[No heroine] [Behind the scenes] [Fabrication] [Script] [Group portrait]
This is a boring world, filled with boring lives, boring trajectories, and people being teased by boring fates.
This world divided by five continents was supposed to be developing steadily in the direction of science and technology as always. Suddenly one day, it was changed.
When Yin Bai traveled through time and possessed the power of creation and distortion, while feeling that the world was boring, he understood that the future was destined to be interesting!
More scripts:
[The secret of Luo Shangshu]
Linlang's House in Heaven
[The Seventh Domain of the Dark Vortex]
[Extreme Justice: The Order of the Godhead Organization]
refute
[The power that crushes time—Clavel's Stone]
......
(The order of appearance of each script may be different from the above, please read it patiently)
Reader comments
In fact, the writing is quite good. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of energy on this book. Many plots and characters are well described. There is a bit of writing skills, but there are still some shortcomings. First, there is no clear main line and goal. Many good-looking novels will write out the main line and goal. Without writing, you will not know what story the author wants to tell. It took me a long time to understand what was being said. Second, the setting The definition is not specific enough, and many details are not known, such as the details of super powers, etc. It can be seen that the author has a big goal. He wants to write a long article and may reveal the secret later. However, because the previous article is so conclusive that people can't understand what it is about. In the end, the title and introduction of the book are not attractive enough and are very popular. In fact, a good book does not need marketing images because readers will not pay too much attention to it. There is no detailed description of the protagonist's growth process, which makes it less satisfying.
In addition, the author described some supporting characters very well. I liked the creation of some supporting characters, but many of them did not continue to be explored in depth. It doesn't feel like a group portrait, just multiple protagonists (I think). If it were a group portrait, the minor characters could be described in more detail.
Also, I don't know if it's because I listened to the book too quickly [or something], but there are always characters that haven't appeared before that interact with the protagonist, but they haven't been introduced before, as if they appeared suddenly.
Please give me a small evaluation [currently in progress]
In fact, the writing is quite good. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of energy on this book. Many plots and characters are well described. There is a bit of writing skills, but there are still some shortcomings. First, there is no clear main line and goal. Many good-looking novels will write out the main line and goal. Without writing, you will not know what story the author wants to tell. It took me a long time to understand what was being said. Second, the setting The definition is not specific enough, and many details are not known, such as the details of super powers, etc. It can be seen that the author has a big goal. He wants to write a long article and may reveal the secret later. However, because the previous article is so conclusive that people can't understand what it is about. In the end, the title and introduction of the book are not attractive enough and are very popular. In fact, a good book does not need marketing images because readers will not pay too much attention to it. There is no detailed description of the protagonist's growth process, which makes it less satisfying. In addition, the author described some supporting characters very well. I liked the creation of some supporting characters, but many of them did not continue to be explored in depth. It doesn't feel like a group portrait, just multiple protagonists (I think). If it were a group portrait, the minor characters could be described in more detail. Also, I don't know if it's because I listened to the book too quickly [or something], but there are always characters that haven't appeared before that interact with the protagonist, but they haven't been introduced before, as if they appeared suddenly. Please give me a small evaluation [currently in progress]
A group portrait surrounding one person? ? ?
😊Super pretty