He comes first in five consecutive examinations, is personally named the third-ranked successful candidate by the emperor, then trades his brush for a sword and rides north to battle. This is the story of a versatile scholar-warrior restoring the glory of the Jia clan, and of a talented and handsome “flower-seeking” scholar saving the beauties of the Red Chamber world.
Qin Keqing: “Husband, maybe we should bring Xiangling along after all.”
Lin Daiyu: “Brother Yu isn’t a good person. It’s still daytime, so why is your hand going down my collar?”
Li Wan: “Lan, you must respect your Uncle Yu just as you respect your own father, understand?”
Wang Xifeng: “You’re always teasing people. How can you put that thing in your mouth?”
Enemy: “Damn you! Are you really the third-ranked candidate in the imperial examinations, and not the top martial arts candidate?”
Jia Yu: “Don’t you think being third-ranked and skilled in martial arts go together perfectly? Get to know Little Jia, the third-ranked scholar!”
It's pretty good. So far, the only little poisonous point is where the No. 1 Pick becomes the No. 3 Flower. Of course, I'm not saying it's not possible. It's protection. I understand what you mean. It's just to be direct and quick in the description. What are the concerns of the two parties and what will be the result? Let's talk about it quickly. After that, let's go to the next topic. Then, don't have too many psychological descriptions of the No. 1 Pick among the protagonist and the protagonist. These two points in the article are not very well done and seem a bit poisonous. After getting through those two chapters, it is generally good. Quick update [Blow kiss] In addition, now I have a bit of psychological shadow about the chapter name in the novel called "Security", and my heart skips a beat when I see this name.
The writing style is plain and there is nothing to complain about yet. Read more.
Well, it looks pretty good so far, and the writing is relatively comfortable to read. The tasks, words and deeds in it are more in line with the original work, unlike those novice Red Mansions novels. Overall great!
I think it's pretty good😊, come on.