Defective Product? the Ones I Raise Are All Palace-Level Goddesses!

So far, it's pretty good and comfortable to watch. It's not like a traditional novel that suddenly creates a powerful enemy. But the second goddess is a bit wrong. First of all, my understanding of the protagonist is that of a savior, which is dominant. However, the protagonist is trying his best to capture Ye Tanhua, which feels like a dog licking. Secondly, Ye Tanhua's spiritual support is not the protagonist but her first coach, Uncle Li. Although Although they are similar to the image of a father-daughter relationship, I always feel something is not right. It is like the protagonist in a beast-control novel contracts a very powerful pet, but the best relationship with this pet is not the protagonist but its breeder since childhood. There is a very uneasy feeling. If the protagonist's opponent cheats and catches Uncle Li and makes Ye betray the protagonist, I feel that Ye will probably choose Uncle Li [laughs awkwardly].

It's very interesting to watch, it pursues dreams passionately and breaks prejudices. Although I haven't watched Jockey Girl, some people have commented that it is similar. Do you think the description is accurate? This book is different from the machine girls in that there is no driver and all they need is their own efforts. I still hope to optimize the chapters about Ye Tanhua's mental shackles. It's not that I find it baffling, but I still feel a little worried about the character. Although I can guess that the protagonist will buy it together with the coach, I still hope to write some signs or hints in advance.

This can be ranked first among the similar ones I have seen. It really feels like a traditional competitive game, and everyone will love the story of an inferior horse's counterattack. I still want to digress. I haven't watched many sports games. In the past few years, the only one I've been paying attention to is KPL. My favorite team is E Star, and I have watched them decline from a giant to the present. While reading, I really kept comparing and hoping that they would rise again. (This seems to be seriously off topic [thinking]) A quick update from the author, this book is really interesting. It is much better than those jiniangwen that puts old wine in new bottles.

The early stage is too depressing, and the male protagonist's methods may be bizarre, which may cause dissatisfaction among some readers in the middle and later stages. However, the male protagonist's ability is unparalleled and he has indeed supported a family. He is the fulcrum of this book's group portrait. He is not a useless character like "Yu Xiaogang". Moreover, the characters are all very good, and the plot is handled smoothly, but it is not recommended to watch it with a blind eye towards the characters. There are many foreshadowings and a strong sense of atmosphere, but the summary of the previous seasons was relatively long, and the number of words gradually decreased in the later seasons. All in all, the flaws do not affect the overall story, but there are patches at the end. It is suitable for readers who like counterattacks, inspirational and long-form novel works.

It's past 6 o'clock. I think it's still too low. This novel should be telling a story, a story about a "miracle". Whether it's the protagonist or the supporting character, they all have their own ideological core, rather than being pure tools. He can show the characters' emotions very well, which is what many novels don't have. Although the plot is relatively classical and old-fashioned, the writing is still online. After all, emotions have been a difficult thing to describe since ancient times. It's not about words or rhythm, but about the heart. It's strange. I read more than 70 reviews and none of them are lower than three stars, but the rating is only over 6 points. I don't understand what Tomato's rating system is? Anyway, I've read many novels with this phenomenon

This is a mecha competition novel written based on the setting of Jockey Girl. The second gray-haired monster is obviously based on the setting of Oguri Hat. But the male protagonist in the article is not so much the protagonist as he is just a tool to keep the club running. As the owner of the club, the protagonist is only responsible for discovering talents and harvesting rice, and training is also done by the trainers in the club. In terms of setting, it is basically impossible to have some kind of emotional development with the Valkyrie. Ps: If you like reading about passionate sports, you can read it. If you were tricked by the title into thinking you have a harem, you can leave.

It originates from "My Machine Girl is World Class", but goes beyond "My Machine Girl is World Class". As we all know, "My Machine Girl is World Class" can be regarded as the originator of this genre. This book inherits most of the advantages of the former. At the same time, the in-depth creation of supporting characters is eye-catching. The theme exploration and character creation surpass "My Robot Girl is World Class". If I have to be picky, it's probably because the plot is a bit more classic, because after "My Machine Girl Is World Class" was banned, many imitative themes appeared. Readers' threshold for similar plots has increased, and it is easy to guess the general plot direction later, and their interest may decrease relatively. But overall, this is still an excellent web article. Four-star level, five-star encouragement.

Do you know that the character of the horse racing girl is so easy to use? [Eating Melon] It is rare for women's competitive writing to not have a female protagonist. The current main problem is that there are too few group portraits and opponents are portrayed. There are only two or three who can see the future. I don't understand why Lin Yuehua and Su Linxue have to use the same retirement method, just to highlight the pressure of injuries and pave the way for Jin Yu? The main character group is okay, and it seems that I can still write it for a long time. Once this group is finished, there will be a new generation to write about. It's a very interesting book. If you like watching women fight, you can read it [laughing evilly]

The writing style in the front is a bit green, and there are even some direct references, but the writing style in the back is much better. Then, the front can be said to be idealistic, and the back feels realist. The front is ideal and beautiful, everyone is working hard, and everything is getting better. Personally, the retirement plot of more than 600 chapters is too realistic, and the retirement of the two goddesses is uncomfortable to watch. Generally speaking, it requires patience to read the book from the front, and the reader needs to be God's perspective at the back (with a rationality that is unemotional and overrides emotion). Otherwise, if you read it with emotion, the imperfection will contrast with reality and make the reader very uncomfortable. However, the author's writing style has been greatly improved in the later period, and the characters are well shaped. Although it is unrealistic, judging from the description, there is no possibility of the two goddesses coming back, but they still hope to come back later, which is quite consistent with the theme of the book.

The protagonist is reborn in E-Sports CEO Sigma TV. The plot focuses on fighting and growth. The group portraits will have some difficulty in remembering specific characters. However, so far, there is no problem of unrecognizable character silhouettes due to repeated urea. Although it is not to my taste, it is still a good book as a book [Chigua]

It is one of the most inspirational novels I have ever read, and it is also the best group drama in my opinion. I think it can be adapted into an anime. When reading each chapter, a fragment will be played in my mind. If this book is finished, I really hope that there will be an anime. The descriptions of many characters are great. Each character has his own story, his own experience and personality, as well as his own will and transformation. I hope the author writes better and better, and the most important thing is to write more!

It's very interesting. Each character has their own background and inner monologue. When writing battles, they all have reasons and beliefs that they cannot lose. In short, the author writes that they are flesh and blood and have their own lives. It's worth reading, but the author is so slow to update!

As a bookworm for ten years, I think the writing is quite good. The group behind it is a bit too crowded and a bit confusing, but there is no way to avoid this, because only in this way can there be content and a feeling, come on

[Working on draft] The first 50 chapters have good sense, but they are quite picky. Mecha Girl contains a lot of data, and I heard from others that the presence of the little star in the back is very low and there are few games. I don't know if I really want to continue reading. Temporarily five stars

Overall it's pretty good. The stories of these characters so far are touching. The poisonous points that emerged mainly focused on the current rebellious performance of recruiting Ye Tanhua and Rhodes, which was not a big problem.

So far it looks good. This is a book for everyone to grow up, not a mindless book. I would like to give a suggestion to the author. There should be less chicken soup in the book, otherwise it will look like a chicken soup article. Ha ha.

The writing is very good. Although it sometimes feels a little awkward, it feels good once you get into it. I hope it is more complicated and not written in a formulaic way. For example, there will be more things instead of just this content.

It's a pretty good group portrait novel, and the author has a good grasp of the rhythm and emotions. It's just that the description of the game in the early stage was a bit cumbersome and not concise and clear enough. It's a bit confusing to read, but you'll understand it if you read more later.

I originally thought this would be a book that will be updated quickly. After all, there is not even a single person on the gift list whose gift is worth more than 100. But after reading the plot, except for the character design at the beginning, which is very earthy, the main plot is really well written, both the logic and the atmosphere are just right. It is an article worth looking forward to and watching! What can I say about the taste of this book? It is close to reality and is refreshing. However, the logic in some places may not be popular with people, especially in the chapter about accepting Ye Tanhua. Some people may not like the feeling that their employees are bound to others. I reiterate that although the title of this book is the name of a harem novel, it is purely a brush on the harem novel. At least I have seen that there is almost no emotional drama of the protagonist. The protagonist is a career batch, so people who don't like harems can feel free to read it.

I really haven't read many sports-themed books. This one surprised me a lot. The characters are very vivid. Compared with the racing book with the same theme, there is no emotional drama, but it is more focused on competition. I started reading it at Chapter 900. Since Tomato came, this is the first book to catch up with the big army. The author will update it soon!

The story of Ye Tanhua joining the team in the early stage was very toxic, but overall it was written very well. A very standard sports and competition article. Although the protagonist has a golden finger, he still focuses on discovering potential, and there is almost no "plus points" part. The overall plot rhythm is very well grasped, and each character has their highlight moments and their own troubles, which is impressive. The author's writing style was a little immature in the early stages, but he has become more and more mature in the future, and I hope he will continue to work hard.

If you are here to read cool articles, you can go to the upper right corner. This book can be said to describe the growth curve of Xingyun (the club owned by the protagonist in the book) in detail. So there is no such thing as a smooth journey, it is more about the unexpected variables caused by accidents. If you like this kind of spiral, you can try it.

A very good story, very impressive character settings, and a very exciting plot. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

There is no exaggerated plot, but the most touching story is told in the plainest words. The emotions of the characters touch people's hearts, and there is full sincerity between the lines. It is a novel that becomes more profound the more you read it.

It's well written, and the details are well described. This kind of fighting scenes and plot are very well written. I will probably have to worry more about the expansion of the team and team battles in the future. I have also thought about how to describe 5V5 team battles before. This is really difficult. Looking forward to more exciting chapters from the author

The author's writing is really good, the character's characterization, the character's way of thinking, behavior, and various philosophies. Before I saw the latest one, I read other books, and then I read the latest chapter in one go. Lu Lin is really charming! This is not the traditional wisdom and invincible promotion stream. Why is the score lower than expected? I watched it with another account on iPad, so maybe I haven't watched it on mobile for a long time.

Group portraits of passionate competition. Standard start plus plot. Goldfinger is purely auxiliary, but a bit of a stretch. There's nothing wrong with it, it's just that the pace is a bit slow. Recommended by Shu Huang.

High-quality products in the niche circuit Similar to Jockey Girl, books on this theme do not require decisiveness, but in order to write about daily life in a detailed way without being greasy or exaggerated, it requires a very deep foundation. Except that there are a bit too many characters, which feels a bit overwhelming, the key characters are all well established.

Although the horse racing is very suitable, the characters of Zhan Ji Zeshou are also very suitable for this theme. Also, their unique ultimate move, I hope it will be a great point

Good book, really good book, maybe I haven't read enough of it. This is the first time I saw this type of book, and I really feel good about it. I have no words to describe a good book, but it's really a good book, but it's just a little lacking.