[Original God + Beng Tie + Multiple Heroines + Invincibility]
A highly myopic young man decided to break up with MiHoYo because the plot of Beng Tie 3.3 Was too harsh.
Yu Qing: "Bushgomen? Shouldn't it be traveling through Bengtie? Why are you in Genshin Impact?"
Wendy: "Don't look at his social anxiety. If you keep in contact with him for a long time, he will be more difficult to deal with than anyone else. But then again, do you still have the wine? (⌯︎¤̴̶̷̀ω¤̴̶̷́)✧︎"
Zhongli: "Yu Xiaoyou, he's very capable, and he's not too generous to me. If you have a commission, you can ask him. As long as you have enough money, he will do anything."
Shadow: "Interesting people."
Nasida: "Ah Qing, he seems to have a hard time refusing requests from children."
Walter Young: "He's... Well, quite a character, but if he doesn't say some weird things to me..."
Tibao: "If you can, please don't take away Xiaoyu's glasses, he will go crazy."
Yu Qing: "Family! I, Lao Qing, will come again!"
PS: This is the first time the author writes a novel, so it may not meet the standards of readers, and may be a bit OOC. There may be a plot that breaks the third story later, please be gentle, thank you ⸜(๑'ᵕ'๑)⸝⋆*
Reader comments
I really can't give it five stars. The author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes. Even if he does, it still feels awkward to watch. The author also doesn't know how to write epileptic stories. The part about joining the train is really embarrassing and the twist is too big. If you're a normal person, I'd always complain about it. I've done a lot of this kind of stuff, but what you wrote earlier was pretty good, so I didn't complain about it. In fact, the cutscenes earlier weren't very good either. That emotional scene was really not good. Well, who died? March shed tears directly. This is what makes me confused. This is a big drawback, but the biggest drawback is the part where you join the train [cover your face][cover your face][cover your face][cover your face]
I really can't give it five stars. The author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes. Even if he does, it still feels awkward to watch. The author also doesn't know how to write epileptic stories. The part about joining the train is really embarrassing and the twist is too big. If you're a normal person, I'd always complain about it. I've done a lot of this kind of stuff, but what you wrote earlier was pretty good, so I didn't complain about it. In fact, the cutscenes earlier weren't very good either. That emotional scene was really not good. Well, who died? March shed tears directly. This is what makes me confused. This is a big drawback, but the biggest drawback is the part where you join the train [cover your face][cover your face][cover your face][cover your face]
Can you update it soon [crazy]