By making Ling Chu suffer, the male protagonist's identity as a chef is shown to be good. But in fact, it can also be that the female protagonist is a gourmet, and the male protagonist just happens to be a good cook. In the early stage, there was someone who cooked delicious food but not up to the level of the male protagonist. The skeleton boy was delicious in barbecue, and the female protagonist's food in the early stage was average. Everyone in the team has the identity of an attacker, but Ling Chu and the two male characters serve as the main attackers. The other three female team members are more auxiliary in attack. When it comes to the highlight of the fighting chapter, there are still more males. All the named characters in the Skeleton Team are male characters. The one who makes the weapons in the small highlight team is a male character, and the one who sews is a female character. The identity of the war reporter is also assigned to a male character, and the lone swordsman is also a male character. The villains are mainly male, but the female character, the little girl picking mushrooms, has the worst ending. The villains are two sisters from the Illuminati. The younger sister is selfish, cowardly and has no sense of teamwork. The older sister kills the younger sister in the end, which is a bit of a character arc, but they still don't stand up. They are all bad guys with a superficial profile. The natives we have encountered so far, such as various merchants, Poseidon, and the leaders of Fat Star and Goldfinger, are all male characters. Now only the Mermaid King is a female and has a little more space. Gods also have female characters but they have not been expanded yet and the space is very small. However, the background of the Mermaid King was framed by Wang Fu, and he did not realize the power of the Mermaid King at all. And of the two daughters who are the heirs to the throne, one is ignorant of the world, the other is unruly and domineering, and neither of them looks like the heir. The power struggle is about the king's husband rebelling and his uncle rescuing the king, and the whole thing is also led to a male mermaid. However, it is obviously a setting where women are respected, and real women are excluded. There is also the rescue of the islanders when the island falls. I don't know why it is necessary to highlight how kind the heroine is, because the heroine does not have enough resources to protect everyone. I think it is a bit too holy. I think the villain's reason for refusing was quite reasonable, and the heroine almost retaliated in the end because of lack of supplies. If it hadn't been for good luck in the end, the entire ghost team would have collapsed. I think it's a bit OOC to pin this kind of thing on illusory luck. Since they want to be rescued, they have to lay the groundwork in the early stage and plan the rescue. If they are rescued, it will not affect them at all, instead of letting them hook up with strangers. I thought that the male characters might be more in line with public stereotypes, but then I thought about it again. If these characters were female, wouldn't they lose their original charm? No, they wouldn't. I still hope that there will be more various three-dimensional female characters in the future.
[Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] This book is really, really, really good to read. I read her comic book when I was short of books. It is a female version and it is very good to read. After reading the comic book, I started reading the novel again. I finished reading it for her in two days. I don't understand why a good female protagonist has to be changed to a male in a comic. What does this mean? [Smile][Smile] Fortunately, I got the female version. It is very beautiful, but not many people have read it. I highly recommend everyone to read it. This novel is also very beautiful! ! ! The most important thing is that the author will lay out the foreshadowing hundreds of chapters ago, and she will fill it in. Unlike some authors who just dig out but not post, this author is my god. Not only was it dug, but the filling was also very good! The male protagonist and female protagonist are also very easy to quarrel with, and the emotional line is not obvious, but I like to read this kind of [admiration] [admiration] [sending heart] [sending heart]. This is the real strong female novel! ! ! I really highly recommend it to everyone, it's very, very beautiful! ! ! ! !
From my perspective, which has been a JJ book for more than ten years, this is a rare Tomato novel with excellent writing, plot, and characters. It is also the top female channel of the same type on Tomato. I also read the two books that were very popular. They didn't live up to their reputation, and they became weak in the middle, which made me very disappointed. I didn't expect to find this treasure in Tomato. And I don't agree with some people who say that the heroine's hands are too big. The plot is logical and humane. On the contrary, many of the protagonists in the novels on the Tomato list are anti-human and extremely indifferent, with no arc of humanity at all. They just want to be happy. This kind of character is particularly popular in Tomato [smile]. I won't comment too much on this because it's difficult to comment on.
It's good-looking. The heroine is an invincible pick-up girl. She is the type who kills boys and then kills girls. She has a decisive and calm personality and does not suffer any disadvantages. It can be said that following the first sister will not suffer hardships. Currently, the main protagonist group is four girls and two boys. The division of labor is reasonable. Everyone is a good partner. The three views are very consistent. There is no contradiction. Each has his own excitement and areas of expertise, and no one is holding him back. Regarding the relationship line, the male protagonist first appeared in Chapter 230. It can be said that he is a good cook. He uses delicious food to open the way to marry into a wealthy family. He is also responsible for accounting and other logistical tasks after joining the team. He can be said to be a perfect logistical husband. He does not have much writing and does not steal the scene, but he is very well portrayed. He does not have a daddy feel and has a strong sense of life. You are a great blessing to be with our first sister. There is no progress in their relationship at present, but the male protagonist has already fallen in love with the female protagonist. The first sister is still stupid. I hope the first sister's stupidity can last longer. I love to watch the man tossing and turning, asking for nothing, and I can say that the love line has been very delicious so far. Highly recommended, I stayed up late to finish reading it(✿>◡❛)
The protagonist is strong, the supporting villains are also flesh-and-blood, the characters stand up and are very good-looking, and the ratio of women to men is very satisfactory, with more women than men. Some people are worried about the male protagonist (I don't think he is the male protagonist, the female protagonist is the protagonist, and everyone else is a supporting role). The male spouse of the protagonist designated by this author appears relatively late, it seems that he only appeared in the 200th or 300th chapter. The only male whose appearance is described in a long paragraph is a cook, and his presence is not high, but Some of the plots are: he quickly fell in love with the protagonist, but the protagonist has not yet figured it out. Every time they are alone together, he will be awkward (to put it nicely, it is called self-strategy, to put it badly, it is fantasy), and he is inexplicably possessive of the protagonist. Although he is interrupted every time, the protagonist is not aware of his thoughts. Don't be scared, these clips are very few, because he is a supporting character and doesn't play much. The book is still very interesting overall. Some people are just funny, don't love the male too much, it's just a supporting role, the main character is Lingchu, this book revolves around her alone, not the two of them, every time he has a scene, it's like he is haunted, he licks the male protagonist like crazy, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh male mother, uh [crying with laughter]. The book is quite good, and the protagonist is also very good. It's just the comments that affect the reading. The male protagonist is not important, what is important is that the author has very good control over the plot, and it is interlocking, making you feel that the plot is very reasonable, and you will not forget what was written before. The more you read, the more you like it [Love]
The author, please don't be affected by the comments. It's really good-looking. I think there is nothing wrong with the character of the protagonist. Everyone should have various personalities and ideas. I don't think the differences are big at all. We should still maintain integrity. We are rooted in Miaohong who grew up in China. The education and morality we received should have a bottom line, instead of achieving our own goals without a bottom line, just like forgetting our roots. He only knows how to kill, and the protagonist is not a lunatic who has been criticized since he was a child. There is no need to cater to some people and make changes. I like the ones with group portraits the most, and the main plot is the biggest. Love is my favorite. People have seven emotions and six desires, and it is normal with or without a male protagonist. Moreover, the male protagonist does not play more roles than anyone else. He is just a green leaf. The female protagonist is the strongest. This setting is about love. The male protagonist is not the male protagonist in the actual sense, he is just the emotional line of the female protagonist. I love it so much (*´ω`*). It would be great if the author could write infrastructure articles. It's not about emotions, but the best infrastructure articles. The feeling of focusing on infrastructure is also fun, and it's like collecting materials~(˶╹ꇴ╹˶)~
It's super good-looking, and the girls in the main group are all super nice. It's really cool to see everyone doing their own job and making progress together. In addition, I must praise the author's portrayal of the female villains. The female villains who have appeared so far are all the same, they are all powerful and intelligent (except for the second leader of the Crusaders, I don't remember her name), and the ins and outs of the evil deeds are written very clearly and logically.
It's very good, and it's already tied. When I first read more than 100 chapters, I almost wanted to leave when I read the book review, but I kept reading because I didn't see the highlight. I didn't expect that by the time I reached the tie, there was no unacceptable point. I feel that some of the comments are too harsh. The heroine has her own personal pursuits and also shows some humanistic righteousness. This can completely be the character design of the charming heroine. Isn't a multi-faceted character more interesting than a one-sided and boring character? Moreover, the team battle is also written with love and justice. A small number of elites are no worse than a team with piled heads, and the protagonist group has 180 people. Although there is CP, there is not much content to highlight the relationship between the two, so it can be used as a spice in the article. The plot is also written in a logical order according to the props and characters. Isn't it normal for the villain to be resurrected? Anyway, it is unacceptable to see that there is no such place in Chapter 700. I will save the article and continue to read it in the future.
The author writes the female characters very well, and there are quite a few female highlights, but! I know this is a romance novel, and the heroine will have emotional scenes. The point is that the comment section makes people feel desperate. I don't know which chapter starts, but the new ID comment section that appears in the article is all asking if it is the male protagonist. Every time I open the comment section with interest to see what witty words netizens can say, all the results are asking if it is the male protagonist. Is it the male protagonist? I just saw this kind of comment and had no idea. But almost all the comments in the new ID comment section asked if it was the male protagonist. I had a very uncomfortable feeling. I don't know how to describe it, so much so that the male protagonist has actually appeared now. I saw that the comments section was all happy that the male protagonist finally came out. They even discussed everything about the male protagonist. They were all talking about CP. Saying that the female protagonist attracted the attention of the male protagonist is the beginning of interest. I have an indescribable feeling. Feeling, always in, so uncomfortable [crying], the article is very beautiful [sending my heart], so uncomfortable [crying], the article is very beautiful [sending my heart], so uncomfortable [crying], the article is very beautiful [sending my heart], so uncomfortable [crying], the article is very beautiful [sending my heart] I hope The author is very able to write the heroine's love process in a normal way. The author's article is really good-looking, but the setting of the heroine at the beginning is really good, but as soon as the hero appears, the heroine turns into a treasure-delivery machine, which scares me [crying]
It's good-looking, the heroine has an upright character and is not rude. I am a hoarder, but I will use the resources if I have them. This is not the kind of article that talks about forgetting to set and forget resources. Everyone in the heroine's team gets along very well, especially before the hero comes out. The atmosphere between the heroine and the other three girls is a bit like a college dormitory, and of course the food is very much like a college dormitory. Several people have their own characteristics and have quite distinct personalities. It is worth mentioning that there is no moral kidnapping package in the article. The complaints on the public screen are very interesting. Basically, the previous moral kidnapping will be immediately complained back by the next person. It looks cool, and a lot of the female characters in it are pretty good at swearing [I learned it] There are also a few interesting supporting characters, especially after they join forces at the end, there is a dog-licking character (male). Basically, he is given the configuration of a traditional sadistic heroine, and it is quite bloody. Generally speaking, it is still more female-oriented. But there is one point that I am more concerned about. The author describes the character of the male protagonist as a boy mother. Although this is a common labeling technique in the Internet literature industry, the term boy mother not only narrows the role of motherhood, but also absolves the role of fatherhood. It first forcibly welds the common qualities of gentleness, carefulness, and taking care of others to the identity and gender of women. When a man shows these qualities, instead of praising him as a good and conscientious father, he is given a certificate of "honorary woman and mother". This is tantamount to acquiescence: gentleness and being able to take care of others are only women's obligations. If a man does it, it is an extra bonus, not what he should do.
The author loves the male protagonist very much, and has been laying the groundwork from the beginning, trying every means to make readers accept the male protagonist. Although there is no male protagonist in the early stage, there are constant hints between the lines how good the male protagonist is. After the male protagonist appears, the others become the background. There is only the ambiguity between the two people in the words, and they keep talking about how well matched the two are, how they are a perfect match... I write this mainly for myself and my friends who have the same needs as me, so that I can discuss it with everyone. I don't know why I am being maliciously speculated and criticized. Are there any rules for book reviews? In fact, if you read my reply carefully, you will find that I didn't say anything else but the relationship line issue. I came here specifically to read it from the short play. How could I not like this book in the first place? This book is very enjoyable, and the villain is clearly bad. It makes me angry, but I know that this person is about to learn a lesson, and it will not cause breast nodules at all. The heroine's friends also have distinct personalities and their own characteristics. Each one of them can display their personal abilities in each mission. The boys are also very cute, and the story line is well laid out. I feel like I will have to confront gods in the future. I really like books that challenge gods, like hot-blooded comics. There is also the villain who brutally killed many people for lust (you can't remember the foreign name without reading it), I am looking forward to his line. But! ! Friendship needs to be tested again and again, but love only needs to be finalized, love at first sight, a perfect match, which makes me painful. In my opinion, a strong woman or a woman-oriented woman is not only independent in her career, but also has her own thinking and bottom line when dealing with family, friendship, and romance. Friendship needs to go through countless trials before it becomes valuable, but the romance in the story often skips all filters and surpasses old friends just by falling in love at first sight. Heartbeat is just the beginning, and love should not have its own privileges over all other relationships. Originally, I thought that the male protagonist would be picked out in the difficult selections again and again, with no choice but to be full of expectations, or that he could cook but had weak other abilities, had his own bottom line, struggled to survive in this world, and was saved by the heroine in a panic. Then he began to have low self-esteem and tenderness, and secretly fell in love, praying for the heroine's occasional mercy... Looking back at my comments, I still stick to my point of view, because this is how I feel, and I don't think there is a problem. I don't have any malicious or malicious words. PS: Friendly discussions are welcome. In addition, where does the male protagonist become the background board (not the flash board, which will not pop up from time to time)? Please tell me, and I look forward to your reply💖.
It's very good-looking, the crew is very cooperative, the plot is smooth, and the proportion of emotional lines is okay. But I want to complain, the people in the comment area are so depressed. Every time the female protagonist eats something, once it comes to food and cooking, the slightest detail is nothing. Moreover, this book grows stronger and stronger. If you want to read romance, you can leave it on the left. Every time there is an emotional drama, a bunch of mothers-in-law will start to match each other like crazy. I hope the author will not be affected by the comments and focus on making the main story stronger.
It can be clearly said that the early stage is more exciting than the later stage. The heroine's early stage is a neutral and chaotic setting. She will not offend others unless they attack her. She is careful and bold, and cautious in doing things, but she consciously looks for reliable allies. She also masters the finals of upgrade points very well, with a touch of warmth. In addition to the problems mentioned in the comment area, in the later period, not only the plot nodes and characters gradually began to become more familiar, but also the dense structure also had problems. I don't know if it was because of the introduction of a large number of food elements (note that it was a large number and appeared very frequently, which suddenly changed the overall writing style to a warmer one). Other descriptions also became complicated, and there was a suspicion that the number of words was too high. Some foreshadowings were also very long (it was obviously written foreshadowing. This kind of foreshadowing looks a bit tired when stretched too long). Of course, the most uncomfortable thing is that the author did not master the writing skills well on a major issue. It seems that the heroine has a certain degree of OOC. She has changed from neutral and chaotic to kind and neutral. There is a problem with the logic. In fact, I can understand why the author wrote this way, but the meaning is conveyed deviantly. There are some reasons that I cannot accept. The following content contains spoilers, so read with caution: The heroine has been looking for the scattered elf slates (it is very important to collect 9 pieces. It is suspected to involve the truth of the game, saving the continent, etc.). The first half of the article has been describing how important, rare and valued this slate is by people. Some people even slaughtered the village of Father Sha for it and became desperadoes along the way. If you find it, you must keep it well and decipher it as soon as possible. In the end, under the guidance of Poseidon, an island related to the elves was discovered. The core activation requires elven slates (scattered, and the activation effect is better if one more is placed). The heroine Kuku put all the slates on her body, and then invited the islanders in distress to survive on the elves island. So if these islanders have no direct conflict of interest with the heroine, they are simple and harmless, and the heroine relies on them to become the city lord to farm the island. I can understand, but in the end, it turned out to be a builder. If you don't have enough money, you can issue 300 coupons every day so that players can enter the island (there is a direct interest relationship, it is easy to sneak in people with bad intentions, there is no effective screening method, it is all about robbing, and the reason for releasing players is too weak), and after getting a new slate, they directly let Slowpoke put it into the core (another player, whose character is currently relatively good, but is not the heroine's core crew, has no direct constraints, and the reason why the heroine does not personally release it is that it is a waste of time). I'm just full of questions. Is such an important thing created in the early stage, involving the core of the world's secrets, so ignored? If you don't have enough time, you might as well keep one piece in your own hand to avoid being stolen by bad guys all at once. Moreover, the heroine was cautious in the early stage of planting magic plants and double-checking her character. Her attitude towards the stone slab was a bit too hasty. The above is a big point. The heroine is a bit obviously OOC. I didn't care about other small points that are slightly OOC. It's really a bit uncomfortable to read. In addition to the description problems in the later period, the reading is not as clean and tiring as the early stage. However, considering that the book is not finished yet, the author may still revise it. I will tentatively give it 5 stars.
It's a pretty good book that can be read continuously. It's a group portrait. I really like group portraits. Each character has his or her own characteristics. Accepting the copy of Island of the Dead (Skull Island) made my eyes light up. I became more interested in reading it from here on. Overall, I still recommend it. I hope it won't be unfinished. The only shortcoming is that in the previous chapter 426, there is a character ID that makes me feel very bad. It is called "Curious Baby 731". I don't know if the author is insensitive to this number. I suggest you change it. Apart from this, there are no other flaws. The plot is quite smooth and worth watching.
I go, it's such a cool article, I found a treasure. The heroine's acting style is so right. She can see the danger instantly and strangle it in the cradle. The teammates who gradually joined are also very awesome, and there are also cute skeleton crew members. Hahahaha. One of the very good points is that even the women in the opponent's camp will immediately fight against the heroine when she is tricked by something because of her gender. It's so cool to not have a female rival. The author has worked hard to improve it, and I can't see enough. It's so refreshing. It made me feel so good when I read it. The author will update it soon. It's so well written.
I feel that the heroine is very free and optimistic. I think Golden Finger is the kind of little finger that can be used widely. The supporting characters also have their own highlights, which is more in line with reality. However, I don't think the label of all villains is suitable. At present, the heroine lives a normal life when no one is looking for trouble, and only kills when someone is chasing her. He even helped the players when they were in danger, such as saving the gambler and the mermaid, and letting them go. Even though they held the contract, if they got raped on the way, wouldn't it be wasted money? The mermaid spent more than 10,000 to upgrade for one coin, which didn't feel like it was worth it... Anyway, it's not what I thought. But so far, the plot is still very exciting. I hope the male protagonist will be a good wife and the emotional line will not be too overwhelming. It should be a long article😋
Highly recommended. I picked up the novel very early and often save more than a dozen chapters to read together. However, I still often feel that the author has a lot of skills and it is difficult to find similar meal replacements. The story is also very exciting. Whether it is the adventure decryption or the NPCs encountered, the female protagonist is very cool. From her personality to the equipment and props, she is very distinctive. The male protagonist finally appears in the latest chapter. The key is that he loves cats and cooks delicious food. The protagonist looks at the chef and finally does not have to eat the chaff of the big gold tooth. Hahahaha [Please update]
It's so good and so good. I didn't like emotional scenes in this type of writing, but when I saw the author said there was a male protagonist, I almost ran away. But when I clicked in, I realized that the male protagonist had no influence at all. He was just like a tool. There were many girls in the team, and the plot was very exciting. Several plots made my blood boil, and the more I watched it, the better it became! This is not a lone wolf article, there is a team, if you like group portraits you can close your eyes and rush, it's really beautiful! ! ! I tied it immediately, as if I had reached into the author's draft box and pulled out a few drawings.
Who knows! A super strong female protagonist + a team with many women + a supporting male and mother-type male protagonist, all of these are in line with my preferences perfectly! ! ! Unfortunately, apart from this one, I have almost never seen any articles with this configuration. So let alone saying that this book is pretty well written, even if it is not well written, I will still give five stars for this configuration. Please the author must continue writing [love] [love] [love]
It's amazing to have a score of more than 100,000 words. I thought it was 20,000 to 30,000 words. . . . . 1. A mother who loves to eat boys, but she didn't appear in Chapter 75 2. There are male and female villains, and we basically kill them all, even those who are more careful will be killed if they have the chance (PS for some people: the female protagonist looks like the male protagonist in the male video? No, she is the female protagonist and can be powerful. Is this a catch? This is a characteristic) 3. The characters all have their own little plots and will not abuse the protagonist. There is nothing contradictory about this book. If it suddenly appears, there is no one else who wants to read the literature of The Beautiful Wife. At present, the male protagonist in Chapter 230 of the regional merger is suspected to appear.
Already equaled, it's very beautiful and novel, and has no major flaws. The heroine does things neatly and will protect her own interests first. But I thought there would only be ghost crew members and not other crew members. Hahahaha. Recently I only want to watch the lone wolf and not the team, so I'm destined to see you again [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
So far, it's pretty good-looking. The female protagonist is strong, fast-paced and has no virginity. She doesn't suffer, and there's no particularly irritating plot. Each supporting character has her own life, and the female life is very three-dimensional. I'm a person who prefers to watch the Lone Ranger survive, and this team is acceptable. Everyone has their shining points and uses, and the storyline is also very full and well-founded. However, I haven't seen the male protagonist appear until almost 200 chapters in. Then I'll see if I want to change the star. After all, CP is a drawback in survival stories. My Fake, more than 440 pictures, suddenly saved more than 1⃣️0,000 people and directly reduced the little rich woman to poverty. It makes me so uncomfortable. In fact, I looked at the author's thoughts, and I can understand that it is to upgrade the island and become the island owner, but I feel that it is too far-fetched to suddenly save so many people. In just a few pictures, all the causes and consequences are covered, and it feels a little OOC. Then there is nothing wrong with the male protagonist. There is no hero who suddenly comes to save the beauty and irritates my eyes. The two female villains are indeed a bit stereotyped like other book reviews I have read before, but the image of the sister is quite plump. In fact, the female supporting characters who appeared at the beginning are all very plump. It is not said that the male characters are added and the book is unfinished. Overall, it is just a small fault, but it is still very interesting.
It's a very good book. It's very refreshing. It didn't make the girl feel wronged. It tied the book in three days. Some of the characters jumping up and down were also successfully dealt with without any problems. The storyline was arranged very logically. I like the author's writing of team battles and boss battles where the friends worked together to cooperate with each other. It was a very hearty cooperation and every skill was not wasted. The author loves the characters he writes very much. Each character has a distinctive personality and flesh and blood. The most impressive battles are the battles: the battle against the King of Spades, the battle against the Holy Light, the battle against the City Lord, and the rescue of the Mermaid Emperor. Hehe, our baby Lingchu will soon have his own big kingdom. Looking forward to looking forward to Being very good means being very good and will not accept slander. The writing skills are already very good, the combat skills are also very interesting, the world view is also very good, the group portraits in the battle scenes are also very well drawn, every character is present and exerting force, and the language skills are also very good. All in all, it's very good. Come on, the White Tower, the Pink Truck, and the Infinite Flow that I have seen are all popular. From the beginning to the end of this book, except for the period when the battle in Guangming City was settled without cutting off the roots, not finishing the last blow, and the situation was not decided yet, there is no other missing point. I think there are some complaints in the comments. Also, regarding the comments about the male protagonist in the comment section, I don't accept or agree with it. There is no doubt that the heroine is the best, the heroine is the strongest, the heroine team is undoubtedly the most harmonious, and the heroine's baby has the most resources and the most skills. The male protagonist is just a co-ordinator, as long as the two-person skill is easy to use! This is a big idea. Regarding feelings, the male protagonist did not express it. The daughter's career is the most important thing and she has no clue. The male protagonist walks in a companion style. The author's introduction states that there is a male protagonist, but he appears late (only appeared in more than 200 chapters). The female protagonist's early combat power and equipment skills are comparable, and the female protagonist's military power is top-notch. These are not written incorrectly. I will not accept other comments to complain about the low score. Damn it. My treasure novel was given a low score just like this. Angry angry angry
So beautiful, my God, my tits are so beautiful The writing, plot, rhythm, and characterization are all very good [crying][crying] It touches people's hearts! It's been a long time since I've seen such a refreshing novel, and I tied it in one breath. And the most worrying thing about the male protagonist is also OK. The female protagonist is an absolute strong and absolute leader. First three female members joined the female protagonist's team and then the male protagonist joined. It was very natural. Even readers began to expect that the male protagonist would join. 🤤🤤🤤🤤 Provide the female protagonist with delicious food and drink, which is very comfortable and enjoyable to watch.